Topic: add to this story...
kalunda's photo
Tue 09/15/09 10:39 AM
gentle rain, waiting at the bus stop, another lack luster day...
she held her purse above her head, but was already thoroughly soaked, I watched her as she tried to collect herself a little, as we stood together under the awning. she was beautiful, her blouse wet and clingy, you could definitely tell it was chilly.
I know I must have been blushing, I could feel the heat glowing in my face, I looked down, not wanting her to see me observing her so closely, and damned if she wasn't barefooted, I don't know why that came as such a shock, and I looked up at her again, she was looking at me, and smiling, I was for sure blushing now, she leaned towards me...and whispered...

Differentkindofwench's photo
Tue 09/15/09 11:36 AM
Have you ever felt the world through the soles of your feet? It enables an adjustment in balance and focus.

Gossipmpm's photo
Tue 09/15/09 11:41 AM
" I feel the power of the rain"

Differentkindofwench's photo
Tue 09/15/09 12:29 PM
Sorry 'bout the one liner, Kal, but I've enjoyed your beginning immensely. Please continue.......

Fusion99's photo
Tue 09/15/09 01:44 PM

gentle rain, waiting at the bus stop, another lack luster day...
she held her purse above her head, but was already thoroughly soaked, I watched her as she tried to collect herself a little, as we stood together under the awning. she was beautiful, her blouse wet and clingy, you could definitely tell it was chilly.
I know I must have been blushing, I could feel the heat glowing in my face, I looked down, not wanting her to see me observing her so closely, and damned if she wasn't barefooted, I don't know why that came as such a shock, and I looked up at her again, she was looking at me, and smiling, I was for sure blushing now, she leaned towards me...and whispered...
---OK kalunda, Im gonna be nice here, no gloom & doomlaugh here goes---

"Do you know where a girl can get a pair of shoes? I gave mine to someone who had no feet!"

I burst out laughing, loving the way her gray eyes seemed to sparkle at the sound. Still blushing, I tried to stammer out something as clever as her remark, but all that came out was the sounds of the street....cars driving, horns blaring, the policeman's whistle....

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 09/15/09 02:52 PM
Edited by MsTeddyBear2u on Tue 09/15/09 02:54 PM

gentle rain, waiting at the bus stop, another lack luster day...
she held her purse above her head, but was already thoroughly soaked, I watched her as she tried to collect herself a little, as we stood together under the awning. she was beautiful, her blouse wet and clingy, you could definitely tell it was chilly.
I know I must have been blushing, I could feel the heat glowing in my face, I looked down, not wanting her to see me observing her so closely, and damned if she wasn't barefooted, I don't know why that came as such a shock, and I looked up at her again, she was looking at me, and smiling, I was for sure blushing now, she leaned towards me...and whispered...



"These heels are killing me." just as the bus came to a halt opening its door with a rusty creak. She turned much too abruptly and advanced up the steps like she'd been set on fire. Quickly putting the proper amount of change in the meter. Yep the bus driver had noticed too. The driver had glanced down at her feet. Shook his head and chuckled. Quickly, but confidently she strode down the narrow path between the seats. She had strategically moved her purse to the front part of her blouse before hopping on the bus. She did'nt need the whole darn bus viewing what she had observed that handsome man standing next to her at the bus stop viewing. Normally she loved the rain, but today it had been her nemisis. Causing her shirt to be molded against her like skin. He was actually blushing! Men! She thought to herself, but this one was blushing! When she had caught his eyes searching her he had quickly adverted them downward. Thats when he had noticed her feet. The look on his face had caught her off gaurd. She could'nt believe she had said what she did to him. Now she was the one that was blushing. She quickly took her seat next to a smiling elderly lady, leaving him the only other seat advailable right across the isle. She tried to advert her eyes from his view as she watched him pay his fare and head down the
isle. She felt the heat creeping upward from her chest to her cheeks and prayed the blush would not make it to her heated cheeks. He took the seat across from her and...

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kalunda's photo
Tue 09/15/09 05:46 PM
love wow you guys are good...ain't this fun:banana:

LAMom's photo
Tue 09/15/09 06:46 PM
Just a simple pass through as I take in the wonder of so many
souls... flowerforyou

Fusion99's photo
Wed 09/16/09 08:20 PM

love wow you guys are good...ain't this fun:banana:
YES it is, shall we keep going or do YOU want to add some more? Later!waving