Topic: poetry for the uninvited
jeena's photo
Sat 11/13/21 07:45 PM
Invite, no...no invite
Look? No don't look!
And the time goes of the rail
While the indecision swirls,
the head shake come easy
it is as if, shaking the head
indecision will go away...
But it does not go away for real,
just the thought disappears and
another day comes and goes
a response shows, simple...so simple
walking down the street
a bench with an advise:
"trust yourself!
Expect nothing from others!
Looking inside yourself!
Rummage your being,
Follow the intuition
Adventure is on the air!
Eureka! You got it!


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Sat 11/13/21 11:52 PM
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JulieABush's photo
Sun 11/14/21 03:42 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

jeena's photo
Sun 11/14/21 05:35 AM
Good morning Julie! Things are going really well and I pray you are having a joyfull time. Blessings!

JulieABush's photo
Sun 11/14/21 06:17 AM
Thank you Jenna and you too:thumbsup: !

Nick's photo
Sun 11/14/21 07:31 AM
Wonderful poem. You write well.:dove:

jeena's photo
Sun 11/14/21 03:36 PM
Hi Nick: I love writing...my grandmother, barely could read, but she wrote poetry. I was very impressed how she could get the words to fit the thoughts and deliver a beautiful punch line. I mentally recorded it. Imitation was the next step.
Well I am painting a wall. Stop to have a break. Checked out the site..There you are my brother...Gracias for your words. Blessings!

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Sun 11/14/21 11:06 PM
:slight_smile:NICE:slight_smile: