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Topic: Fall into me
lizethmarina's photo
Wed 02/27/08 11:52 AM
Edited by lizethmarina on Wed 02/27/08 12:01 PM
I would wake you with a longing kiss
This man is you who I can no longer resist
Let my hair hang over your chest
As I love you thru the night, slowly, wanting it to never end

Fall into me my love, I will show you the paradise you have been looking for
My whole self trembling with every touch
The need in your eyes is plain to see
As we become one let me show you how I feel

My heart will always be true
The memories of the past no longer here
They have gone away revealing the light of a new sun
Hiding behind the depths of the eyes of this man who I now think I love

Fall into me, love me 'til the end of time
Fall into me, just as if the world around us mattered no more
Run away with me to the paradise waiting beyond the horizon
And I will show the sweetest love you've never found

Fall into me my love, because I think I have fallen into you.


Marina
S.A.B
smooched :heart: smooched


ladyblack67's photo
Wed 02/27/08 11:55 AM
hmm, now I'm hungry, and really wishing I had a boyfriend!

DOTTIE's photo
Wed 02/27/08 11:56 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou very pretty

timmyschillin's photo
Wed 02/27/08 12:00 PM
man that last line should say "Fallen into you" much more powerful statement. I love everything else though!

MirrorMirror's photo
Wed 02/27/08 12:01 PM

hmm, now I'm hungry, and really wishing I had a boyfriend!
huh So you could eat him ?huh

lizethmarina's photo
Wed 02/27/08 12:02 PM

man that last line should say "Fallen into you" much more powerful statement. I love everything else though!



Advise taken! You are right, sounds better that way, thanks, very much flowerforyou

lizethmarina's photo
Wed 02/27/08 12:03 PM
Edited by lizethmarina on Wed 02/27/08 12:03 PM


hmm, now I'm hungry, and really wishing I had a boyfriend!
huh So you could eat him ?huh



laugh laugh laugh Wait a minute! Nobody eats anybody here! laugh laugh laugh

a_brand_new_life's photo
Wed 02/27/08 12:06 PM
SO BEAUTIFUL:smile:
SOUNDS LIKE REAL LOVE:heart:

countrybumpkin2u's photo
Wed 02/27/08 12:06 PM
you need to get these published!flowerforyou

lizethmarina's photo
Wed 02/27/08 12:08 PM

flowerforyou flowerforyou very pretty


Thanks Dottie flowerforyou

otterman's photo
Wed 02/27/08 12:10 PM

hmm, now I'm hungry, and really wishing I had a boyfriend!
here i am

lizethmarina's photo
Wed 02/27/08 12:12 PM

SO BEAUTIFUL:smile:
SOUNDS LIKE REAL LOVE:heart:


{{{{Sighing}}}} Sure hope so....... flowerforyou

:heart:

lizethmarina's photo
Wed 02/27/08 12:17 PM

you need to get these published!flowerforyou



Think so? Thank you. flowerforyou

lizethmarina's photo
Wed 02/27/08 01:48 PM


hmm, now I'm hungry, and really wishing I had a boyfriend!
here i am



Behave Otterman! laugh

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 02/27/08 05:52 PM
flowerforyou

lizethmarina's photo
Thu 02/28/08 06:25 AM
Thanks MsTeddy. flowerforyou

2Btrue2One's photo
Thu 02/28/08 06:40 AM
Marina, gotta say that is your best so far, I was truly touched by it. You have true talent from within my dear..flowerforyou

blonderockermom's photo
Thu 02/28/08 06:49 AM
Simply beautiful :smile: flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Thu 02/28/08 06:57 AM
flowerforyou beautiful

lizethmarina's photo
Thu 02/28/08 07:03 AM
Thanks Daniel, can't express enough how much I appreciate you being a friend to me flowerforyou

Rockermom, thanks so much flowerforyou

Pkh, flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

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