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Topic: Hmmm no title
pkh's photo
Fri 02/22/08 06:55 AM
You would think by now I would now my way around
I do miss you but I'm on familar ground
How many more your years will I let pass me by
Until I learn it does no good to cry
But I'm ready for someone to take me by the hand
And show me a beautiful place in this unfamilar land
I will no longer cling to the past
I accept our love was not meant to last
Maybe there will come a day when I can finally let it die
And feel strong again and a new love I will try
And what a beautiful day that wwill be,when I do discover
I'm learning to move on again,with a great new friend and lover.

Puffins1958's photo
Fri 02/22/08 07:14 AM
Edited by Puffins1958 on Fri 02/22/08 07:14 AM
"I accept our love was not meant to last"

Why can't it be meant to last, Pam?

Beautifully written....be sad at the same time

flowerforyou flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Fri 02/22/08 07:20 AM
Hi sweetie,it takes two and if only one is really working at it,I don't know the answers.I only know I'm getting to old and I may be selfish but I want the same love and attention I'm giving and if it's not being given back,then you have to either move on or wait.But I believe it's time for me to get off this roller coaster ride.I want to live life to the fullest and know someone out there will give me what I give them...unconditional love

LAMom's photo
Fri 02/22/08 08:48 AM

Hi sweetie,it takes two and if only one is really working at it,I don't know the answers.I only know I'm getting to old and I may be selfish but I want the same love and attention I'm giving and if it's not being given back,then you have to either move on or wait.But I believe it's time for me to get off this roller coaster ride.I want to live life to the fullest and know someone out there will give me what I give them...unconditional love


Your beauty and strength impower me,, I love you :heart:

Differentkindofwench's photo
Fri 02/22/08 09:14 AM
Hmmmm, a name, a name. Slow but Sure, slow and steady, something to that effect slithers through my mind. Nice write pk. One day, my dear, that mirror of yours is gonna surprise you with just how much strength you actually have.

Fadedspirit's photo
Fri 02/22/08 09:26 AM
I see much acceptance, strength, and hope in this one.
very nice write pkh. :smile:

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 02/22/08 11:28 AM
flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou
(((Pam)))

frankfk's photo
Fri 02/22/08 02:42 PM
excellent, past is dead and gone pamflowerforyou flowerforyou
You would think by now I would now my way around
I do miss you but I'm on familar ground
How many more your years will I let pass me by
Until I learn it does no good to cry
But I'm ready for someone to take me by the hand
And show me a beautiful place in this unfamilar land
I will no longer cling to the past
I accept our love was not meant to last
Maybe there will come a day when I can finally let it die
And feel strong again and a new love I will try
And what a beautiful day that wwill be,when I do discover
I'm learning to move on again,with a great new friend and lover.

pkh's photo
Fri 02/22/08 04:14 PM
Thank you all sometimes we find the strength we did'nt think we had.We reach down and find it lift our heads up and move forward and continue to dream and believe.flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Sat 02/23/08 07:39 AM

Thank you all sometimes we find the strength we did'nt think we had.We reach down and find it lift our heads up and move forward and continue to dream and believe.flowerforyou


Awwwwwwwwwwww yes,,, keep the dream alive,, and when you think you cant believe anymore,, Just look deep within your eyes,,, I see magic,, so much beauty,,, so much strength,, Ohhhhhhhhh the wonders of your soul,,, Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm pure beauty:heart:

pkh's photo
Sat 02/23/08 08:01 AM


Thank you all sometimes we find the strength we did'nt think we had.We reach down and find it lift our heads up and move forward and continue to dream and believe.flowerforyou


Awwwwwwwwwwww yes,,, keep the dream alive,, and when you think you cant believe anymore,, Just look deep within your eyes,,, I see magic,, so much beauty,,, so much strength,, Ohhhhhhhhh the wonders of your soul,,, Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm pure beauty:heart:

I still care so much but it's a one sided relationship so I need to move forward...Denise you my friend are a beautiful gift in my life...hugs and loveflowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Sat 02/23/08 10:16 AM
very nice pam

no reason to stop looking for what you need to make you happy
as both people should be

well said

flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Sat 02/23/08 10:51 AM

very nice pam

no reason to stop looking for what you need to make you happy
as both people should be

well said

flowerforyou


Thanks Kc sometimes one feels like just throwing in the towel,but we move forward and keep our dreams aliveflowerforyou

Puffins1958's photo
Sat 02/23/08 11:04 AM
{{{{{{{Pam}}}}}}}

Just because....

LOVE you

:heart: :heart: flowerforyou

ZPicante's photo
Sat 02/23/08 11:07 AM
Nice work.

I used to not title my poetry, as well, either because I could not think of a title or because I could not be bothered. I have learned since that *having* a title is an important thing because a.) it is the first thing a person sees when reading your poem (therefore, should catch attention and have meaning), b.) it defines the premise of the poem (as with Ezra Pound's "In A Station Of the Metro," the title encompassed half the poem literally! An extreme example), and b.) it "completes" the poem, in a sense; it makes it look more finished.

Just some advice I have learned. No offense intended, just some advice. :smile:

robertsonm30's photo
Sat 02/23/08 11:15 AM
flowerforyou very nice write pkh
i can relate
it has takin me along time to move on but i still love her.
here is something we all should remember and maybe even live by i just wanted to share it with you.


There are a few thing that I have learned through out my life in relationships. One is that u cant have any expectations when going into a new relationship. There are three types of relationships. Which are REASON,SEASON,AND LIFETIME.

When you figure out which it is, you will know exactly what to do.

When someone is in your life for a REASON, it is usually to meet a need you have expressed outwardly or inwardly. They have come to assist you through a difficulty, to provide you with guidance and support, to aid you physically, emotionally, or spiritually. They may seem like a godsend, and they are. They are here for the reason you need them to be. Then, without any wrongdoing on your part or at an inconvenient time, this person will say or do something to end the relationship. Sometimes they die. Sometimes they walk away. Sometimes they act up or out and force you to take a stand. What we must realize is that our need has been met, and our desire fulfilled; their work is done. The prayer you sent up has been answered and it is now time to move on.

When people come into your life for a SEASON, it is because your turn has come to share, grow, or learn. They may bring you an experience of peace or make you laugh. They may teach you something you have never done. They usually give you an unbelievable amount of joy. Believe it! It is real! But, only for a season.

LIFETIME relationships teach you lifetime lessons; those things you must build upon in order to have a solid emotional foundation. Your job is to accept the lesson, love the person; and put what you have learned to use in all other relationships and areas of your life. It is said that love is blind but friendship has a special sense. Thank you all for being a part of my life.


Totage's photo
Sat 02/23/08 11:21 AM

You would think by now I would now my way around
I do miss you but I'm on familar ground
How many more your years will I let pass me by
Until I learn it does no good to cry
But I'm ready for someone to take me by the hand
And show me a beautiful place in this unfamilar land
I will no longer cling to the past
I accept our love was not meant to last
Maybe there will come a day when I can finally let it die
And feel strong again and a new love I will try
And what a beautiful day that wwill be,when I do discover
I'm learning to move on again,with a great new friend and lover.


flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Sat 02/23/08 11:24 AM
Joanne love you one way or amother we have to keep our dreams aliveflowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou
Zpicante no offense taken this is recent for me and had no idea what to call it,he will be a hard one to get over.
Robert very nice thanks for sharing that.
totage thanks for reading

TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 02/23/08 01:05 PM

Hi sweetie,it takes two and if only one is really working at it,I don't know the answers.I only know I'm getting to old and I may be selfish but I want the same love and attention I'm giving and if it's not being given back,then you have to either move on or wait.But I believe it's time for me to get off this roller coaster ride.I want to live life to the fullest and know someone out there will give me what I give them...unconditional love


Follow your heart Pam you have a big one don't ever let one bring you down. If they make you cry they are not the one. One day we shall all find that special one. It will start out slow and easy at first and things will grow with that one we never thought it could happen then one day it will hit like a lead pipe that hey everything I want is right here with this one. As your face to face looking within there eyes. If that seems like a dream then so be it for I do so believe that and will till the day I die. One day we will find that one and know it as we look deep within their eyes we will then know we are right were we should be. Hummmm if anyone thinks I'm wrong ask Denise hehehehelaugh bigsmile bigsmile bigsmile


Awwww and titles are nothing but a title it is what is within that counts!!bigsmile flowerforyou bigsmile

pkh's photo
Sat 02/23/08 01:13 PM
aww Kristi I think you know me better then anyone..got teary eyed reading this my son is laughing and thinks I'm nuts.And Denise I'm so happy. I do believe it Kristi you too are such a beautiful and wonderful woman...like they say good things come to those who wait...our dreams will come true that much I do now.(but let's hope it happens while we still have some life left in usbigsmile )flowerforyou :heart:

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