the walls are closing in
no where left to run
just waiting for the end
not sure when it begun

tired of making mistakes
and never being right
sick of trying and trying
im giving up the fight

no stregnth to move on
not really sure i could
give it all up
sometimes i think i should

nothing lies ahead
just more hurt and pain
with everything to lose
and nothing more to gain

you really really hurt me
and its something i cant forgive
the only thing you have to offer
is a life i can not live

hurts to walk away
but theres nothing left to do
its time to say goodbye
no longer can i love you

it hurts, but f!?k him, you can do better anyway

Well composed.

"...you really really hurt me
and its something i cant forgive
the only thing you have to offer
is a life i can not live..."

Takes me back to darker times and stirs up some reflection. Hope you feel a bit better after getting all that out.

Wow I wish I had your talent!
I am a Musician but I cannot write anything..lol

AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!I AM SURE SOOOOOOOOO MANY CAN RELATE TO THAT UNFORTUANTLY.KEEP YOUR HEAD UP AND MOVE FORWARD. DO NOT LOOK BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thanks

WHAT WOULD YOU DO IF IT ALL ENDED TOMORROW
TIME'S RUNNING OUT AINT NO MORE YOU CAN BORROW
SO MANY PATHS WHICH ONE YOU GONNA FOLLOW
WHAT WOULD YOU DO, IF IT ALL ENDED TOMORROW.....

id ask god for a little more time
just one last reflection of my life in rewind
id make happy for everything i made sad
turn everything into good, which i had made bad
love a little more, cry a little less
and come to realize ive been truely blessed
id dance in the rain, sing in the shower
swim the deepest ocean, and climb the highest tower
wake before dawn, and watch the sun rise
say hello again to all of my goodbyes
work a lot less, play a little more
reopen some of those closed doors
i stand for a moment and take it all in
then id step forth, and let my journey begin

wow very nice all of them

thanks

I respond to you
on this very day
just take a moment
to hear what I say

Lift your head up
stand tall and strong
I will lend you my hand
if you need help to carry on

Never believe
that it's all over
if you need to cry
I will lend you my shoulder

I will help you Noel
i'm here as a friend
I want you to know
a broken heart can mend

I hope this helps you Noel
I truly do..

Daniel

IF YOU CLOSE YOUR EYES
YOU LIFE A NAKED TRUTH REVEALED
DREAMS YOU NEVER LIVED
AND SCARS NEVER HEALED
IN THE DARKNESS
LIGHT WILL TAKE YOU TO THE OTHER SIDE
FIND ME WAITING THERE
YOU'LL SEE IF YOU JUST CLOSE YOUR EYES

thank you

thorows flowers at you bravo bravo how true

You are welcome.. don't let anyone make you think you are not special

yea,,thinks thats the prob..dont wanna get to personal on this board, but was in an abusive relationship for 7 yrs..and i thimk sometimes...i dont value who i am, because im not really sure who i am anymore...

I know what it's like to be in a relationship like that.. and it's ok, you don't have to get personal.. I understand

I cant believe someone hurt you
As beautiful as are
You find some one out there alot better
As smart as you are,
This day just started in your eyes,
So spread your wings,
and find whats new,
cause your prince is out there waiting for you


nice Written poem.Wow Beautiful

Prince!