Topic: heaven and a ghost
stunt_614's photo
Tue 12/18/07 03:01 PM

the day has come when ur time is done
and you leave this world behind
noone has lived to tell what the afterlife gives
is it just all in your mind?

the sight goes first and no longer can you look upon your childs face
then goes the feeling yet you still feel out of place
the hearing next and no longer can you hear their cries
what comes next is deaths suprise

down comes the light that your supposed to go to
but your family is here so how can you
you take a second glance but walk away
you have to finish what you didnt get to that day

far away your family has left you behind
and you are stuck here biding your time

then comes time for you to leave this forsaken place behind
its time that the wheel of destiny begins to unwind

you take a step into the light and feel at last releived
no longer are you in pain and no longer are you decieved



not really sure what i wanted to ppl to get from this one, i guess make sure u live life to its fullst everyday, and someday we will all make this walk. ima try writing somethen more on a happy note lol next, all mine seem to be a little on the dark side lol

later
J

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 12/18/07 03:05 PM
There is nothing wrong with the dark side it is reality besides now death to some is life again.flowerforyou bigsmile

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 12/18/07 03:06 PM
Go into the light CarolAnn...
laugh Sorry could'nt help joking...

Good write about getting older! Many times the body fails
us and so do people... drinker drinker

no photo
Tue 12/18/07 03:10 PM
Yes, Take a step into the light. No more illness. No more pain. No longer can you get deceived.... How True!!!!:heart: Judy

Differentkindofwench's photo
Tue 12/18/07 03:15 PM
I liked this one! Yeah, I'm one of those "and the beat goes on, la-de-da-de-da, la-de-da-de-de", people. Switch forms, but continue the adventure............

wildsideof35's photo
Tue 12/18/07 03:32 PM
Yes we all have to meet the Maker someday and what a wonderful place it will be...no pain, no sorrow....how wonderful!!!:heart:

LAMom's photo
Tue 12/18/07 09:44 PM
Death is an awaking of the soul,, The journey continues ,,,,,, for all eternity,,,

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