lol My bait is books...
The promise of a good book would do me in. That or chocolate.
But I seem to be a geezer magnet. Guys older than my parents keep trying to talk to me. It's depressing.
I DON'T WANT TO HAVE TO BRING A DEFIBRILLATOR ON THE FIRST DATE!!!!

I'd like to think I'm a giver. But I think I it's a bit imbalanced for me. Taking a little could probably do some good
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I think you're page is fine. My only suggestion would be to re-read it. There are some simple spelling mistakes. Have fun!
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He's too cute!
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I wanted to discourage the creepy/pervy type guys without sounding like a b!tch. Thanks for taking a look at it for me.
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I'm new, blah blah blah.
What do you think about my page?
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Two things I noticed.
1. The pic you have doesn't show your face. Which isn't bad in and of itself, but you don't have another picture on your profile that shows your face. A lot of people will just keep moving if they see that.

2. There are simple spelling mistakes. I noticed. I'm sure someone else did too.

Other then that I think it's fine.
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Very nice! This would be great to save and show him when he's got kids of his own. A very enjoyable read.
Thanx for writing!
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Thanx 2KidsMom! That's the first poem I've written in a while. I'm glad you liked it.
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You’re so beautiful
Heart, soul, body, and mind
And I find myself wishing I was kissing the light that glows around your face
A trace of perfection lingers in your wake
And for my sake
Smile.
Wounds heal
Life is renewed
When I’m with you
You’re eyes capture my attention
Setting in motion the forbidden lust that roams freely only in my wildest dreams
But it seems only my heart is at stake
So for my sake
Smile.
You are all that I ever want to be
We were meant for each other
A mother and her child
Safe in your arms
The harm of this world means nothing
The feel of your touch
Sets my skin on fire
My body aches
And for my sake
Smile.
Brighten the day
Save my world
With the curl of your lips
And the curve of your hips
A goddess trapped in human form
From the day you were born I loved you
Such strength and grace
Every move you make
Is poetry
You’re showing me your secrets
Walking on water
Raising the dead
Moving my mountains
Making each breath I take worth while
Each day without you my heart breaks
So for my sake
Smile

Thanx guys! Mysterious was what I was what I was going for.

When moon is high
And the world’s asleep
The earth will sigh
As my lover creeps

Down the stairs
And past the hearth
As fast as he dares
Into my heart

High price we pay
To keep concealed
From the day
The love we feel

So through the gate
Into the wood
Around the lake
To do no good

In the darkness
No one sees
Through the broadness
Of the trees

Keep to the shadows
Stay out of the light
Our breathing is shallow
As we take flight

No one must know
Where we have been
We must not show
The love we fell in

The cost too great
For a misstep
The will of Fate
They will not accept

So be cautious of harm
And dodge the hounds
Into my arms
Where love abounds

Be not a lagger
Leap over the stream
Wear cloak and dagger
When you’re with me

Reminds me of an Erica Badu song. Your poem was very enjoyable.
Thank you for writing.
♥Pathos♥

My advise to to just start writing. You may not end up with a poem per say, but you'll be heading in the right direction. Keep writing until you create something you like. It doesn't have to be a cookie cutter poem. Whatever you feel best expresses what you're trying to convey. This may seem lame, but that's what I have to do sometimes. I just have to start writing, and most of the time it's something I can work with. Good luck!
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Thanx you guys for replies

(First post. Let me know what you think)
I love you
But not like the wolf howling longingly after the dark side of the moon.
I love you like the cold side of my pillow.
Every moment with you is refreshing and pleasing, and is over all too soon

I love you
But not like the morning glory obediently blooming for the sun
I love you with its bravery to open even though it will die before dusk
Life is short, but I’m willing to spend as much of it as I can with you

I love you
But not with all of my heart
I love you with all the pieces I have left of it
I don’t believe I’m whole, and the remaining part of me is a whole nother poem, but you can have it all.

I love you
But not like the horse loves his rider
I love you like the whip upon the horse’s back
Through the pain you have taught me to be stronger and love deeper

You’re the keeper of my shadow
The source behind my smile
The destroyer of my butterflies
The cage that tames my wild

You’re the Batman in my cave
The heat beneath my sheets
The supplier of my fixes
The joy inside of me

You’re the voice inside my head
The anchor of my sanity
The pages of my diary
The need for my humanity

And I love you