Topic: ∞- Poetry By Request -∞
FroznChild's photo
Mon 03/31/08 07:39 AM
One sided love isn't very nice,
It's like playing a game with a one-sided dice,
or only having stickers on one side of the rubik's cube...
sorta like watching T.V. without the T.V. tube.

One sided love is like a one sided mirror,
that you can't see clear,
It's like one sided toilet paper,
that on the other side it'll smear,
sorta like a picture frame, that only has one edge,
a child's toy that they piece won't fit,
cause you only have a one sided wedge.

One sided love...
well, it's like only using one hand... blushing
only using one leg when you get up and stand,
it makes no more sense then a one sided glove...
pshh... One sided love.
you can keep it
No better then stepping in a pile of one sided dog ****.

With Equescent thoughts...
FroznChild indifferent

LAMom's photo
Mon 03/31/08 07:44 AM
One-Sided Love
((((( Vicki )))))

An Ocean lay between
Sky dark with Gray
Longing for his hold
Stories to be told
Yesturday forgotten
Memories just a fade
Speak to me
If only in my dreams.....
Empty is my mind
Lonely our my thoughts
One-Sided Highway
I Pray for Hope.....
Shelter I search
Blossom's of Spring
Food for thought
Soul Speaks....
Look upon the Sky
Petals in full bloom
Beauty of One
Beauty of Two
A Garden of Hope, Faith & Love
One-Sided as the story goes
Remember my Child
As the Garden Grows
Always & Forever
Your Heart & Soul
Home is where the Love Grows......




lurchs_sister's photo
Mon 03/31/08 07:52 AM
((((Denise)))) ((((Ben))))flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

Well done to both of you from different angles! Hope from one and synicism from the other... I would expect nothing less!

FroznChild's photo
Mon 03/31/08 07:53 AM
Lol... which ones which? laugh huh

lurchs_sister's photo
Mon 03/31/08 07:55 AM

Lol... which ones which? laugh huh



LOL! Only you FC only you!laugh laugh laugh

FroznChild's photo
Mon 03/31/08 07:55 AM
Ok, here's a challenge for Den he said I could make public...
(of course, anyone is welcome to write about the topic)
all are welcome to try, lol, please!

Den, I challenge you to:
The Elephant who couldn't afford Peanuts!

any format's fine... but I like rhyming poems. lol.

Sitngrin's photo
Mon 03/31/08 08:05 AM
lol, I'll attend to BOTH of you when I get back. Gotta run for a bit



~D

7Kate7's photo
Mon 03/31/08 08:50 AM
It may have been one sided
And, true, I played the fool
But for a while I was a happy fool
And I held to role well

It may have been one sided
And so I had to leave
As you no longer wanted me
But I lived all the same

It may have been one sided
But at least I loved
And I won't give that up for you or anyone
I learned heartbreak but I think I came out ahead
In the end

7Kate7's photo
Mon 03/31/08 08:51 AM
Challenge since I can't come up with anything myself: Killer dust bunnies (can you tell I've been reading Stephen King:)

lurchs_sister's photo
Mon 03/31/08 08:57 AM

It may have been one sided
And, true, I played the fool
But for a while I was a happy fool
And I held to role well

It may have been one sided
And so I had to leave
As you no longer wanted me
But I lived all the same

It may have been one sided
But at least I loved
And I won't give that up for you or anyone
I learned heartbreak but I think I came out ahead
In the end


Nice write Kate... thank you again!drinker

pkh's photo
Mon 03/31/08 09:00 AM
All very niceflowerforyou

Sitngrin's photo
Mon 03/31/08 01:40 PM

Ok, here's a challenge for Den he said I could make public...
(of course, anyone is welcome to write about the topic)
all are welcome to try, lol, please!

Den, I challenge you to:
The Elephant who couldn't afford Peanuts!

any format's fine... but I like rhyming poems. lol.


Here ya go!


Peanuts! Peanuts! I must have more peanuts!

I work all night walking around; these kids can’t tell a smile from a frown!
I stand on my back legs for a handful of nuts, traveling from town to town!
They make me get down on my stomach and beg for food!
I hope whoever invented this idea got squashed, for being rude!
I need to make some calls; I’m ready to be a free agent!
This pay is terrible, working conditions suck, and I’m tired of this tent!
Just wait till the next time they want to see me spit water out my nose!
Every damn one of those snotty little brats is about to get hosed!

© Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author.

no photo
Mon 03/31/08 02:03 PM
noway I will bring my umbrella with me next time,lol
GOOD POEM, Thanks Den...drinker :wink: :smile:

BonnyMiss's photo
Mon 03/31/08 02:13 PM
Here's my take on the elephant's plight...........

Striding forward the English gent
Spying an elephant backward bent
"I say old chap what ails thee"
Elephant replies I'm doing tricks
hoping to get peanuts for free"

"Now look here chap" said the portly fellow
Quit playing around,stop being yellow"
How else can I get my treats,
if I don't perform some amazing feat"

"Peanuts have soared in price
I must perform if I want anything nice
Simba the lion jumps through hoops
He gets presents in large scoops
And as for Sally the seal
Her just rewards are such a deal"

"You need a plan" the gentleman said
"Come over here and stand on your head"
"Who do you think I am said the elephant
some kind of demented sycophant?"

" I stand in the corner and pretend to be shy
This trick of mine has always got me by"
"Not now it wouldn't" the gentleman said
Find something else that pays
"Kids are so much smarter these days!"






no photo
Mon 03/31/08 02:15 PM
:heart: Very nice add, Miss Bonnie....thanksflowerforyou

BonnyMiss's photo
Mon 03/31/08 02:19 PM
heart Very nice add, Miss Bonnie....thanksflowerforyou


Hi iam, how's it going for you?

no photo
Mon 03/31/08 02:22 PM
:heart: Soon to be back driving and not on these happy pages much...I hope YOUR doing great and tell Michael I said hi..

lurchs_sister's photo
Mon 03/31/08 03:08 PM
Nice writes (((Den and Bonny)flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

FroznChild's photo
Mon 03/31/08 06:49 PM

Peanuts! Peanuts! I must have more peanuts!

© Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author.



ha ha... excellent Den. way to weave the words!

FroznChild's photo
Mon 03/31/08 06:52 PM

Here's my take on the elephant's plight...........



Very well written BonnyMiss... (or who ever you are) lol. Still haven't figured it out... but you never give me any clues!
Anyway.
I loved the angle and direction you took with this, a very compelling story. imaginative! congrats!