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Thu 08/15/19 04:20 PM
Hot Blooded
Foreigner

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Thu 08/15/19 02:36 PM
Hi River:slight_smile:,
Warm with icecream definitely.

Tea or Coffee?

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Thu 08/15/19 02:33 PM
Rachel the Ravishing Raccoon.

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Thu 08/15/19 02:27 PM
To be on Vacation in a nice place by the Ocean.

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Thu 08/15/19 02:21 PM
I have never tried either, but it sounds like Great fun!

Hot Chocolate with or without marshmallows?

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Thu 08/15/19 02:00 PM
I liked this poem.
I might tweak the last line a little bit, to have it flow a little better with the rest of the poem.
Overall, it's a Very good poem.

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Thu 08/15/19 12:02 PM
Lovely poem

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Thu 08/15/19 10:15 AM
Heart Ache

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Thu 08/15/19 10:12 AM
End

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Thu 08/15/19 10:08 AM
Mike the Merry Monkey

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Thu 08/15/19 09:59 AM
You are Wonderful Maggie.
Best of Luck! :slight_smile:

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Thu 08/15/19 06:42 AM
Hi Maggie,
Your Welcome!
I see you've made additional changes , and I'm glad you completed that last line about calling you :-)
It looks Terrific!

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Thu 08/15/19 06:14 AM
First aid

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Thu 08/15/19 06:12 AM
Zip

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Thu 08/15/19 06:06 AM
Heidi the hyena

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Wed 08/14/19 11:34 PM
Inside out

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Wed 08/14/19 11:27 PM
Pact

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Wed 08/14/19 11:21 PM
Novel

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Wed 08/14/19 07:38 PM
Hi Maggie,
It looks so much better!
I'm glad you changed the content in the A little about me: section. It gives off a much more positive energy and message, glad you changed it from all caps too.

I noticed you started off fine in the Interests: section, but then went to all caps.

I was a little confused about the last line of it, asking them to call you, though. Your profile states you didn't want to give out your phone number for safety reasons.
Overall, it looks much better.

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Wed 08/14/19 06:41 PM
Hi Dee and River :-)
Eternal light