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I'm laying on the warm white sand of Venice Beach feeling the sun lightly brush my body and face and I imagine no greater happiness than the happiness I feel right at this moment. Eyes closed, I listen to the waves crash against the shore washing away the night time cries that linger in my head. The other children are playing in the white water but not me; I'm content to listen. I love it here. There's a natural music in the air and I feel the ocean mist against the bottom of my feet. These are the moments when life is real, when I'm real and feeling clean and alive. These precious moments make me feel part of something bigger and better than I can ever be. I roll over and bury my toes in the warm sand, snuggling deep into my towel and enjoying the rays caressing my back . The sun touches little girl skin often bruised, disguising the faint purple that remains. We've been here for hours, but, oh god, please, don't let us have to go back! Let them forget I'm here. I want to revel in the clean air and the cool cool water! Let me forget any world other than this one that exists for me right here, right now. I lay contented until I hear heavy breathing over me and raise my head slowly looking into angry blue eyes glassy once again. I smell the faint stench of whiskey from his breath as he snarls “get your ****, we're going.” As I awkwardly get up and dust the sand off my knees, I am stunned with the realization that the sun ... is no longer shining.
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Edited by
s1owhand
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Mon 03/10/08 09:48 AM
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and with a rush of inconsistent bluster
the beach umbrellas riffle wildly at the cafe as diners hold their napkins down their eyes in unison seek the clouds blowing swiftly from the southwest it is a warning to seek shelter against this uncertainty we can see and feel |
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and with a rush of inconsistent bluster the beach umbrellas riffle wildly at the cafe as diners hold their napkins down their eyes in unison seek the clouds blowing swiftly from the southwest it is a warning to seek shelter against this uncertainty we can see and feel Wonderful visuals s1ow~~~ ![]() |
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![]() ![]() i love all ur poems miss u sweet lady ![]() |
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![]() ![]() i love all ur poems miss u sweet lady ![]() Hello beautiful! How are you sweetie?? I miss you too....work has this nasty way of interfering with my posting unfortunately...grin.... ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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Beautifully melancholy. Thank you for sharing.
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Very nice, I could feel the peace and tranquility.. just like being there.. very nice indeed..
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![]() ![]() i love all ur poems miss u sweet lady ![]() Hello beautiful! How are you sweetie?? I miss you too....work has this nasty way of interfering with my posting unfortunately...grin.... ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() i hear ya lol always good to see u ![]() |
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![]() ![]() i love all ur poems miss u sweet lady ![]() Hello beautiful! How are you sweetie?? I miss you too....work has this nasty way of interfering with my posting unfortunately...grin.... ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() i hear ya lol always good to see u ![]() Same here sweetpea! And that's yet another good pic of you cutie pie! ![]() |
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![]() ![]() i love all ur poems miss u sweet lady ![]() Hello beautiful! How are you sweetie?? I miss you too....work has this nasty way of interfering with my posting unfortunately...grin.... ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() i hear ya lol always good to see u ![]() Same here sweetpea! And that's yet another good pic of you cutie pie! ![]() ur too sweet ![]() ![]() |
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A SUN IS STILL SHINING BUT MOMENTARILY UR OUTLOOK WAS CHANGED, WIZARD, NICELY WORDED.
![]() ![]() I'm laying on the warm white sand of Venice Beach feeling the sun lightly brush my body and face and I imagine no greater happiness than the happiness I feel right at this moment. Eyes closed, I listen to the waves crash against the shore washing away the night time cries that linger in my head. The other children are playing in the white water but not me; I'm content to listen. I love it here. There's a natural music in the air and I feel the ocean mist against the bottom of my feet. These are the moments when life is real, when I'm real and feeling clean and alive. These precious moments make me feel part of something bigger and better than I can ever be. I roll over and bury my toes in the warm sand, snuggling deep into my towel and enjoying the rays caressing my back . The sun touches little girl skin often bruised, disguising the faint purple that remains. We've been here for hours, but, oh god, please, don't let us have to go back! Let them forget I'm here. I want to revel in the clean air and the cool cool water! Let me forget any world other than this one that exists for me right here, right now. I lay contented until I hear heavy breathing over me and raise my head slowly looking into angry blue eyes glassy once again. I smell the faint stench of whiskey from his breath as he snarls “get your ****, we're going.” As I awkwardly get up and dust the sand off my knees, I am stunned with the realization that the sun ... is no longer shining. |
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A SUN IS STILL SHINING BUT MOMENTARILY UR OUTLOOK WAS CHANGED, WIZARD, NICELY WORDED.
![]() ![]() I'm laying on the warm white sand of Venice Beach feeling the sun lightly brush my body and face and I imagine no greater happiness than the happiness I feel right at this moment. Eyes closed, I listen to the waves crash against the shore washing away the night time cries that linger in my head. The other children are playing in the white water but not me; I'm content to listen. I love it here. There's a natural music in the air and I feel the ocean mist against the bottom of my feet. These are the moments when life is real, when I'm real and feeling clean and alive. These precious moments make me feel part of something bigger and better than I can ever be. I roll over and bury my toes in the warm sand, snuggling deep into my towel and enjoying the rays caressing my back . The sun touches little girl skin often bruised, disguising the faint purple that remains. We've been here for hours, but, oh god, please, don't let us have to go back! Let them forget I'm here. I want to revel in the clean air and the cool cool water! Let me forget any world other than this one that exists for me right here, right now. I lay contented until I hear heavy breathing over me and raise my head slowly looking into angry blue eyes glassy once again. I smell the faint stench of whiskey from his breath as he snarls “get your ****, we're going.” As I awkwardly get up and dust the sand off my knees, I am stunned with the realization that the sun ... is no longer shining. Thank you Frank! ![]() |
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Talking about heartfelt and being right there what a visual good write
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Beautiful Ms Wizard which I could give ya better dreams!!!
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Makes you feel as though you are there..good one
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Talking about heartfelt and being right there what a visual good write ![]() ((((((((((((TXSS))))))))))))))))))))) Thank you Sweetie~~~ ![]() ![]() |
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Beautiful Ms Wizard which I could give ya better dreams!!! ![]() ![]() Thank you Mikey, what a nice thing to say~!~ ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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I'm laying on the warm white sand of Venice Beach feeling the sun lightly brush my body and face and I imagine no greater happiness than the happiness I feel right at this moment. Eyes closed, I listen to the waves crash against the shore washing away the night time cries that linger in my head. The other children are playing in the white water but not me; I'm content to listen. I love it here. There's a natural music in the air and I feel the ocean mist against the bottom of my feet. These are the moments when life is real, when I'm real and feeling clean and alive. These precious moments make me feel part of something bigger and better than I can ever be. I roll over and bury my toes in the warm sand, snuggling deep into my towel and enjoying the rays caressing my back . The sun touches little girl skin often bruised, disguising the faint purple that remains. We've been here for hours, but, oh god, please, don't let us have to go back! Let them forget I'm here. I want to revel in the clean air and the cool cool water! Let me forget any world other than this one that exists for me right here, right now. I lay contented until I hear heavy breathing over me and raise my head slowly looking into angry blue eyes glassy once again. I smell the faint stench of whiskey from his breath as he snarls “get your ****, we're going.” As I awkwardly get up and dust the sand off my knees, I am stunned with the realization that the sun ... is no longer shining. (((( Alicia ))))) So touching and so personal,, My heart is aching,, I have no words Ms Lovey,, No words to describe how this has touched me,, ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Love & Light my Angel Love & Light ![]() |
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