Topic: A Farewell Of Sorts
Fadedspirit's photo
Wed 02/20/08 06:45 PM
In bluest skies I see your eyes
And in the children your heart.

The warmth of fire,
Your passion's desire,
While feeling the flames
You hold no blame,
For this is the sting of love.

The wind that sweeps in summer's heat,
Your voice thus sweeps my mind complete,
Within your sultry tone.

Wherever you may
And tend to stay
I bid you a fair adieu.

Forever my friend we'll never end
For I gave a song to you.

Wherever you go, please go in peace
And take upon you a new life's lease,
For that is my wish for you.

Fadedspirit 2/20/2008

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 02/20/08 06:47 PM
Awwwwwww thats sweet... drinker

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 02/20/08 06:50 PM
awww good onebigsmile

bgeorge's photo
Wed 02/20/08 06:50 PM
what a nice tribute to a friendflowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Wed 02/20/08 06:54 PM
Thanks MsTeddyBear, TxsGal, and bgeorge.

robertsonm30's photo
Wed 02/20/08 07:26 PM
very good write drinker drinker

pkh's photo
Wed 02/20/08 07:28 PM
aww that was sweet

LAMom's photo
Wed 02/20/08 10:40 PM
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shauna22's photo
Thu 02/21/08 03:04 AM
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ponchopollito's photo
Thu 02/21/08 03:06 AM
nice

ronin77's photo
Fri 02/22/08 03:27 PM
I love this one! The rhythm is filled with great transitions and these words are such a beautiful sentiment. This is truly a great work!

Fadedspirit's photo
Fri 02/22/08 05:39 PM
Thanks robertsonm30, pkh, LAMom, shauna, and ponchopollito. :smile:

Nice to see ya back ronin and thanks for your comment. drinker