such a sad sweet write very good and so sad, love the thousand tears ,beautiful skp

darn if i don't stop reading your poems I am going to quit writing mine , lol, that was one of the prettiest poems I have ever read , so profound os heart warming such a sad sweet remmebrance of the past and all the love in it , such writng hope you publish them, sharon

beautiful poem and beautifully written

this was a really good poem and had I lot of truth in it, drinking is never the solution ,always brings more problems. bit people do tend to forget that, the problem is always there in the worning when they wake up , drinking doesn't cure it just enhances it, very well written poem and truthful in what you are telling your friend, good write

oh sweet babe, you can be free , you can make what you want of this sad world if you would , don't let defeat win, get out find a hobby (besides drinking) do something good for someone or fine a course
in collage, anything to keep your mind busy , then you will find your self free and need no monkey on your back to guide you , cause with drink ,you will never be free, good luck to you babe

very deep emotional piece, thought provoking, birth only to die, this is the place we're to survive, only to die, so many poems could be written just from this piece, I liked it

a very heart rendering prayer so full of emotions and so deep. way to go!

Such a sweet beautiful write , couldn't take my eyes from it till I read all of this, such emotions and heart felt warmth in it and the lucky person it is wrote to , is ppprobably smileing widly when he reads it , good work.

VERT HEARTFELT WRITE AND SO BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN , ALMOST TRIED TO CRITIQUE IT LOL. love the way you put the emotions in it, and just hang in there your day will come, as i am sure everyone on here hope's veery nice poem,

OH,THIS YEARNING ,BURNING

MY HEART IS AFIRE,

I WANT YOU TO FILL ME

WITH YOUR WILD DESIRES

MOANING AND PURRING,

YOU REACH ME SO DEEP

NEVER EVER AT NIGHT

DO YOU LET ME SLEEP.

BREAST ARE AFLAME

WITH MORNINGS FIRE

AS YOU LIT ME UP

WITH PASSION'S DESIRE.

WE REACH TWO PEAKS

TOGETHER WE FLAME,

NEVER A MOMENT OF SILENCE

WE BOTH ARE TO BLAME.


SKP.HOPE YOU LIKE THIS ONE

thank you all and thank you for welcomong me, and if they take medium on here I will add a few of my piece's of erotica , then, but still milder then iwrite,(don't want the wrong kind of attention lol)Sharon Kay

thank you all for reading my poem , so happy you liked it, it is a mild one as I do a lot of medium erotica poetry, but didn't figure on here they would allow it ,thus this poem rw56

lol we're still babe's in the woods , life is just starting to get better, at 56 I am having the most fun I ever have had. they say life starts at forty , me i think it starts at 50 and gets better every year
whoopee

I was always told by my mpther , when we were in for a whipping and ran from her , she would hoolar "yougo ahead an run , youalways have to come home" man was she right, and woo did we catch it.

another good one

oh so funny

I lie awake wondering why my eyes are crying
my soul is aching, my passion flaring, I sigh,
you were here last night as I lay here,
you gave me pleasure untold I know you cared.

You sent me to a heavenly bliss
passion unfolded in the morning's mist.
Heat arose from within my body's shell
as you sent me to heaven and saved me from hell.

I lie here wondering why you left,
why leave me here in this hidden rift.
You took my love and left me alone ,
wanting you needing you here at home.

You left and escaped to another's arms,
you deny the pleasure of me for another's charms.
YOU break my heart more then once you see
now for the last time you are leaving me .

cute but in a few weeks he will already be a biggun,
hey theres you a name BIG GUNNER, ause thats what he would be doing out in the fields , carry a big gu for them ole coyotes, they're very smart and friendly dogs, but be ready to spend some money as they eat a lot Imean a lot, beautiful dogs , this one will be gorgeous, and probably veryvery friendly being mixed with a labador. good pick.or maybe a name like SIR WALTER THE GOLDEN, LOL