Topic: Artistic Leeway
PoeticMaster's photo
Mon 07/21/08 11:27 AM
in the half light of silence
I closed my unseeing eyes
as mud became rock and underneath
laid our story, lain in thrift,
tough as an axe handle
and fragile as daylight.

descent into the inevitable invisible,
where the memory of you lingers,
suspended from above
like a piece of art --

you can find me
in the dreamer’s lounge,
on my knotted knees,
where your stone is cold --

and when love decides to find me
and I open my eyes


let it be you.

LAMom's photo
Mon 07/21/08 11:31 AM
Beautiful flowerforyou

d4tc's photo
Mon 07/21/08 01:45 PM
Great Write. happy drinker

PoeticMaster's photo
Mon 07/21/08 08:31 PM

Great Write. happy drinker


why thank you both :smile: