Topic: (even though I will die alone, I dream) Tee | |
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(even though I will die alone, I dream)
As I breathe my last And go back to dust I will look at her with lust My final stage cast, Ask “is death a must” Life flashing fast Well lived and just Reminiscing our past The conquered quest Once iron turned rust In her arms I will rest The one I trust Even though I will die alone….. I dream, pray and fast |
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I liked this poem.
I might tweak the last line a little bit, to have it flow a little better with the rest of the poem. Overall, it's a Very good poem. |
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Nice poem .
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