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| Topic: §|tⁿ☻ Today, I Cried | |
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As I have so many times, I put together words that had meaning and rhymed
A general subject she gave to me, nothing detailed, just write about the USMC I was happy with the end result, but had no idea how much it would help to mend She who requested the poem put down the day he was born and the day he ended When I read her words and saw the dates, I closed my eyes and felt myself shake Then overwhelmed eyes gave way and I cried like a baby as I felt the heart ache I felt such tremendous feelings for her loss, at such a young age, at the foot of the cross It truly WAS my honor to have honored her brother, whom she said would be proud Having no idea of what the core of the subject was, I found myself at a complete loss Then for a longer amount of time, I released myself to tears and cried aloud © Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author. |
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 I love it |
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An even better tribute
than words can enshroud. |
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very moving.
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I would have put my arms around u while u cried....
and..I would have cried to... this was a awsome write... and Lurches copy and pasted the one u wrote on ur other thread to make sure I had it.. USMC sisterhood... u have brought ppl together... A wonderful thing Thank u Den...  
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it was a wonderful write
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Edited by
lurchs_sister
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Wed 03/26/08 05:39 PM
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Love to you Den!
Today I sat here thinking about my brother How our love was like no other This man stood so straight and tall Until one night he did fall They found him dead shot through the heart Of my life he is still apart I asked today for a poem to be wrote Then when I read it my heart did float The man of pen is sweet and dear We all know him we met him here For you Den I have great respect I'm so glad you did reflect Was not my intention to make you cry I did so myself till my eyes ran dry You too have been a fighting man You gave your service to protect this land I love you my friend heart and soul With you and family this country is whole. |
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Love to you Den! Today I sat here thinking about my brother How our love was like no other This man stood so straight and tall Until one night he did fall They found him dead shot through the heart Of my life he is still apart I asked today for a poem to be wrote Then when I read it my heart did float The man of pen is sweet and dear We all know him we met him here For you Den I have great respect I'm so glad you did reflect Was not my intention to make you cry I did so myself till my eyes ran dry You too have been a fighting man You gave your service to protect this land I love you my friend heart and soul With you and family this country is whole. Thank you all so very much. True story, this one. I'm in awe of all the compliments and sis you did a great job on yours as well. I have peace in my heart and hope you do too. Thank you ~Den |
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yes both simply beautifu
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