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Sun 12/05/10 12:32 PM

no doubt it is good, interpretation, matters most to the pen it comes from. JMHO flowerforyou


I enjoy the post-structuralist view that the author is dead

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Sun 12/05/10 10:42 AM
Edited by WallyWest on Sun 12/05/10 10:44 AM
"Palpitating Rush"

Author's Note: Allow me to implode those binaries by muttering sweet nothings.



There is this place where dreams just stop beating--

its this open field that's filled with snow.

The sun there shines like a reaper meeting

that lass who said dreams were meant for now.



Yet I rose my glass to a toast of cheer,

ignoring the last lust crafted there,

muttering screams that she could not hear.

She cracked the lights as she flicked her hair.



Blind sights that muted our outlandish words,

flaring the mundane formalities

forth into your wanton shaped light herds,

led by Job into reality.

Let us remove that disunity,

and remain in this fabricated sea.

-The Jesse J. R. Jennings (12-5-2010)


I am looking for some feedback for interpretations of this. Is it any good?

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Sun 12/05/10 10:04 AM
Author's Note: They tell me signs are just a way of cleaning up vomit.



Memories amplified by illusions

strung accidentally with a plan

that Freud crafted to give one contusions

absorbed ociddentally by man.



Dreams reworked in this panopt, awakened

by the vice that virtue meant to keep--

Revels that may be a means from an end

don't matter, we round them with a sleep.



Tell me what stuff you have made your dreams of.

Deconstruct your lives. Bring out your dead.

Feed me the only word crafted for love,

drop poems as the furs you want to shed.

Go, and shatter these scattered memories--

Let the world play all their right melodies.



-The Jesse J. R. Jennings (12-2-2010)

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Tue 11/09/10 11:10 PM
Not sure how to analyze this-- seems to be more filled with confusion, then a stereotypical morose tone.

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Tue 11/09/10 11:09 PM
Strong visual imagery ^,^ I wish my imagery was as good. Nice last couple of lines.

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Tue 11/09/10 11:05 PM
Once upon a time I was at a local swing dancing shin dig, I do it once in every blue moon.

Lovely Lass: I really like your scarf. It's cute.
Me: I really like your face. It's cute.

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Tue 11/09/10 11:03 PM
Try throwing yourself out their and talking to strangers. You cannot meet a mermaid unless you swim a little, after all.

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Tue 11/09/10 10:59 PM
"Be true to thine self."
-Polonius, "Hamlet"

"Trying your hardest is a talent in itself." (not verbatim, I believe, sorry)
-Alphonse Elric, "Full Metal Alchemist: Brotherhood"

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Tue 11/09/10 10:56 PM


Heh, I scarcely know what I am looking for?


If you don't know what you're looking for, how are others going to be able to figure it out?


Well, when you look into someone's eyes, it is as if you are viewing the very windows to their soul. And when you stare into their eyes long enough, you may just see eternity. In short, I feel as if I will know it when I see her.

Metalwing & the_one_for_u: Funny jokes ^_^

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Tue 11/09/10 08:09 PM
Everyone is a philosopher, for everyone has some sort of philosophical belief/knowledge/system for their evaluation of life. If this is the case, then a philosopher could turn a dream into a reality.

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Tue 11/09/10 08:06 PM
Author's Note: Something about ill wishes just scream those traditional three words of trolls.

Let me play Russian roulette with this
fully loaded noose wrapped around absurd
kicked out the chair just to sink to bliss,
but the tight knot snaps because of his words.

Words so clear that they taste quite muffled
like frozen lights dripping with dark fire.
Much like lit wrists taking life so shuffled,
yet these hymns still belong to liars.

Light up this truth beyond the fragmented
misconceptions that always must be
proven by general logic made dead.
Chain common sense to let it just flee.
Marshes bursting with the relative day
that is just a joke all slaughtered Grey.

-The Jesse J. R. Jennings (4-22-10)

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Tue 11/09/10 07:11 PM


I dunno'. I am just that pacifist who forgives under all circumstances. Perhaps it remains naive, but its what I strive for.


Wally, we don't have enough people like you.


There have to be 3 or 4 like me, at least.

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Tue 11/09/10 07:07 PM
Princess Leia (spelling?): I love you.
Han Solo: I know.

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Tue 11/09/10 07:05 PM

huh ....ummm I forget.....Luis...can you remember???

Joel???..hahaha anyone from the other place way back when dinosaurs roamed the earth remember???

I know the jess bit...short for jezebel...which my dad called me as a kid, when i was being wild..


What's a "Jezebel?" Someone told me it was synonymous with a prostitute, but I feel like there are shenanigans with that explanation.

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Tue 11/09/10 07:03 PM

A+
Really a cool dude
Small Cute& Sexy

Hope We Become Friends
Hugs


I am small? >,<

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Tue 11/09/10 10:25 AM
RKISIT: I love "Heart of Darkness" and "Apocalypse Now!" ^,^

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Tue 11/09/10 10:15 AM
"Love is a many splendid thing. Love lifts us up where we belong. All you need is love."
-Moulin Rouge

"Beer is proof that God loves us."
-Benjamin Franklin

"Its not how much you see someone that matters, its how much you think of them."
-Kingdom Hearts II (That is not the quote verbatim, sorry)

"Thundercats! Ho!"
-Lion-o

"There is no spoon."
-The Matrix

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Tue 11/09/10 09:46 AM
I managed to get a 90.5 on my Literary Criticism exam, when I forgot half of the header and works cited page. I thought I was going to fail that exam for sure. ^,^ Maybe I will get into a half-decent graduate school after all.

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Tue 11/09/10 09:38 AM
My life is the violent pursuit of truth, beauty, & love with a large, bloody bludgeon.

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Tue 11/09/10 09:36 AM
Heh, I scarcely know what I am looking for?

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