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blah day :(
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so im told its just one of those days that a girl goes through
well im praying now these days are far and few everything that can go wrong has definately gone id smoke another cigarette but after 2 packs i might lose a lung the stress is overwhelming, my head is killing me the phone is a goner if it again decides to ring dont let me get started on how i cant stand a smart mouth i didnt know that being 7 meant you were able to run the house as if you were a king did i mention the flat tire and how my spare somehow disappeared after hours waiting for the tow truck , you would have to guess..santa would appear his smell nearly knocked me out, and then it got worse he turned to walk away and i got a full view of his rear so now im finally at home and im about to head to bed i can only hope that this time tomorrow wont be filled with as much dread |
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Sad Story
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What was sad was she told him this and he believed it!! poor guy..so naive |
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Sad Story
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seems kinda weird..like something isnt the truth..4 kids equals lots of paps...some doc would have caught that..
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thank you both
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thank you
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everything is packed up in the moving truck down the street
furniture, clothing, and the bitter ending of what used to be you and me not sure when it all went downhill, or even when we decided this was best maybe i should have known something was coming, when you said you had to get something off your chest i never thought id ever hear the words you spoke to me that day "im not in love with you anymore, its time to go our seperate ways" i wanted to break down and cry, but for some reason there were no tears maybe i was trying to be strong, or maybe i just wasnt ready to face my fears the realization that i would once again be alone began to take its toll what used to be the warmth i desired, had now turned ugly and cold we started to bicker and fight and slept at other ends of the hall the person i had spent so many years with, i realized i wasnt sure i even knew at all so as i walk away today from everything i had once loved with all my heart i smile through the tears, because even though today is the ending of what used to be...its also the beginning of a new start |
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A Mere Pittance
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brilliant
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You Could Be Mine--GNR
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rambles...
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  Very nice !
thanks sweets
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rambles...
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downtown philly..middle of the night standing on the balcony making wishes on city lights This would be a beautiful first line in a short story. (Not say that this piece is wonderful, but these first two lines are a perfect jumping off place for a story...) maybe ill run with that idea...and see what becomes of it..thank you for the suggestion. Actually, after reading this over a couple of times...if you fleshed out the whole thing you'd have a pretty interesting story. Your poem reads somewhat like an outline. You could keep true to the poetry of the piece but add in some structuring and dialogue...and voila. i'm not such a great writer...and def not a poet by any means...so any suggestions are greatly appreciated. I'll tell you the same thing I tell my Creative Writing students...everyone is a writer. Let's put this into a bad analogy, shall we? Let's consider any piece of work a rock. And in order to bring out the beauty in some rocks we have to tumble them for hours and polish them. Sometimes we even have to have other people lend a hand in polishing them in order to bring out their natural beauty. Other rocks are beautiful with a few rough spots, a jagged edge...Writing is the same way. Don't sell yourself short. This piece is beautiful just as it stands...with a little polishing or reworking it could really be something to be proud of and say..."Hey, I'm a poet." maybe i should enroll... |
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rambles...
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downtown philly..middle of the night standing on the balcony making wishes on city lights This would be a beautiful first line in a short story. (Not say that this piece is wonderful, but these first two lines are a perfect jumping off place for a story...) maybe ill run with that idea...and see what becomes of it..thank you for the suggestion. Actually, after reading this over a couple of times...if you fleshed out the whole thing you'd have a pretty interesting story. Your poem reads somewhat like an outline. You could keep true to the poetry of the piece but add in some structuring and dialogue...and voila. i'm not such a great writer...and def not a poet by any means...so any suggestions are greatly appreciated. |
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rambles...
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downtown philly..middle of the night standing on the balcony making wishes on city lights This would be a beautiful first line in a short story. (Not say that this piece is wonderful, but these first two lines are a perfect jumping off place for a story...) maybe ill run with that idea...and see what becomes of it..thank you for the suggestion. |
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rambles...
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Hey beautiful Great write But hope ya really don't feel this way!
nah, just thinking outloud ya know..thanks
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Topic:
rambles...
Edited by
maleah
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Fri 10/30/09 05:53 PM
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downtown philly..middle of the night
standing on the balcony making wishes on city lights the rain is pouring down its cleanses is what im told i let the droplets hit my face in hopes to cleanse this dirty soul standing in the middle of a city based on pure brotherly love yet i am all alone wondering why i am never good enough the clock on the calvary temple church strikes midnight and the few bystanders start to stray away and just like this heart of mine tonight the skies are cold and gray a storm is moving in the wind begins to increase tonight ill be weathering my own storm whether to continue to move on, or to join the deceased |
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"Sweet, Sweet, Curse."
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very nice
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A HALLOWEEN CHALLENGE
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i almost pissed myself
 
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KC0003
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Talking to him on the phone his response is as follows:
Thank you...I dont know what to say...unbelievable...i'm blown away...wow...( ive never heard him this awe struck before, he never shuts up...and he is dead silent..) hehe |
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KC0003
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holy wow..ya know kevin is gonna faint....he is sooo gonna love this
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Will She
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making me cry mom...in a good way
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l.i.f.e.
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Thank you all so much
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