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Mon 03/24/08 04:29 PM

bigsmile I like turtlesbigsmile


Ok, it's posted on the page happy


drinker MM


~Den

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Mon 03/24/08 04:28 PM
Edited by Sitngrin on Mon 03/24/08 04:33 PM
The Turtle

Though appearing cumbersome and slow
We lay our eggs inside a sandy hole
When we are attacked by a beast from hell
We quickly pull in our feet, our head and our tail
Though graceful we may not seem on land
Put us in water and you will understand
That we will be one of the lasts to survive
Though it might be boring to hang with roaches, at least we'll be alive


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Mon 03/24/08 04:15 PM
If you're wondering what the " §|tⁿ☻ FSH, hit me " post is about, it is about you providing a word, sentence or phrase and me writing a poem around it. Haven't been stumped yet (I survived SUICIDAL SQUIRRELS, among others, THANKS JC :tongue:). So if you've been wondering and were afraid to look, jump in and throw me a challenge, we'll all have fun with.


~Den

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Mon 03/24/08 04:05 PM
Making you smile is my delight! flowerforyou flowerforyou


~Den

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Mon 03/24/08 02:58 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou


~Den

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Mon 03/24/08 02:25 PM
Awwww, Thank you Pam, we all love you too! flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou


~D

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Mon 03/24/08 09:34 AM
Great writes, KC. Sorry it took so long to put a comment, but I had a lot of back reading to do. Keep up the good work, nice to see you back


~Den

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Mon 03/24/08 09:30 AM
Agreed. Great write, FS. Very impressive!

drinker
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Mon 03/24/08 09:28 AM
Den said to tell you, great flow, great story, great Write. Please leave a message after the beep
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou


~D

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Mon 03/24/08 09:16 AM

aww Den you hit home with that,really good write,that's what I do best go back in my shell thank you my friend.And When I reach out my story to.
Just Tell me why??wow that was wonderful and so true so many why's I'll never understand either,but they were all amazing writes I hope you find your answers,you deserve the best my friend.Thank you very muchflowerforyou flowerforyou



(((PAM))) flowerforyou Thank you so much for the nice compliments and I'm really glad you enjoyed the other two as well. They weren't request, just my own inspiration hehe. Thanks again

~Den

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Sun 03/23/08 11:17 PM
JUST TELL ME WHY??

Why do I find that when I get close to someone, they seem to want to flee
It’s like they start to see that I am truly what I say I am and not a fantasy
I love with passion and treat with respect the ladies I give my heart
Seems many are interested at first, just to gouge out my heart as we depart
The answer to the question is YES, I am WHO and WHAT I say I am, the waters you need not test
The games of trying to figure if my words are true have done nothing but depress
Between what *I * have to offer, not playing stupid ass online games
It’s such a shame that ONE hasn’t found me and realized what they have gained
A man of my age has knowledge, grew up with manners and gives his love eternally
Why are there so many stupid people out there, who are just too blind to see
Maybe you need to be treated like trash s’more before you know the difference
Between having someone with high qualities is a rare find you threw overboard at Sea
And YES, I write this to all of your have taken a piece of my sweet, sweet heart
And replaced it with a bitter taste to add me to your little chart
I’m not a toy, my heart runs deep and if you are too blind or stupid to see
Then you deserve what you get, instead of one whose love they will impart
So just keep playing your games, adding your tick marks & going down the list
In the end you will get yours, realize your mistake an figure out what you have missed



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Sun 03/23/08 11:17 PM
JUST TELL ME WHY??

Why do I find that when I get close to someone, they seem to want to flee
It’s like they start to see that I am truly what I say I am and not a fantasy
I love with passion and treat with respect the ladies I give my heart
Seems many are interested at first, just to gouge out my heart as we depart
The answer to the question is YES, I am WHO and WHAT I say I am, the waters you need not test
The games of trying to figure if my words are true have done nothing but depress
Between what *I * have to offer, not playing stupid ass online games
It’s such a shame that ONE hasn’t found me and realized what they have gained
A man of my age has knowledge, grew up with manners and gives his love eternally
Why are there so many stupid people out there, who are just too blind to see
Maybe you need to be treated like trash s’more before you know the difference
Between having someone with high qualities is a rare find you threw overboard at Sea
And YES, I write this to all of your have taken a piece of my sweet, sweet heart
And replaced it with a bitter taste to add me to your little chart
I’m not a toy, my heart runs deep and if you are too blind or stupid to see
Then you deserve what you get, instead of one whose love they will impart
So just keep playing your games, adding your tick marks & going down the list
In the end you will get yours, realize your mistake an figure out what you have missed



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Sun 03/23/08 10:41 PM
I really like good flow and you did a nice job of maintaining it. flowerforyou for you. Nice Write


~Den

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Sun 03/23/08 10:25 PM
Edited by Sitngrin on Sun 03/23/08 10:27 PM
When I Reach Out to You

You say anytime you need me, just feel free to call
When I do, my bad day gets multiplied by two
I try to talk to you; you’re too busy watching TV
How can I talk to you when just you say "huh?" to me?
I’m just as well off talking straight to the wall
Seems none of my problems have you enthralled
Just a quick word of hope, A hug through the phone
To help make it through one more day, without feeling alone


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Sun 03/23/08 10:25 PM
When I Reach Out to You

You say anytime you need me, just feel free to call
When I do, my bad day gets multiplied by two
I try to talk to you; you’re too busy watching TV
How can I talk to you when you say huh to me?
I’m just as well off talking to the wall
Seems none of my problems have you enthralled
Just a quick word of hope, A hug through the phone
To help make it through one more day, without feeling alone


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Sun 03/23/08 09:58 PM
Never went anywhere, just couldn't find the corner in this round room from which to escape :wink:

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Sun 03/23/08 09:56 PM
For you flowerforyou Pam flowerforyou , I hope this helps you out along the way



No More

I sit daily at my desk, wasting my thoughts on days already gone by
Occasionally I’ll get the strength and I’ll refuse the thought and it feels so free to fly
But before long, I’m pulled back down; into this reality I call hell
You haunt my mind and I put you up on a pedestal, thinking only of happy times
I’ve gotten so good at hiding my emotions, my friends and even family can’t tell
That you lurk in the shadows of my memories, get the hell out of my head and take this grime
You have leeched enough from me for a lifetime and I’ve gained nothing but this shell
This shell I have surrounded myself with, to keep from thinking about YOU
How many times have I said aloud “I’m sick of you, tired of you making me blue”
Until now, I have talked a good game, but it has been a façade
But know this, you had your chance and I am now finished saying that you’re gone
I have my friends, my backbone, my support, my pain for you is now forgone

GOODBYE



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Sun 03/23/08 09:55 PM
No More

I sit daily at my desk, wasting my thoughts on days already gone by
Occasionally I’ll get the strength and I’ll refuse the thought and it feels so free to fly
But before long, I’m pulled back down; into this reality I call hell
You haunt my mind and I put you up on a pedestal, thinking only of happy times
I’ve gotten so good at hiding my emotions, my friends and even family can’t tell
That you lurk in the shadows of my memories, get the hell out of my head and take this grime
You have leeched enough from me for a lifetime and I’ve gained nothing but this shell
This shell I have surrounded myself with, to keep from thinking about YOU
How many times have I said aloud “I’m sick of you, tired of you making me blue”
Until now, I have talked a good game, but it has been a façade
But know this, you had your chance and I am now finished saying that you’re gone
I have my friends, my backbone, my support, my pain for you is now forgone

GOODBYE


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Sun 03/23/08 09:53 PM
Thank you so very much, I appreciate you!

flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Sun 03/23/08 08:56 PM
Ok, my friends. Trying to keep myself from writing poetry so that I may write a short story did not pan out. I know when the timing is correct, I will give you one to enjoy, but I'm just more on the poetic side right now. Story will follow someday, just not this day or the next few.

drinker {{SO, basically what I am saying is that I am accepting challenges again, so feel free to whip one on me!}}drinker

I owe Pam a request, but after that, you all can just line them up and I will try to keep caught up. Hope everyone had a great holiday and ate as much I did.

~D

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