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Topic: ∞- Poetry By Request -∞
Sitngrin Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 1078	Sun 03/30/08 12:46 AM
Trust & Faith come Hand In Hand Words so wise,, so hard to understand Pain & Sorrow Replaced with Glass How to get my Recognition Back.... Blind in Life my Eyes did See Horror of your fake simpathy Torn apart left to die Upon this Mountain in the Sky... A Journal kept in good faith Stories told to this book Sincerity in every word Pose the question,, Silence Linger.... Mirror of past, present & future Resembling fate & distruction Wonder why i can not see Where is my Visibiity... Dream I may Dream I might Light the path,,, Speak to me Laughter takes over,, Wisdom sets in Upon this night it came to me..... Trust in me,, Yes I shall Faith to see,, what others fail Sincerity lives within my Realm Crenditials live in my Shell... Spirits lift this darken cloud Visions seen within my now Trust & Faith have always been Sincerity,,,, lives within Credentials within my sins...... Amazing......Thank you

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Sun 03/30/08 03:39 AM
Ok ya'all, here goes. My Request was the following title... I think that it was supposed to be one poem, so, I hope that ya'all enjoy it, Here ya'are Den! Fresh New Love, The Spark, The Energy There's just something about a Fresh New Love, The way it touches, the way it feels, with it's soft new fingers... The Spark is the way that it runs through the body... The Energy, the way that it lingers... A Fresh New Love grows everyday, The way it sees, the way it thinks, like an eager young lover.... The Spark is the energy you feel growing inside, The Enegery, is what makes the hair hover... Oh but a Fresh New Love, it does get old, The way it was, the way it had been, liked a tired old thing... The Spark is the fire you would set to it now, The Energy, now holds a sting. Fresh New Love... You may ask, does it die? The way it pines... the way it cries, like it just wants to go... But The Spark, Is the Lightning, That Fresh New Love holds Deep... And The Energy, is what makes it grow... Real Fresh New Love, has a different face, The way it hears... The way it sees, like you always just met... The Spark, is the idea, that old love... is always new... And The Energy, is the strongest feeling, that I've ever felt yet... With Equescent thoughts... FroznChild

Sitngrin Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 1078	Sun 03/30/08 10:59 AM
Ok ya'all, here goes. My Request was the following title... I think that it was supposed to be one poem, so, I hope that ya'all enjoy it, Here ya'are Den! Fresh New Love, The Spark, The Energy There's just something about a Fresh New Love, The way it touches, the way it feels, with it's soft new fingers... The Spark is the way that it runs through the body... The Energy, the way that it lingers... A Fresh New Love grows everyday, The way it sees, the way it thinks, like an eager young lover.... The Spark is the energy you feel growing inside, The Enegery, is what makes the hair hover... Oh but a Fresh New Love, it does get old, The way it was, the way it had been, liked a tired old thing... The Spark is the fire you would set to it now, The Energy, now holds a sting. Fresh New Love... You may ask, does it die? The way it pines... the way it cries, like it just wants to go... But The Spark, Is the Lightning, That Fresh New Love holds Deep... And The Energy, is what makes it grow... Real Fresh New Love, has a different face, The way it hears... The way it sees, like you always just met... The Spark, is the idea, that old love... is always new... And The Energy, is the strongest feeling, that I've ever felt yet... With Equescent thoughts... FroznChild Beautifully done!!! EXCELLENT WORK my frined! Thank you! ~Den

ReAnna_SilverWaya Joined Thu 03/27/08 Posts: 50	Sun 03/30/08 11:20 AM
who farted?...........................................smells great!!! thanks!!!!!

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sun 03/30/08 11:29 AM
Trust & Faith come Hand In Hand Words so wise,, so hard to understand Pain & Sorrow Replaced with Glass How to get my Recognition Back.... Blind in Life my Eyes did See Horror of your fake simpathy Torn apart left to die Upon this Mountain in the Sky... A Journal kept in good faith Stories told to this book Sincerity in every word Pose the question,, Silence Linger.... Mirror of past, present & future Resembling fate & distruction Wonder why i can not see Where is my Visibiity... Dream I may Dream I might Light the path,,, Speak to me Laughter takes over,, Wisdom sets in Upon this night it came to me..... Trust in me,, Yes I shall Faith to see,, what others fail Sincerity lives within my Realm Crenditials live in my Shell... Spirits lift this darken cloud Visions seen within my now Trust & Faith have always been Sincerity,,,, lives within Credentials within my sins...... Lovely and uplifting.... Happy Sunday my friend!

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Sun 03/30/08 12:11 PM
(((((Denise Ben))))) Lovley writes both of you!

Sitngrin Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 1078	Sun 03/30/08 06:06 PM
(((((Mom)))))) Lights thought lost, yet sooo profound. The beauty of ships, believed run aground. Truly just a way to stop and ponder. Then awaken to all the wonder!!!! Perty! ~Den

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sun 03/30/08 06:24 PM
Good poems you two, BOTH read well...

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sun 03/30/08 07:42 PM
(((((Mom)))))) Lights thought lost, yet sooo profound. The beauty of ships, believed run aground. Truly just a way to stop and ponder. Then awaken to all the wonder!!!! Perty! ~Den So much wonder to wake up to... Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm I am feeling comfy again

Sitngrin Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 1078	Mon 03/31/08 12:15 AM
So much wonder to wake up to... Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm I am feeling comfy again Good! I'll be writing some this week, just had- challenge for anyone out there: THE WEEKEND FROM HELL ~Den

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Mon 03/31/08 01:37 AM
The weekend from hell, floating flat on my face down rivers to dell. Hard to breathe with so much stress. Everywhere I look; just one big mess. Hittin my knees, pray for reprieve. Lord, please DO TELL, I'm done for awhile with that WEEK-END FROM HELL!

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Mon 03/31/08 04:16 AM
Weekend From Hell... It was such a long car ride, seemed forever to hell and back, I was trying to make up time, and pickin up some slack, When I got in a Hell of an accident, suddenly missing a turn, wincing in pain, made a hell of a face, That damn vacation in hell, gave me a hella sunburn... And the biggest problem, I must admit, Is I died in the car-wreck, can't believe that ****, Went for a weekend in hell, now I'll be here a bit. With Equescent thoughts... FroznChild

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Mon 03/31/08 05:30 AM
Definitely a different "direction" frozen, nicely done

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Mon 03/31/08 05:33 AM
Definitely a different "direction" frozen, nicely done Well thank you Wenchy... lol... or maybe, it's, Rio? I still don't know.

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Mon 03/31/08 06:38 AM
Whoa, Wenchy? Frozen do you have a death Wishy?

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Mon 03/31/08 06:42 AM
lmao.. um.. noey... Wench. But you always call me Frozen, when it's Frozn... ha ha.

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Mon 03/31/08 06:55 AM
Well color me embar----wrong! Huge DUHHH moment on my part, FnC, better?

Sitngrin Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 1078	Mon 03/31/08 07:07 AM
LMAO, Excellent writes, hat's off to the both of you. That little thing they call a smile creased my face when I read the both of them. Good job! ~Den

Sitngrin Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 1078	Mon 03/31/08 07:11 AM
OH and PSSST You guys can challenge each other too your know, writer to writer Just in case ya'll didn't realize that! ~D

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Mon 03/31/08 07:24 AM
Wonderful writes!!! I have a challenge for all as I can't seem to get this one out myself... One Sided Love would be the topic I chose... Come one come all... Can't wait to see the results!