Topic: A stormy prayer...
MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 02/27/08 06:41 PM
Theres a storm in the soul.
Torrent rains of bewilderment.
Taring winds of pain.
Thundering roars of thinking process.
Lighting in the brain.
Wondering why this suffering.
Lost in lifes caos.
Knowing not where to turn.
Alone with an albatross.
Segragated from proper life.
Fighting but losing the fight.
What happened to thee.
Always doing whats right.
Cold and dampened body.
Shivering at the thoughts.
How can one lose so much.
Everything it cost.
Hand held out was bitten.
Crying became in vain.
No one understanding the hurricane.
Hunger fills the belly.
Sickness invades the bod.
No where to seek shelter.
When the twister came.
Standing in storms path.
A storm apon the soul.
Crying out for the only one who knows.
Calm the sea- help not fear.
know that you are near.
Just sometimes in the storm its so hard to see.
Please- please help thee...

Amen


By: Teddy 02-27-08

MirrorMirror's photo
Wed 02/27/08 06:41 PM
:heart:

no photo
Wed 02/27/08 06:48 PM
*nodding*



flowerforyou

frankfk's photo
Thu 02/28/08 05:12 AM
POWERFULflowerforyou flowerforyou
Theres a storm in the soul.
Torrent rains of bewilderment.
Taring winds of pain.
Thundering roars of thinking process.
Lighting in the brain.
Wondering why this suffering.
Lost in lifes caos.
Knowing not where to turn.
Alone with an albatross.
Segragated from proper life.
Fighting but losing the fight.
What happened to thee.
Always doing whats right.
Cold and dampened body.
Shivering at the thoughts.
How can one lose so much.
Everything it cost.
Hand held out was bitten.
Crying became in vain.
No one understanding the hurricane.
Hunger fills the belly.
Sickness invades the bod.
No where to seek shelter.
When the twister came.
Standing in storms path.
A storm apon the soul.
Crying out for the only one who knows.
Calm the sea- help not fear.
know that you are near.
Just sometimes in the storm its so hard to see.
Please- please help thee...

Amen


By: Teddy 02-27-08

klugman's photo
Thu 02/28/08 06:59 AM
Youve gotta have a storm everynow and then to clear the airflowerforyou

pkh's photo
Thu 02/28/08 07:00 AM
very powerful and so well written,take my hand and I will help guide youflowerforyou

jimz's photo
Sun 03/02/08 04:05 PM
the deepening roots
the leaves above
smiling

peace
jimmy

Fadedspirit's photo
Sun 03/02/08 05:06 PM
Ahh, now if that doesn't touch a heart, nothing will. Excellent write MsTeddyBear. :smile: flowerforyou

countrybumpkin2u's photo
Sun 03/02/08 05:07 PM
Well, you know me....
I of course CRIED!!
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