Topic: on the Rise
d4tc's photo
Wed 09/16/09 10:38 AM



Jesus didn't rise
by himself

He was lifted by
something else

thinks
1's self

not all
of us fall
by ourselves

some stall

some ball

some crawl
need help

from each
others felt

a life given by
a father

bore by a
mother

is this ours?

bestest consensus
under attack

somber?
defenseless?

i strive
to be alive

in the end;

kaput

finsihed

Where jesus was
a carpenter

I feel more
like a chemist

mixing and matching
add and subtracting

feeling that look
of pain of my face

reacting

massaging my face
with middle fingers

relaxing

I am offspring

unlaced

a pawn
fallen

cough in
hacking

spitting
grinning

lost as won

the odds
of winning

prolonged
by 1

Differentkindofwench's photo
Wed 09/16/09 11:01 AM
Thought provoking - nicely done.

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 09/16/09 12:06 PM
No matter what is thrown at us within this life we must always find a way to get back up and face it whether it be on our own or help by others.........:thumbsup:

kc0003's photo
Wed 09/16/09 12:24 PM
great piece...

:thumbsup:

ArtGurl's photo
Wed 09/16/09 04:08 PM
flowerforyou

Gossipmpm's photo
Wed 09/16/09 04:27 PM
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