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Flame Thrower
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sorry for pain MsWiz Sounds like he's F.U.B.A.R Have a good day I'm going to take you on blind faith and say yeah, he was a fubar. But you may want to enlighten me as to what a fubar is! hahahaha |
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Flame Thrower
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Mutually Assured Destruction is it getting hot in here? <<------putting on her fireproof suit and adjusting her guns... |
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Flame Thrower
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Like an enraged lioness
Her pride no longer intact Licking the wounds you Inflicted Beating me to Death with your apathy Your detached and Smug complacency I tried desperately To make you see How that emotional Atrophy was sucking The life out of You and me… Destroying Anything we might Have held onto … Your lack of feeling Left me hurt and Reeling unable to Understand or Comprehend Your harsh decision To remain in your Self-enforced Solitary confinement Locking me out of The cell I would have Gladly shared if you Hadn’t locked the door Then swallowed The key… Without hesitation I unleashed Devastation A veritable verbal Commando packing Her heavy duty ammo Steel jacketed Hollow pointed words Guaranteed to Annihilate on site A clearly unarmed Man unable to Mount a decent Defense against A bloodied woman Armed and … … Dangerous… Lashing out with Little thought I Aimed and took My very best shot Hitting you far Below the belt My verbal Flame thrower Smoking you For every Careless Hurtful Unthinking Remark you’ve Thrown my way… I’ve always heard If you can’t stand the heat Stay out of the kitchen… So perhaps you Deserved Every burn you got But then again Perhaps not Maybe I set the Fire too hot Burning you up With my good Intentions… Well it doesn't Really matter Any longer The battle has Ended with no Wounds tended or Mended Both parties Parties having Gone up in Flames … Victims... ... of Emotional … .......… Warfare … awh@Mar 2009 |
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This makes ABSOLUTELY NO SENSE!! THE Community is called "Poems and Creative Writing"!! Do you mean you people really thought I was stoned when I posted that? Are you kidding ME!!! I was being serious! I WASNT TALKING ABOUT MONSTERS LIKE A BIG HAIRY APE. OR LIKE A FIRE BREATHING MONSTERS. Again this community is called "CREATIVE WRITING." Guys I was in college bout 5 years ago...That was creative writing. Do you not know what creative writing is? Do you think it is writing with style? Like typing with a beat? Or maybe moving your hands in a motion as to make a sound? Can somebody explain to me what creative writing is? Maybe thats why I didnt like the course. But in "Creative Writing II" I remember writing a story about my ex girlfriend. Now that is pretty scary. I guess, I misunderstood and guessed anything written with any use of braincells had to go "philosophy" or something. I do not believe in monsters. I work a regular job from 10 to 7 and dont smoke weed. What kind of writing is supposed to be posted here? Grocery lists? I would suggest Decaf next time... |
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This is out there
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Okay so I was driving around today thinking. I do this a lot. And I dunno why but a thought came across my mind. How do we know what is "real" and "fake"? Let me explain. So lets say a child or even an adult "sees a monster." The logical answer is to say, "There are no such things as monsters." But why? What proof do you have that there are no such things as monsters but for your thoughts and memories of "no such things as monsters?" Hear me out. Now, have you personally ever seen Christopher Columbus? or George Washington? What about Queen Elizabeth I? Or Leonardo Da Vinci? NOPE! Ya have never "seen" them with your own eyes. But if I said to you, "Are those people real?" With no question the answer is yes. Correct? But how do you "know" for sure that those people are any more real, that they were ever any more alive than a monster was? Just because of what you have read? What you have seen in books or on tv? Well I have read lots of stories about monsters and seen lots of monsters on tv. So here is my point. What is in our mind is what we allow to be there. So how do we honestly know that there are no such things as monsters? We have obviously created 'such things.' Children see them all of the time and some adults do too. So, humans just the same see them. So why are we so sure they do not exist? Now, I ask you all to give me your best answer. Open your minds for a moment and think about this. DEFINITION OF FAITH Heb. 11:1-3 Now faith is the assurance of things hoped for, the conviction of things not seen. |
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I was home bound
Alone when I met you Your eyes peering Into mine seeing thru The acrylic shelter I had nested into Telling myself that I prefer the confines And securities of These walls rather Than sleep in an Unknown bed Taking a journey Holding many Uncertainties Potentially ...Hazardous .....To my health… But you held out a Beckoning hand Sincere and inviting As you painted Picture perfect Portraits of You and me Swimming in tandem In a turquoise sea Endlessly calm And cool … With hypnotic words You manufactured Majestic Mountains Beckoning Tempting heights Never before Attained Treasures to Be found and Gained in the Unexplored… And when you Gave to me a Placid glassy ocean Brilliantly bright Reflecting a snapshot Shimmering Star filled night Hovering over the Lights of Seattle Highlighted in Warm whispers Promising I’d be Safe with you There was Nothing more I’d rather do than Go on this tendered Expedition No matter where It led … So I got dressed In my very best in Anticipation of this Long trip we had Mapped out Never dreaming it Would end before It had even begun … I had imagined a Joyful trek up a long Winding mountain trail Lushly lined in green Successfully ascending Sometimes harsh Sharply peaked terrain Descending into Glorious valleys Veined in quicksilver Rivulets chiming music Sweetly soothing… Instead I found myself On a dry dusty path Leading me … …nowhere… With no hesitation you Brought me to this Arid Weed filled God forsaken destination Leaving me to Stand alone Choking on regret Dry mouthed from The dirt kicked up by Your sudden defection Covered with particles Of abandoned affection Holding an unclaimed Trip voucher to Nirvana… Mystified Horrified Cried out and Dry eyed As I mutter … I knew I Should have Found A different Travel Agent … Jan 2009 |
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The impassioned plea
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The heart of a child asking for more candy getting told no til you finish a chore The heart of a teen Not knowing one's self trying so hard to please feeling nothing but pain The heart of a man so manly and strong feeling so weak Not knowing what to do The heart of a woman needing to break free giving and getting love just wanting to be held The heart of the aged Looking back and knowing or hoping that their love was not wasted The heart of a lover the impassioned plea asking if I am there and do you love me? hmmmm... don;t know about this one... honesty please Honestly? I think you have a good foundation here, but I personally would start the piece with a lead in. Like most good stories, you need a "hook", something to immediately grab someone's attention. While this is certainly a heartfelt piece, it is waiting for someone to trip over it rather than reaching out and pulling someone IN. You asked for honesty, that's my honest opinion. But like other parts, we all have one so my best advice is if YOU are happy with it, that's all that matters... |
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WKND QUOTE!!!!!!
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"Don't fight with the nature, let's the nature fight for you." ((((((((((((((((((((((FRANK))))))))))))))))))))))))) HAVE A WONDERFUL WKND TO ALL OF PEACE, HEALTH AND HAPPINES FRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANK! Wheeeeeeee! You're back!! Ok quick lock the doors so he can't escape from us again!!!!! |
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I see our nights take on the same reflections at times The whats and whys,,, ((( Ms A )))) I so adore the you in you And I you Denise.... MzEm, I hope so. That's why I throw words out there...hoping someone can and will relate to them ... You speak for many .... Yes, I do, GorgeousGirl...it's an elite group is it not? sigh...... (((ANGELFACE))) |
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Stalk Her
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nice write ((((A)))) i love the way you looked at it from both sides If they're driving you that crazy you should tell them how you feel. Thats why i'm glad i'm not that attractive Oh hush you, beauty is truly in the eyes of the beholder~ Oh god that line now i no i'm doomed Come 'ere you.... |
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I see our nights take on the same reflections at times The whats and whys,,, ((( Ms A )))) I so adore the you in you And I you Denise.... MzEm, I hope so. That's why I throw words out there...hoping someone can and will relate to them ... |
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Stalk Her
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nice write ((((A)))) i love the way you looked at it from both sides If they're driving you that crazy you should tell them how you feel. Thats why i'm glad i'm not that attractive Oh hush you, beauty is truly in the eyes of the beholder~ |
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Stalk Her
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I've been lost in the clouds.... sorry to worry you =P Well come down and mingle with us mortals once in a while you wonderful critter...we miss you... |
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Edited by
MsWizard
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Wed 04/01/09 10:13 PM
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It’s 3:00 a.m.
I can't sleep... I spent the evening With a friend of mine Watching she and her Husband Worn veterans of thirty years Squabbling lovingly as Only long time loving Partners can do…. Feeling like a voyeur I peered in on them Catching them as they Shared a quick Tender kiss ended With a gentle pat On the ass as Together They prepared A desert needed By none of us … In that one single moment I don’t think I’ve ever … …Felt so alone … You know I’ve met And loved a Few in my life I’ve been a bride To one Yet never ... …..a wife… I often wonder What it would be To experience Such a special Connection To hear a warm Voiced inflection Seeing my reflection Gazing back at me Out of loving eyes Seeing me for who And what I am Non-judgemental Accepting… What would it be like Finding someone who Would tolerate My snoring or my Quite often Boring midnight Inspirations as I Tap tap tap Away on a keyboard Worn by ambitious Furious fingers Finally catching me As I crash and Burn falling into Mutual oblivion Can it really be this Goddamned hard To find another soul Just looking for a Little quiet comfort In an often cold Chaotic world? Am I simply asking too much? It’s not like I have that Stereotypical ‘grocery list’ Of my wants and needs Those little “extras” I simply can’t live without I’m not asking for the The impossible I’m not evening asking To be on the “same page” anymore… I just want to be in the Same ****ing book … Sometimes I feel As though I’m living A scavenger hunt Looking long and hard for the unobtainable The next best thing And losing the Real treasure that’s Always been right there In front of my face… Oh, Life moves by so fast Leaving little to grasp And clutch onto A dazzling comet A bright shooting star Speeding by leaving nothing Behind but the occasional Handful of twinkling starburst Moments sparkling like Diamond chips in the sand Slipping thru clenched fingers Desperate to hold on Leaving us sadly Looking down only to find them gone as we ask ourselves How we could Ever... ...have let... .....them go? awh apr 2009 |
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Stalk Her
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Very disturbing to say the least...perceptive to the thinking of the stalker also. Hugs to you and you know where I'm at if needed. I do sweetpea, I do, and Im so very fortunate to have all lovely ladies by my side ~ What more could a lil wizard ask for in this life? |
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Stalk Her
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(((( Alicia )))) I am but a arms stretch away Holding you Beautiful you Knowing that always soothes me Denise |
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Stalk Her
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One Perspective Oh, Jesus Christ Another message Light blinking What is this man thinking? Or is he? Night after night Taking such delight In flooding my aura My hearing My sight with Lewd lascivious Desires to Own me Touch me Undress and Possess me A woman he’s Never … …Even met … I suppose that Will teach me To try to be kind To a clearly Lonely, warped Unloved mind His soul Aching for Resurrection So desperate For connection In a world Deliberately Passing him by Ignored Unwanted Now I see why… Godammit It’s ringing Can't you just Leave me alone? I want to be Able to pick up My phone without Hearing the Heavy broken voice of celibate Desires Unquenched fires Saturating my Hearing with His wanting …. Im being Stalked Victimized Terrorized Vandalized My thoughts And words Stolen Looted Polluted Manipulated Diluted By a strangers idea Of “love” perverted And diverted Aimed ... ...My way … Is there no disguise In which to hide From these Probing Voyeuristic eyes? ~~ Another Perspective Oh, look at her words Gloriously heard Solely in my mind as I read them convinced She cries out in a Night echoing With pain from Love torn wounds Only I can hear … and heal… How I long To feel her Skin shimmering White trembling In delight bathed In love starved Lingering kisses Laid upon a Body unknown Yet hungered for … Desires inspired By this verbal Siren I Close my eyes Almost feeling Her presence Breathing deeply Of her essence Unknowingly Consumed by The fires she’s Ignited with her Written words… No one Understands her The way I do … Perhaps I should Pick up my pen Remind her Yet again … I must open her Her eyes Force her To see She belongs To me Destined to be Mine … …Forever… March 2009 Now that's some good stuff right there *said in a southern voice* bravo MsWizard I rate this a and 11 out of 10 Raw! Where have you been Mister Man????? |
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Stalk Her
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Intense write Wizzy, and very unique.... Let me know if u need anything! I will darlin...thank you...p.s. lovely picture |
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I have a friend - a fairly good looking single man. But I cannot explain him How should he behave when women are starring at him - without scaring them away... I mean, he is often catching the unfamiliar women starring at him in the public places - parks, stores, busses, etc. And he doesn't understand What is he supposed to do: - node and/or smile back? (in passive inactivity) - wave at her? (which will embarrass her for sure!) - treat the stare as an invitation to make a move - approach her and strike up a conversation...)? - look back at her and walk away. . . Im interested in the female opinion, mainly, but guys are also welcome to post their takes on the subject! Thanx to all of you! Smile back. If she wants more, trust me, she'll let you know. Good luck to you ~ |
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Stalk Her
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Whoa! That is beyond deep! If it pertains to you know that my email box is open. Thank you sweet pea...yes it does pertain to me....xoxoxo oh lady! Been there ... I am here if you need!!! xx Amazing gift of words you have there Thank you my GorgeousGurl....it's so lovely knowing you are there for me ~ Fer true <<-----loves dat GorgeousGurl |
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