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Wed 04/08/09 10:23 PM

:heart: sorry for pain MsWiz flowerforyou
Sounds like he's F.U.B.A.R laugh
Have a good day flowerforyou


I'm going to take you on blind faith and say yeah, he was a fubar. But you may want to enlighten me as to what a fubar is! hahahaha :heart:

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Mon 04/06/09 06:53 AM

bigsmile

Mutually Assured Destruction

bigsmile

is it getting hot in here? scared

:heart::heart:


<<------putting on her fireproof suit and adjusting her guns...

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Sun 04/05/09 10:51 PM
Like an enraged lioness
Her pride no longer intact
Licking the wounds you
Inflicted
Beating me to
Death with your apathy
Your detached and
Smug complacency
I tried desperately
To make you see
How that emotional
Atrophy was sucking
The life out of
You and me…

Destroying
Anything we might
Have held onto …

Your lack of feeling
Left me hurt and
Reeling unable to
Understand or
Comprehend
Your harsh decision
To remain in your
Self-enforced
Solitary confinement
Locking me out of
The cell I would have
Gladly shared if you
Hadn’t locked the door
Then swallowed
The key…

Without hesitation
I unleashed
Devastation
A veritable verbal
Commando packing
Her heavy duty ammo
Steel jacketed
Hollow pointed words
Guaranteed to
Annihilate on site
A clearly unarmed
Man unable to
Mount a decent
Defense against
A bloodied woman
Armed and …
… Dangerous…

Lashing out with
Little thought I
Aimed and took
My very best shot
Hitting you far
Below the belt
My verbal
Flame thrower
Smoking you
For every
Careless
Hurtful
Unthinking
Remark you’ve
Thrown my way…

I’ve always heard
If you can’t stand the heat
Stay out of the kitchen…

So perhaps you
Deserved
Every burn you got
But then again
Perhaps not
Maybe I set the
Fire too hot
Burning you up
With my good
Intentions…

Well it doesn't
Really matter
Any longer
The battle has
Ended with no
Wounds tended
or Mended
Both parties
Parties having
Gone up in
Flames …

Victims...
... of Emotional …
.......… Warfare …


awh@Mar 2009

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Sat 04/04/09 11:44 PM

This makes ABSOLUTELY NO SENSE!!
THE Community is called "Poems and Creative Writing"!!

Do you mean you people really thought I was stoned when I posted that? Are you kidding ME!!! I was being serious! I WASNT TALKING ABOUT MONSTERS LIKE A BIG HAIRY APE. OR LIKE A FIRE BREATHING MONSTERS. Again this community is called "CREATIVE WRITING." Guys I was in college bout 5 years ago...That was creative writing. Do you not know what creative writing is?

Do you think it is writing with style? Like typing with a beat? Or maybe moving your hands in a motion as to make a sound?

Can somebody explain to me what creative writing is? Maybe thats why I didnt like the course. But in "Creative Writing II" I remember writing a story about my ex girlfriend. Now that is pretty scary.



I guess, I misunderstood and guessed anything written with any use of braincells had to go "philosophy" or something. I do not believe in monsters. I work a regular job from 10 to 7 and dont smoke weed.
What kind of writing is supposed to be posted here? Grocery lists?


I would suggest Decaf next time...

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Sat 04/04/09 11:43 PM

Okay so I was driving around today thinking. I do this a lot. And I dunno why but a thought came across my mind. How do we know what is "real" and "fake"? Let me explain.

So lets say a child or even an adult "sees a monster." The logical answer is to say, "There are no such things as monsters."

But why? What proof do you have that there are no such things as monsters but for your thoughts and memories of "no such things as monsters?"

Hear me out. Now, have you personally ever seen Christopher Columbus? or George Washington? What about Queen Elizabeth I? Or Leonardo Da Vinci? NOPE! Ya have never "seen" them with your own eyes. But if I said to you, "Are those people real?" With no question the answer is yes. Correct?

But how do you "know" for sure that those people are any more real, that they were ever any more alive than a monster was? Just because of what you have read? What you have seen in books or on tv? Well I have read lots of stories about monsters and seen lots of monsters on tv.

So here is my point. What is in our mind is what we allow to be there. So how do we honestly know that there are no such things as monsters? We have obviously created 'such things.' Children see them all of the time and some adults do too. So, humans just the same see them. So why are we so sure they do not exist?

Now, I ask you all to give me your best answer. Open your minds for a moment and think about this.


DEFINITION OF FAITH
Heb. 11:1-3 Now faith is the assurance of things hoped for, the conviction of things not seen.

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Sat 04/04/09 10:46 AM
I was home bound
Alone when I met you
Your eyes peering
Into mine seeing thru
The acrylic shelter
I had nested into
Telling myself that
I prefer the confines
And securities of
These walls rather
Than sleep in an
Unknown bed
Taking a journey
Holding many
Uncertainties
Potentially
...Hazardous
.....To my health…

But you held out a
Beckoning hand
Sincere and inviting
As you painted
Picture perfect
Portraits of
You and me
Swimming in tandem
In a turquoise sea
Endlessly calm
And cool …

With hypnotic words
You manufactured
Majestic Mountains
Beckoning
Tempting heights
Never before
Attained
Treasures to
Be found and
Gained in the
Unexplored…

And when you
Gave to me a
Placid glassy ocean
Brilliantly bright
Reflecting a snapshot
Shimmering
Star filled night
Hovering over the
Lights of Seattle
Highlighted in
Warm whispers
Promising I’d be
Safe with you
There was
Nothing more
I’d rather do than
Go on this tendered
Expedition
No matter where
It led …

So I got dressed
In my very best in
Anticipation of this
Long trip we had
Mapped out
Never dreaming it
Would end before
It had even begun …

I had imagined a
Joyful trek up a long
Winding mountain trail
Lushly lined in green
Successfully ascending
Sometimes harsh
Sharply peaked terrain
Descending into
Glorious valleys
Veined in quicksilver
Rivulets chiming music
Sweetly soothing…

Instead I found myself
On a dry dusty path
Leading me …
…nowhere…

With no hesitation you
Brought me to this
Arid
Weed filled
God forsaken
destination
Leaving me to
Stand alone
Choking on regret
Dry mouthed from
The dirt kicked up by
Your sudden defection
Covered with particles
Of abandoned affection
Holding an unclaimed
Trip voucher
to Nirvana…

Mystified
Horrified
Cried out and
Dry eyed
As I mutter …

I knew I
Should have
Found
A different
Travel Agent …



Jan 2009

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Fri 04/03/09 08:33 PM

The heart of a child
asking for more candy
getting told no
til you finish a chore

The heart of a teen
Not knowing one's self
trying so hard to please
feeling nothing but pain

The heart of a man
so manly and strong
feeling so weak
Not knowing what to do

The heart of a woman
needing to break free
giving and getting love
just wanting to be held

The heart of the aged
Looking back and knowing or hoping
that their love
was not wasted

The heart of a lover
the impassioned plea
asking if I am there
and do you love me?



hmmmm... don;t know about this one... honesty please



Honestly? I think you have a good foundation here, but I personally would start the piece with a lead in. Like most good stories, you need a "hook", something to immediately grab someone's attention. While this is certainly a heartfelt piece, it is waiting for someone to trip over it rather than reaching out and pulling someone IN.

You asked for honesty, that's my honest opinion. But like other parts, we all have one so my best advice is if YOU are happy with it, that's all that matters...flowerforyou

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Fri 04/03/09 06:46 AM

"Don't fight with the nature, let's the nature fight for you."




((((((((((((((((((((((FRANK)))))))))))))))))))))))))







HAVE A WONDERFUL WKND TO ALL OF PEACE, HEALTH AND HAPPINES
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou




FRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANK! Wheeeeeeee! You're back!! :heart: :heart: Ok quick lock the doors so he can't escape from us again!!!!!

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Thu 04/02/09 06:49 PM



I see our nights take on the same reflections at times
The whats and whys,,,

((( Ms A ))))

I so adore the you in you :heart:


And I you Denise....:heart: :heart: :heart:



MzEm, I hope so. That's why I throw words out there...hoping someone can and will relate to them ...flowerforyou






You speak for many .... :heart:


Yes, I do, GorgeousGirl...it's an elite group is it not? sigh......:heart:

(((ANGELFACE))):heart:

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Thu 04/02/09 06:48 PM



flowerforyou nice write ((((A)))) i love the way you looked at it from both sides flowerforyou If they're driving you that crazy you should tell them how you feel.:heart: Thats why i'm glad i'm not that attractivelaugh


Oh hush you, beauty is truly in the eyes of the beholder~:heart:



Oh god that line now i no i'm doomed laugh


Come 'ere you....:heart:

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Thu 04/02/09 12:40 PM

I see our nights take on the same reflections at times
The whats and whys,,,

((( Ms A ))))

I so adore the you in you :heart:


And I you Denise....:heart: :heart: :heart:



MzEm, I hope so. That's why I throw words out there...hoping someone can and will relate to them ...flowerforyou


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Wed 04/01/09 10:09 PM

flowerforyou nice write ((((A)))) i love the way you looked at it from both sides flowerforyou If they're driving you that crazy you should tell them how you feel.:heart: Thats why i'm glad i'm not that attractivelaugh


Oh hush you, beauty is truly in the eyes of the beholder~:heart:

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Wed 04/01/09 10:08 PM

I've been lost in the clouds....
sorry to worry you =P


Well come down and mingle with us mortals once in a while you wonderful critter...we miss you...:heart:

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Wed 04/01/09 10:07 PM
Edited by MsWizard on Wed 04/01/09 10:13 PM
It’s 3:00 a.m.
I can't sleep...

I spent the evening
With a friend of mine
Watching she
and her Husband
Worn veterans of thirty years
Squabbling lovingly as
Only long time loving
Partners can do….

Feeling like a voyeur
I peered in on them
Catching them as they
Shared a quick
Tender kiss ended
With a gentle pat
On the ass as
Together
They prepared
A desert needed
By none of us …

In that one single moment
I don’t think I’ve ever …
…Felt so alone …

You know I’ve met
And loved a
Few in my life
I’ve been a bride
To one
Yet never ...
…..a wife…

I often wonder
What it would be
To experience
Such a special
Connection
To hear a warm
Voiced inflection
Seeing my reflection
Gazing back at me
Out of loving eyes
Seeing me for who
And what I am
Non-judgemental
Accepting…

What would it be like
Finding someone who
Would tolerate
My snoring or my
Quite often
Boring midnight
Inspirations as I
Tap tap tap
Away on a keyboard
Worn by ambitious
Furious fingers
Finally catching me
As I crash and
Burn falling into
Mutual oblivion

Can it really be this
Goddamned hard
To find another soul
Just looking for a
Little quiet comfort
In an often cold
Chaotic world?

Am I simply asking too much?
It’s not like I have that
Stereotypical ‘grocery list’
Of my wants and needs
Those little “extras”
I simply can’t live without
I’m not asking for the
The impossible
I’m not evening asking
To be on the
“same page”
anymore…

I just want to be in the
Same ****ing book …

Sometimes I feel
As though I’m living
A scavenger hunt
Looking long and hard
for the unobtainable
The next best thing
And losing the
Real treasure that’s
Always been right there
In front of my face…

Oh, Life moves by so fast
Leaving little to grasp
And clutch onto
A dazzling comet
A bright shooting star
Speeding by leaving nothing
Behind but the occasional
Handful of twinkling starburst
Moments sparkling like
Diamond chips in the sand
Slipping thru clenched fingers
Desperate to hold on
Leaving us sadly
Looking down only
to find them gone
as we ask ourselves
How we could
Ever...
...have let...
.....them go?

awh apr 2009

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Wed 04/01/09 12:50 PM

Very disturbing to say the least...perceptive to the thinking of the stalker also. Hugs to you and you know where I'm at if needed.:smile:


I do sweetpea, I do, and Im so very fortunate to have all lovely ladies by my side ~ What more could a lil wizard ask for in this life? :heart:

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Wed 04/01/09 06:54 AM

(((( Alicia ))))
I am but a arms stretch away

Holding you Beautiful you :heart:


Knowing that always soothes me Denise :heart:

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Wed 04/01/09 06:53 AM


One Perspective

Oh, Jesus Christ
Another message
Light blinking
What is this man thinking?
Or is he?
Night after night
Taking such delight
In flooding my aura
My hearing
My sight with
Lewd lascivious
Desires to
Own me
Touch me
Undress and
Possess me
A woman he’s
Never …
…Even met …

I suppose that
Will teach me
To try to be kind
To a clearly
Lonely, warped
Unloved mind
His soul
Aching for
Resurrection
So desperate
For connection
In a world
Deliberately
Passing him by
Ignored
Unwanted

Now
I see why…

Godammit
It’s ringing
Can't you just
Leave me alone?
I want to be
Able to pick up
My phone without
Hearing the
Heavy broken voice
of celibate
Desires
Unquenched fires
Saturating my
Hearing with
His wanting ….

Im being
Stalked
Victimized
Terrorized
Vandalized
My thoughts
And words
Stolen
Looted
Polluted
Manipulated
Diluted
By a strangers idea
Of “love” perverted
And diverted
Aimed ...
...My way …

Is there no disguise
In which to hide
From these
Probing
Voyeuristic eyes?

~~

Another Perspective

Oh, look at her words
Gloriously heard
Solely in my mind as
I read them convinced
She cries out in a
Night echoing
With pain from
Love torn wounds
Only I can hear
… and heal…

How I long
To feel her
Skin shimmering
White trembling
In delight bathed
In love starved
Lingering kisses
Laid upon a
Body unknown
Yet hungered for …

Desires inspired
By this verbal
Siren I
Close my eyes
Almost feeling
Her presence
Breathing deeply
Of her essence
Unknowingly
Consumed by
The fires she’s
Ignited with her
Written words…

No one
Understands her
The way I do …

Perhaps I should
Pick up my pen
Remind her
Yet again …

I must open her
Her eyes
Force her
To see
She belongs
To me
Destined to be
Mine …

…Forever…


March 2009


Now that's some good stuff right there *said in a southern voice*
bravo MsWizard
I rate this a and 11 out of 10




Raw! Where have you been Mister Man????? :heart:


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Tue 03/31/09 06:39 PM

Intense write Wizzy, and very unique....:heart:

Let me know if u need anything!


I will darlin...thank you...p.s. lovely picture :heart:

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Sat 03/28/09 09:11 PM

I have a friend - a fairly good looking single man. But I cannot explain him How should he behave when women are starring at him - without scaring them away...
I mean, he is often catching the unfamiliar women starring at him in the public places - parks, stores, busses, etc. And he doesn't understand What is he supposed to do:
- node and/or smile back? (in passive inactivity)
- wave at her? (which will embarrass her for sure!)
- treat the stare as an invitation to make a move - approach her
and strike up a conversation...)?
- look back at her and walk away. . .

Im interested in the female opinion, mainly, but guys are also welcome to post their takes on the subject!

Thanx to all of you!


Smile back. If she wants more, trust me, she'll let you know. Good luck to you ~

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Sat 03/28/09 08:56 PM





Whoa! That is beyond deep! flowerforyou If it pertains to you know that my email box is open.


Thank you sweet pea...yes it does pertain to me....xoxoxo



oh lady! scared Been there ... I am here if you need!!! xx :heart:


Amazing gift of words you have there smooched


Thank you my GorgeousGurl....it's so lovely knowing you are there for me ~ :heart:


Fer true flowerforyou :heart:


<<-----loves dat GorgeousGurl :heart:

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