Hot Blooded
Foreigner |
|
|
|
Topic:
Pick one... - part 4
|
|
Hi River,
Warm with icecream definitely. Tea or Coffee? |
|
|
|
Rachel the Ravishing Raccoon.
|
|
|
|
To be on Vacation in a nice place by the Ocean.
|
|
|
|
Topic:
Pick one... - part 4
|
|
I have never tried either, but it sounds like Great fun!
Hot Chocolate with or without marshmallows? |
|
|
|
I liked this poem.
I might tweak the last line a little bit, to have it flow a little better with the rest of the poem. Overall, it's a Very good poem. |
|
|
|
Lovely poem
|
|
|
|
Heart Ache
|
|
|
|
End
|
|
|
|
Mike the Merry Monkey
|
|
|
|
Topic:
RATE MY PROFILE PLEASE!
|
|
You are Wonderful Maggie.
Best of Luck! |
|
|
|
Topic:
RATE MY PROFILE PLEASE!
|
|
Hi Maggie,
Your Welcome! I see you've made additional changes , and I'm glad you completed that last line about calling you :-) It looks Terrific! |
|
|
|
First aid
|
|
|
|
Zip
|
|
|
|
Heidi the hyena
|
|
|
|
Inside out
|
|
|
|
Topic:
Change-One-Letter - part 19
|
|
Pact
|
|
|
|
Novel
|
|
|
|
Topic:
RATE MY PROFILE PLEASE!
|
|
Hi Maggie,
It looks so much better! I'm glad you changed the content in the A little about me: section. It gives off a much more positive energy and message, glad you changed it from all caps too. I noticed you started off fine in the Interests: section, but then went to all caps. I was a little confused about the last line of it, asking them to call you, though. Your profile states you didn't want to give out your phone number for safety reasons. Overall, it looks much better. |
|
|
|
Hi Dee and River :-)
Eternal light |
|
|