sitting alone at my piano
trying to finish this song
but there’s no melody
to the words i can’t see
what am doing so wrong

my fingers trip on the keys now,
and all i can think of is you
the words are hidden somewhere-
in the pain and despair
behind a window that hasn’t a view

and tonight i’m gonna be lonely
oh tonight i’m gonna be scared
when I wake-
i’ll be the only - survivor
in a world that’s no longer there

with a heart that’s seen its share of sadness
and a million stories to tell
i need something to halt all this madness
`cause alone- i’m not doing so well

i’m getting good at the art of deception
lie to myself to get through
only a few more hours to go now
just to make it-
one more night without you

tonight i’m gonna be lonely
yeah tonight it’s gonna be cold
at night time passes so slowly
but it has no problem making me old

tonight is gonna be lonely
tonight is gonna be sad
tonight i’ll feed off of memories
tonight that’s all that i have


Kc08

Good write!

Ha! Finally someone who knows my pain. Well done, friend. Here's wishing you some inspiration.

Ry

thank you dear

thank you
sorry for your pain

Thru the lies of deception we live and thrive,, Reminding our selves that life is awesome,, Yet feeling a pain deep within,, I know that pain,,, I also know that within thier is hope,,, Your words have given me a glimpse into your amazing soul,, I believe in my heart you my friend will find the calm in your heart and the touch of grace and beauty within the soul,,,

Remember when in life you feel down reach out your hand,,,, for on the other side you will find a loving hand to guide you home,,

Hugs to you
Love
Mom

Oh that's so sad, but good job.
Were you drinking when you wrote that? Lol. Just kidding.

Oh that's so sad, but good job.
Were you drinking when you wrote that? Lol. Just kidding.




lol... no i am not drinking
i had to have something to counter the last one i wrote
(metaphorically speaking) they can’t all have good messages
people would think there is something wrong with me

thanks mom

you

I really intended my comment as a joke, i hope no offense was taken. It does sound like something a country artist would compose, not that i have nothing against country music,it's actually one of my favorite types of music. I could definetly feel the pain. Good job

i've been through enough pain in my life, so i can relate

none taken
country music is the only kind i do not listen to though...lol

oh really! any favorites?

KC, what a wonderful song, can't wait to hear the music to go with, if ever done and you post it to youtube, be sure to send me the link....

Hug's Noden

noden
unfortunately i can’t write or play music
i can get ¾ of the way through “moonlight sonata”
but it ends there

Really, well what I saw, was a good place to start....

Hey I'm with Noden on this one would love to hear it would make a great song indeed

Nicely done!

thanks you two
if you know anyone that wants to put it to music i am for sale
we all have a price

Well it could possibly be so, maybe check in with Songstress, wolfeyes, lovely gal, and see what they say....just an idea...