Topic: uninvited outside the box
jeena's photo
Sat 11/13/21 07:58 PM
You are too old!
Full of odd thoughts
You are too boxed, squared
Full of unintended invitations
How did you ended up here?
Outfoxed, outboxed, outstanded
head hoarded by dreams of friendship,
laughs, dancing, great meals in the park
while the breeze brings the fragrance
"Can you feel the scent of roses?"
No it is lavender flowers!
Look at the garden below!
The breeze makes me wonder
What the garden of Eden was like...
We are all so old
in face of all our relations!
Let Adam and Eve show up between you and me!




no photo
Sat 11/13/21 11:51 PM
N:slight_smile:I:slight_smile:C:slight_smile:E

Nick's photo
Sun 11/14/21 07:20 AM
Great job! Is this your first contribution to the forum Jeena?

JulieABush's photo
Sun 11/14/21 08:16 AM
Another nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .