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Topic: Alone...
FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Fri 02/29/08 11:04 PM
So many of us fear what we do not know... about the ones that we love what secrets they keep in the middle of the night... what trials they rise above... please, enjoy the poetry... Alone He startles awake in the twilight, He eyes watering from fear. Clutching his chest in the darkness, Fighting hard for the life he holds dear. His heart beats a rapid report, As his wife sleeps by his side. Unaware of the fear in her husband, Unaware that his soul has died. Unaware of all the love they've shared, Unaware of all the nightmares he keeps. Unaware of his shame for the future, As in his terror, she softly sleeps. He looks down on her sleeping body, Afraid of what happens from here. An old man who's lived alone, For many a married year. Their love is falling apart, But his silent words he will keep. He's been living alone for so long now, That he just lies down, and returns to sleep. With Equescent thoughts... FroznChild

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Fri 02/29/08 11:06 PM
good job

cenasgirl91 Joined Fri 12/21/07 Posts: 309	Fri 02/29/08 11:10 PM
nice poem

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Sat 03/01/08 10:23 AM
anothe nice one

countrybumpkin2u Joined Thu 02/21/08 Posts: 1238	Sat 03/01/08 01:03 PM
nice poem ... Good job

Shaden Joined Sat 09/29/07 Posts: 6118	Sat 03/01/08 01:14 PM


FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Sun 03/09/08 07:29 AM
Sometimes it takes me too long to reply to these... they get lost so easily... but, I really want to take the time out, to thank... Mirror Mirror (love your pic) Cenas Girl (always good to see you) PKH... (howdy) Countrybumpkin (lol, totally sounds like my kinda girl sometimes) and... of course, Shaden... Thank you everyone, for your kind comments... I appreciate, and, of course, respect, everyone.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sun 03/09/08 11:09 AM
So many of us fear what we do not know... about the ones that we love what secrets they keep in the middle of the night... what trials they rise above... please, enjoy the poetry... Alone He startles awake in the twilight, He eyes watering from fear. Clutching his chest in the darkness, Fighting hard for the life he holds dear. His heart beats a rapid report, As his wife sleeps by his side. Unaware of the fear in her husband, Unaware that his soul has died. Unaware of all the love they've shared, Unaware of all the nightmares he keeps. Unaware of his shame for the future, As in his terror, she softly sleeps. He looks down on her sleeping body, Afraid of what happens from here. An old man who's lived alone, For many a married year. Their love is falling apart, But his silent words he will keep. He's been living alone for so long now, That he just lies down, and returns to sleep. With Equescent thoughts... FroznChild One day he shall awaken and Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh I see such an incredible Awaking,,,

jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Sun 03/09/08 02:00 PM
great work

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Sun 03/09/08 06:11 PM
LaMom, I always look forward to your reviews... And Jimz, good to see you. I've been enjoying your posts/poems for the last few days... Thank you.

Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Sun 03/09/08 07:36 PM
nice write....kinda wish my ex coulda read this one.

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Sun 03/09/08 07:45 PM
touching!

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Sun 03/09/08 08:09 PM
nice write....kinda wish my ex coulda read this one. Lol... (send it to her anyway) j/k... I understand... I really do. (even for my young age)

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Sun 03/09/08 08:10 PM
touching! Thank you... that's a compliment I don't see often on the boards.

justmenoel Joined Thu 08/02/07 Posts: 3137	Sun 03/09/08 08:10 PM


FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Sun 03/09/08 08:20 PM
hey Noel... have missed you on the boards. Exotic pic today... very inner-beauty. Lol... here's some tissues...didn't mean to make you cry. Thank you for the flowers... They are as stunning as you.

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76412	Sun 03/09/08 08:33 PM
Awww but to hold those fears inside will take a good person down they must learn to let the demons within out in order to capture them and expell them.

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Sun 03/09/08 09:15 PM
Hopefully, by poems that I and others write on these pages... a few good people, will be saved... or, lol, at least prepared. Thank you TxsGal... (whatcha been up to?)