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Distinct Specifications
Edited by
Differentkindofwench
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Tue 09/22/09 10:55 AM
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 Okay, THAT, I absolutely understand, mirror 
One of those weird moments, fusion. Where the heck did that last post come from......Great AI strikes again,  Oh ya hoo, even better an illusion of mind ---- strike the part after the fusion comment.
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Inside The Space ~
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WHOOT, contact has been made, fusion is infused!!!!!!
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Happy Birthday to Me!
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I appear to be late again, Happy belated Birthday, wh'oman!!!
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Topic:
Where You Look
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Oh, I like it. I like the "twist" at the end, as well. I was not expecting it, given the serene scene you painted leading up to it. Well done. The only thing I might suggest--idly suggest, if you'd like to consider it--concerns these lines: shifting in the wind
blowing sighs through the sandy, rocky terrain. For the bold line, could this be re-worded perhaps? First, it is a bit redundant to say "blowing sighs"; second, wind "sighing" and "blowing" relies on rather dull, predictable verbs to use describing wind's actions. Perhaps something more terse, original? I will not make specific suggestions, since this is, in fact, your poem. Other than that, this is pretty good, madam. |
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Topic:
Mindful Crop Rotation
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"Na-na-na-nana, when your hot, your hot!"
Thanks, ME, sorry 'bout the Jerry Reed moment above 
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Topic:
Distinct Specifications
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What makes
A pond Different from a lake? What makes A worm Different from a snake? What makes A pie Different from a cake? What makes A hoe Different from a rake? What makes A choice Difficult to make? |
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Mindful Crop Rotation
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RrrrrIP
ShhhhrrrED Tear-it-out-by the roots An-a-lyze Imbedded lies Deeply ingrained beliefs ----- Basis Creates stasis Constipation of self-esteem Blocked Marred and hindered By impaction of long ago implanted seed. Sprouting Spouting Regurgitation of another’s creed. Till the soil of the mind Thoughts ground to a halt ‘Til blessed blank limitless possibility emerges Surges through the system With a mind boggling WHAT IF? Can I? Why not Exercise my will to exorcise thoughts no longer applicable? Mulching Mind’s Muck Into a mass of Matter that Matters to You. |
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Now, I'm curious - what's the rest of this guy's life like? Is he a control freak in every other aspect of his life? Hmmmmm....... curiouser and curiouser --- humans - odd beings.
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yes its odd, but interesting
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Consumed by thoughts is like drowning at times, panic attacks are very aptly described uncontrolled thoughts running amok and taking one's very breath. At times in life, death does seem the only available release, uNTIL you let go and find yourself floating or washed up on a shore of what next??????
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Topic:
Inside The Space ~
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Love the ending!
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Edited by
Differentkindofwench
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Sun 09/20/09 12:14 PM
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"Keep it simple, stupid"
Within the simple dwells the complex, ya never know what you'll stumble across if you just simply roll with it. |
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I said 2 x 4 didn't I, ("hey Marc, what's much thicker and harder than a 2 x 4")follow his heart hell, this is NOT the heart talkin' I'm thinkin it's pre-programming of the subconscious, whispering, but this is HOW it's SUPPOSED TO BE!!!On a self------off a shelf at the convenience of another (Where's my 40 lb unabridged dictionary, that'll work much better than a 2x4) The Russian chick is the only one with a mirror and the guts to look! She needs a different name though, hmmmmm vat to call her? Her name sounds like an over the counter pain killer.
 duhhhh, intentional?????
okay, I'm done ranting 
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Annoying as all hell, ain't it dragon? Come on Kace, either pop 'em with that 2 x 4 of self worth or show us how gratifying it can be to be sooo flippin patient with a self-indulgent blood sucker. I keep wincing here trying to find a bright side to playing with a rattlesnake when the medicinal use for snake venom's already been discovered!
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Topic:
THE LINES DEFINED
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C'mon back here, don't DASH off,
 A dashing write indeed------very well done!
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Pain,,, the eyes of youth
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My kids used to ask if they were more black or white? My answer was always the same - Is there a difference? You are human - no greater or lesser than any other being - the choice is yours.
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on the Rise
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Thought provoking - nicely done.
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add to this story...
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Sorry 'bout the one liner, Kal, but I've enjoyed your beginning immensely. Please continue.......
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add to this story...
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Have you ever felt the world through the soles of your feet? It enables an adjustment in balance and focus.
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I love.....
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I'm likin the sound of this. Yes, my ears are happier for hearing these lyrics. Follow the rhythm, breathe through the motion, and let action follow the beat that souls may dance
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hmmmmm? i have a question...but, i will wait to see if the story goes on 
You're learning! Sorry, I've jumped the gun with my questions before too and felt a tad bit silly afterward.
Kace, actually, I'm surprised at my reaction. You presented this very well and I'm actually finding myself curious as to WHAT will happen next, dah-duh-duhnnnnnnn............ |
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