Topic:
The Inviting Kiss
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Now why don't I get invitations to concerts like this. Magnificent kc!! good question ![]() ![]() ![]() s |
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Topic:
The Inviting Kiss
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Great I will think about it and submit one to you
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Topic:
The Inviting Kiss
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oh my, kc???????? what are you trying to do make me start smoking again? wow that was hot ![]() ![]() ![]() what has gotten in to you lately? sure have been all over the place dont take that wrong i love what you have been up to stef thank you stef ![]() welcome kc just waiting to see what is next...... do you take request?? lol stef |
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Topic:
The Inviting Kiss
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kc
nice one ![]() |
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Topic:
The Inviting Kiss
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oh my, kc????????
what are you trying to do make me start smoking again? wow that was hot ![]() ![]() ![]() what has gotten in to you lately? sure have been all over the place dont take that wrong i love what you have been up to stef |
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Topic:
The Distance In Between
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kc this one could be a song too
if you are going to put "tonight" to music maybe you should try it and see..... stef |
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Topic:
airport daze (complete)
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lately you have written so many good things.
i do hope you keep it going. seeing your soul has been a joy and a pleasure for us. still waiting for you to tell me who "metaphically speaking is for" ![]() stef |
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Topic:
Tonight
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Topic:
Tonight
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with a heart that’s seen its share of sadness
and a million stories to tell i need something to halt all this madness `cause alone- i’m not doing so well i’m getting good at the art of deception lie to myself to get through only a few more hours to go now just to make it- one more night without you tonight i’m gonna be lonely yeah tonight it’s gonna be cold at night time passes so slowly but it has no problem making me old Wonderful verses just amazing..... I don't know how you could improve this one. Well you can't sooooooo good stef |
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Topic:
Tonight
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kc youwriting songs now???
no j/k good words here D |
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Topic:
Tonight
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Maybe you should take their advice. kc
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still waiting for you to tell me who this is for
i am sure others would like to know too stef |
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Topic:
Protective Walls
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oh that is so good
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Topic:
Tonight
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this one does sing out
good job stef |
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who is that for??????? stef stef i would never tell sorry.... come on we won't tell..... ![]() ![]() stef |
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who is that for???????
stef |
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Kc...wow...i'm speechless on these...i thought how could he adjust the first with the alternative, and then i read the second...i see why you kept both versions, two different poems no matter how similar they are...both are well done. true they are diff. is it too late to change my mind? lol stef donn't worry kc i am still trying to get her to make up her mind about me....after 2 yrs.....lol ![]() |
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Topic:
As If
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Kc...wow...i'm speechless on these...i thought how could he adjust the first with the alternative, and then i read the second...i see why you kept both versions, two different poems no matter how similar they are...both are well done. true they are diff. is it too late to change my mind? lol stef |
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ok i thnik i like the first way better
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