Topic: Fears
myanimalcracker's photo
Sun 07/20/08 01:49 PM
If only I could hang
your fears from a rope
swinging gently, lifeless
against the dead of tonight.

Fears banished, doubts gone
free to live, free
to feel with a smile
carefully curled up on your mouth.

Sky blue days, evenings
from a postcard, you would live
abolishing all apprehensions
of a future with me. I alone

with you. Forever, we’d be
perfect, perfectly happy, completely
You could love me,
if you killed your fears.

itry's photo
Sun 07/20/08 01:53 PM
:wink: Thats what I was trying to tell a girl I recently split withbrokenheart .....probably not as nicely put:smile:

anonymous326's photo
Sun 07/20/08 01:58 PM
very moving.... good write:wink:

myanimalcracker's photo
Sun 07/20/08 02:18 PM
Thank you itry & anon! flowers flowers

anonymous326's photo
Sun 07/20/08 02:22 PM

Thank you itry & anon! flowers flowers

anonymous326's photo
Sun 07/20/08 02:22 PM
np hun :smile:


PoeticMaster's photo
Sun 07/20/08 03:31 PM
well stated this brings to light simular experiences and feelings for many :smile: