Topic: Silently Screaming...
MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 12/18/07 01:36 PM
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The thoughts that race the mind.
The memories that are keep in tack.
The secrets held inside.
Open the mouth- no words come out.
Silently silently Screaming...

Pain, dread, misery.
Wondering why, still need a cry.
Fever inside, burning eternally on.
Consumed with guilt, yet with pride.
Silently silently Screaming...

Only one. Perhaps there are tons.
Weight of emense porportions.
Anchoring down, watch don't drown.
Looking for oars. Falls staight ahead.
Silently silently Screaming...

Dreams in the head. Nightmerishly played.
Looking around. Wondering who else.
Bandaides seen all over.
Never ending booboo stream.
Silently silently Screaming...

Act out, Write, Talk, Sing.
Find the cords, make a map.
Weave a new way for to say.
Abuses we suffer from day to day.
Silently silently screaming...

Open the mouth even though words may not come out-
Silently silently scream...
Silence broken,
The scream is heard, you need'nt utter a single word.
Silently silently Scream...
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Susan (aka:Teddy) 12-18-07

Unsane's photo
Tue 12/18/07 01:37 PM
susan, it is?

great write. you've got some moves, its true.

i bet you dance well.


wildsideof35's photo
Tue 12/18/07 01:54 PM
Well put and very true!!!!

SandyLee's photo
Tue 12/18/07 02:01 PM
Good work! I have a poem with the same title! he he...Don't worry, it's very different from yours!

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 12/18/07 02:01 PM
great write indeedbigsmile

you go girldrinker

Differentkindofwench's photo
Tue 12/18/07 02:22 PM
Yes, yup, uh-huh, yessss!!!

stunt_614's photo
Tue 12/18/07 02:28 PM
This was good, had some flow to it "rhyming lol" nice

sealove42's photo
Tue 12/18/07 04:35 PM
The mental picture of everything we don't say when were hurt. Nice job on conveying the front of what we can't say... Super...
Sometimes I wonder how days go by without someone knowing that inside ... whaaaaaaa.... Nice Job

ArtGurl's photo
Tue 12/18/07 04:36 PM
Whoa sistah!!!! flowerforyou

Wolfeyes58's photo
Tue 12/18/07 07:49 PM
That was very good Susan...I've screamed in my time...but not anymore...very good indeed.

no photo
Tue 12/18/07 08:01 PM
I silently scream more times than I care to admit...excellent piece MzTeddyflowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Tue 12/18/07 08:08 PM
very nice

sometims our screams are not heard even if not so silently delivered

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LAMom's photo
Tue 12/18/07 08:35 PM
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lacileo1's photo
Tue 12/18/07 08:40 PM
Excellent
The games we play in our mind
To cover the pain
Trying to hide it from ourselves
Only to see the pain through our eyes
Would give us such relief


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