Topic: I Love You
Pathos's photo
Mon 03/16/09 06:00 PM
(First post. Let me know what you think)
I love you
But not like the wolf howling longingly after the dark side of the moon.
I love you like the cold side of my pillow.
Every moment with you is refreshing and pleasing, and is over all too soon

I love you
But not like the morning glory obediently blooming for the sun
I love you with its bravery to open even though it will die before dusk
Life is short, but I’m willing to spend as much of it as I can with you

I love you
But not with all of my heart
I love you with all the pieces I have left of it
I don’t believe I’m whole, and the remaining part of me is a whole nother poem, but you can have it all.

I love you
But not like the horse loves his rider
I love you like the whip upon the horse’s back
Through the pain you have taught me to be stronger and love deeper

You’re the keeper of my shadow
The source behind my smile
The destroyer of my butterflies
The cage that tames my wild

You’re the Batman in my cave
The heat beneath my sheets
The supplier of my fixes
The joy inside of me

You’re the voice inside my head
The anchor of my sanity
The pages of my diary
The need for my humanity

And I love you

zanne46's photo
Mon 03/16/09 06:10 PM
very very nice...

good write....

:smile: happy flowers :banana:

no photo
Mon 03/16/09 06:26 PM
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Pathos's photo
Tue 03/17/09 10:59 AM
Thanx you guys for replies :smile:

d4tc's photo
Tue 03/17/09 11:19 AM
That is REAL love flowerforyou

ArtGurl's photo
Tue 03/17/09 11:57 AM
Welcome Pathos ... lovely write flowerforyou

I am reminded of a poem from my favourite 14th century Sufi poet Hafiz


THE SUN NEVER SAYS

Even
After
All this time
The sun never says to the earth,

"You owe
Me."

Look
What happens
With a love like that,
It lights the
Whole
Sky.


flowerforyou



belizefinest's photo
Wed 03/18/09 01:51 AM

Welcome Pathos ... lovely write flowerforyou

I am reminded of a poem from my favourite 14th century Sufi poet Hafiz


THE SUN NEVER SAYS

Even
After
All this time
The sun never says to the earth,

"You owe
Me."

Look
What happens
With a love like that,
It lights the
Whole
Sky.


flowerforyou




belizefinest's photo
Wed 03/18/09 01:52 AM
beautiful poem.

Jimmy59's photo
Wed 03/18/09 01:55 AM
I like it ............:banana:

pkh's photo
Wed 03/18/09 05:00 AM
very nice,and welcome