Topic: The Guardian (revised) | |
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Edited by
kc0003
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Sat 02/27/10 05:04 PM
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they laid her down to what was now,
her final resting place she put flowers `round the fresh turned ground with dignity and with grace he took her little hand in his as they walked away and headed towards the unknown life that waited on this day tried to hide his worry he tried to hide his fear but as they buckled up she saw it his eyes were filled with tears so she climbed into his lap put her arms around his head softly whispered in his ear and this is what she said... I know it’s hard that mommy’s gone but we have each other here if you look into my eyes you’ll see, mommy’s always near so on those stormy nights, when there’s no peace to find if you need a guardian angel you can borrow mine now five years have gone he struggles on she’s growing way too fast this little girl’s his only world and his mirror to the past he still holds those little hands though she turned twelve today it’s hard for him to see it, but that’s what the candles say he carried her down the hall left a kiss upon her head took the dreaded walk alone as he headed off to bed there upon his pillow, he found the neatly folded note with a hand drawn heart across the top and words that hung in his throat just a little note to say daddy, you’re my hero and ill never go away...but, when you lie awake, I hear you cry sometimes I cry with you she knows how much we love her guess what...she loves us too so on those sleepless nights when there’s no peace to find if you need a guardian angel you can borrow mine he took her little hand as they walked down the aisle he passed her off, to her new life with sorrow and a smile and as she took her vows not to part until death he couldn’t help but weep, for that’s how her mother left fifteen years from that day he’s in a waiting room seven and a half pounds later a baby born in June he holds her in his arms falls in love at first sight leans over, whispers in her ear as he welcomes her to life this world has its ups and downs you will have your share both bad and good times wait for you make the best of what is there and on those restless nights when there’s no peace to find if you need a guardian angel you can borrow mine just look to where i’ve always looked you will find love strong see, you know my guardian angel and you can call her mom kc '10 |
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Always nice to read KC...
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Flowers for her, heart for that you both shared, and a drink to a very nice write my friend.... |
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Wonderful.
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nicely revised
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This is what we call a bump,,,wink,KC,,this was worth many more looks,,,thanks,,,to MOM'S EVERYWHERE!!!!
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Absolutely, amazing writing!!
Im all choked up with emotion.... This is beautiful. |
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Absolutely, amazing writing!! Im all choked up with emotion.... This is beautiful. awww, you softy you... thank you very much |
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Choked up right now dude
really superb write. Blessings |
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Beautiful!
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Guardian indeed. You really should take up the harp - Lord knows you play heart strings beautifully.
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simply ahhhmazing! beautiful write!
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thank you for stopping in
bk me my favorite-wench bastet |
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darn if i don't stop reading your poems I am going to quit writing mine , lol, that was one of the prettiest poems I have ever read , so profound os heart warming such a sad sweet remmebrance of the past and all the love in it , such writng hope you publish them, sharon
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