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Ramblings
I feel the walls closing in; my breath is all but disappeared Millions of thoughts and worries run through my brain, nothing seems clear Fate taunts me with different choices, different paths, which will be the end, which will last As soon as the path seems clear, the skies darken and clarity is lost- then with a blast Fate awakens me again only to give enough of a hint of the right direction I should seek While not manly in some circles, I let out a scream, I hold my ears, and I drop to my knees The pressure, I’m going to explode or implode, I don’t even know my name All of life blends together, everything becomes allusive, and all becomes the same Just one day, one day I want respect and to see all paths, the translucent answers made aware I reach out my hand, reaching for help, into utter darkness, with eyes wide open I stare Things I ask are so simple, so clear, God help me attain my wishes remove my fears Before all the pressure builds up inside me and like a powder keg I ignite My mind seems banished from thought, I seek the path of wisdom to bring me true life Careening back and forth with no map, no help, in circles I walk alone here in the dark Forever to be lost or will the right path be revealed before me, before it’s too late, where is my spark? © Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author. |
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The Years
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No tears here!
 nice write my friend ~D |
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∞- Poetry By Request -∞
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 OH and PSSST You guys can challenge each other too your know, writer to writer  Just in case ya'll didn't realize that! ~D |
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∞- Poetry By Request -∞
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LMAO,
Excellent writes, hat's off to the both of you. That little thing they call a smile creased my face when I read the both of them. Good job!  ~Den |
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∞- Poetry By Request -∞
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So much wonder to wake up to... Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm I am feeling comfy again  Good! I'll be writing some this week, just had- challenge for anyone out there: THE WEEKEND FROM  HELL    ~Den |
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∞- Poetry By Request -∞
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(((((Mom)))))) Lights thought lost, yet sooo profound. The beauty of ships, believed run aground. Truly just a way to stop and ponder. Then awaken to all the wonder!!!! Perty! ~Den |
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∞- Poetry By Request -∞
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Ok ya'all, here goes. My Request was the following title... I think that it was supposed to be one poem, so, I hope that ya'all enjoy it, Here ya'are Den! Fresh New Love, The Spark, The Energy There's just something about a Fresh New Love, The way it touches, the way it feels, with it's soft new fingers... The Spark is the way that it runs through the body... The Energy, the way that it lingers... A Fresh New Love grows everyday, The way it sees, the way it thinks, like an eager young lover.... The Spark is the energy you feel growing inside, The Enegery, is what makes the hair hover... Oh but a Fresh New Love, it does get old, The way it was, the way it had been, liked a tired old thing... The Spark is the fire you would set to it now, The Energy, now holds a sting. Fresh New Love... You may ask, does it die? The way it pines... the way it cries, like it just wants to go... But The Spark, Is the Lightning, That Fresh New Love holds Deep... And The Energy, is what makes it grow... Real Fresh New Love, has a different face, The way it hears... The way it sees, like you always just met... The Spark, is the idea, that old love... is always new... And The Energy, is the strongest feeling, that I've ever felt yet... With Equescent thoughts... FroznChild  Beautifully done!!! EXCELLENT WORK my frined! Thank you! ~Den |
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Trust & Faith come Hand In Hand Words so wise,, so hard to understand Pain & Sorrow Replaced with Glass How to get my Recognition Back.... Blind in Life my Eyes did See Horror of your fake simpathy Torn apart left to die Upon this Mountain in the Sky... A Journal kept in good faith Stories told to this book Sincerity in every word Pose the question,, Silence Linger.... Mirror of past, present & future Resembling fate & distruction Wonder why i can not see Where is my Visibiity... Dream I may Dream I might Light the path,,, Speak to me Laughter takes over,, Wisdom sets in Upon this night it came to me..... Trust in me,, Yes I shall Faith to see,, what others fail Sincerity lives within my Realm Crenditials live in my Shell... Spirits lift this darken cloud Visions seen within my now Trust & Faith have always been Sincerity,,,, lives within Credentials within my sins...... Amazing......Thank you |
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At least there's plenty of room to wander around
*RUNS AND DUCKS* ~Den |
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Thank all you guys, YOU were my motivation to find a resolution to the issue, I appreciate you all more than even *I* (HOWS THAT FOR EGO???) can put into words. Love ya all!
~Den |
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∞- Poetry By Request -∞
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I am proud to announce that FroznChild has also decided to volunteer and can also be emailed requests! Glad to have you, FC
~Den |
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∞- Poetry By Request -∞
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Bravo Den!!! Nice resolution!!! Hope it works for everyone! |
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Wench,
Nice Job!!! ~D |
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Seeing others posts
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I prefer the term "investigating" thank you
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Seeing others posts
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Is there a way to see what others have posted without clicking on the number of posts? I.E. You don't know of any posts they have but you would like to read them or how to find them. Any advice appreciated
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∞- Poetry By Request -∞
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~D |
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∞- Poetry By Request -∞
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This is a place where anyone can request a poem be written around a word, subject, phrase, or any other way you wish. You may also offer challenges.
If you don't mind who fulfills the request to the poem, then just post it here and anyone can respond to your request. ANYONE can write their view on the request or even write a poem if you wish. ANYONE can comment. If you have a specific writer in mind that you would like to tackle it, please email them personally with your request. Then please post their poem with your comment for others to enjoy. The following are a list of writers that I have been informed are willing to take requests via email: Sitngin, Silerwaya, LaMom, MsTeddyBear2u, TxsGal1333, KC003, Differentkindofwench, Darkowl1, BonnyMiss, Pkh, Granny2four, ShyKBear If others are interested, please inform me via email and I will request that a mod add your name to this list. I hope this is a something with which we can all live. ~Den |
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Let me be clear so this doesn't get deleted. I am not saying I'm leaving the site, just that I don't care to write my poetry here anymore. To say I was leaving the site would get this thread deleted......
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Edited by
Sitngrin
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Thu 03/27/08 12:52 PM
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In the sweltering, relentless heat, a glare reflects off of my red-cross shirt
So many starving children surround me; my soul is filled with hurt I offer all that I have to them, food, my heart, my soul, my word Their cries for help, just a helping hand, none will be unheard While passing out the food and giving positive words of advice A group of rebels ride up to our station, to my throat one holds a knife He says to me you think you can give out food because you’re good? Yes whispers from my mouth, then my head is covered with a hood So many had applied for this job, and so many had been turned away One needed to speak the language, understand the culture and how they pray Without a moment’s hesitation, with a machete my life would end that day The rebels continued to kill, to devastate and maim Until there were no more volunteers that had the talent, they all had been slain Little by little the quality of the volunteers decreased Many of those who needed help so bad would end up being deceased Eventually the rebels won out, because they those with talent they killed And millions died of starvation and raids because they destroyed the skilled *Frame this one, it is most likely to be my last poem I post here* © Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author. |
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JSH Friends... for you...
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Very nice write, my friend, very nice write
~Den |
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