We have a group formed that takes poetry requests. I know this isn't the poetry spot, but thought I'd put it in here for anyone who wishes they could find the right words and can't.

http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/98535

I'm not going to monitor this thread, so I put the link up above this.

Take Care

Thank you all so very much. True story, this one. I'm in awe of all the compliments and sis you did a great job on yours as well. I have peace in my heart and hope you do too. Thank you



~Den

As I have so many times, I put together words that had meaning and rhymed

A general subject she gave to me, nothing detailed, just write about the USMC

I was happy with the end result, but had no idea how much it would help to mend

She who requested the poem put down the day he was born and the day he ended

When I read her words and saw the dates, I closed my eyes and felt myself shake

Then overwhelmed eyes gave way and I cried like a baby as I felt the heart ache

I felt such tremendous feelings for her loss, at such a young age, at the foot of the cross

It truly WAS my honor to have honored her brother, whom she said would be proud

Having no idea of what the core of the subject was, I found myself at a complete loss

Then for a longer amount of time, I released myself to tears and cried aloud

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*Bows before her* FANTASTIC!!! I LOVED IT

Please lock the topic at http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/89743

An idea I'm still going forward with, just gonna have some friends join me instead of me being the only write. PLEASE do not delete it, just lock it. Thanks so much for your time and service


~Den

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I am going to close this thread- before you drop to the
floor, it's not going away, but will be expanded. I
have a thought in mind that I think many will like. All
of you whom have spent time to read and reply truly have my gratitude and it has been an honor to write your request. I
promise you it wont take more than 3 or 4 days to have
things back in flow.

With honor, respect and love for you all,

~Den

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It actually brought tears to my eyes when I saw the Oct 6, 2001 part. I'm sorry for your loss, and I'm so proud that your brother would sacrifice his life for all us who sit behind this monitor. The poem was my honor, and I rededicate this one to

Corporal Christopher E "Lurch" Reger

Ty, ty


~Den

Amen to that my friend, Amen to that. Kk, catch ya later


~Den
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My "Challenge me" page is located at
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/89743
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My Showcase: (Same poems, only without comments)
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/92167
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FEEEEEEEEEEED me, Semore!

:P Go read some of my work, I need some of that dreadful feedback :P


~Den

LOL, I'll take that as a 1 whether that's what you meant or not



~Den

My respect goes deep and I dedicate this to all of the leather necks out there serving us proudly!

The USMC

The few, the proud, that is the line we will most often see
But this organization was founded long ago, in 1775, The Marines
Never will it be just a single Marine; they are taught they are ALL a team
You fight one, you will fight them all, they hold above all honor, pride and creed
Significant losses have been suffered by their kind for hundreds of years
Marines know the risk at hand; but still they refuse to show their tears
Each Marine holds a bond to each other Marine, a bond like no other
There are very few I’d trust with my life, except this band of brothers
I stand there and see old glory flying high and proud up in the sky
I stand at attention, raise my arm to salute and whisper “Semper Fi”

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The USMC

The few, the proud, that is the line we will most often see
But this organization was founded long ago, in 1775, The Marines
Never will it be just a single Marine; they are taught they are ALL a team
You fight one, you will fight them all, they hold above all honor, pride and creed
Significant losses have been suffered by their kind for hundreds of years
Marines know the risk at hand; but still they refuse to show their tears
Each Marine holds a bond to each other Marine, a bond like no other
There are very few I’d trust with my life, except this band of brothers
I stand there and see old glory flying high and proud up in the sky
I stand at attention, raise my arm to salute and whisper “Semper Fi”

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Awwwww, thank you so very much, I appreciate your kindness


~Den

Ty hon!

~Den

Per your request, Madam:

The Phone and the Computer

I went to the store and I had to choose between new computer parts or a phone
I figured, hell I've got at least 20 feet of line, I'll get the upgrade, then upgrade the phone in time
So happily I made my out of the store and on my way I went
I got home, installed my brand new three gig of RAM
Man that sucker blazed, I sat back and yelled "Bam!"
I was talking online at the speed of light, new faces were abound
I found a girl named sex4ubaby6969, and then I heard the sound
The phone rang over and over again; I got to it just in time
Running back to sex4ubaby6969, my feet flew out from under me and I landed right on my spine.
By the time I'd finished my call, she'd moved on to another, leaving my alone
Today, believe you me, I'll be back at the store to trade my RAM for a new phone


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The Phone and the Computer

I went to the store and I had to choose between new computer parts or a phone
I figured, hell I've got at least 20 feet of line, I'll get the upgrade, then upgrade the phone in time
So happily I made my out of the store and on my way I went
I got home, installed my brand new three gig of RAM
Man that sucker blazed, I sat back and yelled "Bam!"
I was talking online at the speed of light, new faces were abound
I found a girl named sex4ubaby6969, and then I heard the sound
The phone rang over and over again; I got to it just in time
Running back to sex4ubaby6969, my feet flew out from under me and I landed right on my spine.
By the time I'd finished my call, she'd moved on to another, leaving my alone
Today, believe you me, I'll be back at the store to trade my RAM for a new phone


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You're very welcome


~Den

TY!

kk, I will do my very best to get that one out today. About to go put enough meds in my body to kill a horse so that should work


~Den