Topic: miss missing
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Wed 02/20/08 09:48 AM
Minutes that once
turned into long
lonely hours
waiting
waiting
waiting ...
for you
have now turned into days
that turn into weeks
with never a thought
of all we shared
of how we dreamed
how we cared ...

The songs you played me
once ingrained in my heart
now leave nothing
but a faint wisp of nostalgia
lingering in the air
A scent faintly
aromatic and
bittersweet ...

The words you spoke,
and indoctrinated me with
are now nothing more
than black Arial type
on a paper stark white
so impersonal
with only a hint of
what was
and what could have been ...

And my heart
which used to beat
so much faster
knowing that
in moments,
in time
you would be mine
Is now nothing more
than a mechanism,
a unit of survival
for a functioning body
and a voided soul ...

When we parted ways
I didn't weep,
didn't once look back
but I wish I had ...
Because if truth be told
I never knew
the emptiness that
would eschew ..

And oh ...
... How I miss
... missing
... you

@phoenix february 18, 2008


TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 02/20/08 09:50 AM
Great write girl as always bigsmile

frankfk's photo
Wed 02/20/08 09:50 AM
he will back after seeing these beautiful wordsflowerforyou nice pic as well
Minutes that once
turned into long
lonely hours
waiting
waiting
waiting ...
for you
have now turned into days
that turn into weeks
with never a thought
of all we shared
of how we dreamed
how we cared ...

The songs you played me
once ingrained in my heart
now leave nothing
but a faint wisp of nostalgia
lingering in the air
A scent faintly
aromatic and
bittersweet ...

The words you spoke,
and indoctrinated me with
are now nothing more
than black Arial type
on a paper stark white
so impersonal
with only a hint of
what was
and what could have been ...

And my heart
which used to beat
so much faster
knowing that
in moments,
in time
you would be mine
Is now nothing more
than a mechanism,
a unit of survival
for a functioning body
and a voided soul ...

When we parted ways
I didn't weep,
didn't once look back
but I wish I had ...
Because if truth be told
I never knew
the emptiness that
would eschew ..

And oh ...
... How I miss
... missing
... you

@phoenix february 18, 2008



MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 02/20/08 09:51 AM


Dang I'm being a sentimental fool today... :cry:

Good write (((MsWizard))) flowerforyou flowerforyou
I felt the emptiness all the way over here.

no photo
Wed 02/20/08 09:54 AM

Great write girl as always bigsmile


Thank you Txs :heart: flowerforyou :heart: I always appreciate your comments sweetie!

no photo
Wed 02/20/08 09:54 AM

he will back after seeing these beautiful wordsflowerforyou nice pic as well
Minutes that once
turned into long
lonely hours
waiting
waiting
waiting ...
for you
have now turned into days
that turn into weeks
with never a thought
of all we shared
of how we dreamed
how we cared ...

The songs you played me
once ingrained in my heart
now leave nothing
but a faint wisp of nostalgia
lingering in the air
A scent faintly
aromatic and
bittersweet ...

The words you spoke,
and indoctrinated me with
are now nothing more
than black Arial type
on a paper stark white
so impersonal
with only a hint of
what was
and what could have been ...

And my heart
which used to beat
so much faster
knowing that
in moments,
in time
you would be mine
Is now nothing more
than a mechanism,
a unit of survival
for a functioning body
and a voided soul ...

When we parted ways
I didn't weep,
didn't once look back
but I wish I had ...
Because if truth be told
I never knew
the emptiness that
would eschew ..

And oh ...
... How I miss
... missing
... you

@phoenix february 18, 2008





Awwww thank you Frank...what a sweetie!!! :heart:

no photo
Wed 02/20/08 09:55 AM



Dang I'm being a sentimental fool today... :cry:

Good write (((MsWizard))) flowerforyou flowerforyou
I felt the emptiness all the way over here.


That's ok to be sentimental Teddy! That's why we write yes???

((TEDDY)) :heart: :heart: :heart:

LAMom's photo
Wed 02/20/08 11:06 AM
:heart: Ms Wiz :heart:

And oh ...
... How I miss
... missing
... you

Ms Lovely as he misses missing you,,, :cry:

klugman's photo
Wed 02/20/08 11:27 AM
:cry: flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Wed 02/20/08 11:45 AM
really niceflowerforyou

no photo
Wed 02/20/08 03:16 PM

:heart: Ms Wiz :heart:

And oh ...
... How I miss
... missing
... you

Ms Lovely as he misses missing you,,, :cry:


:heart: Denise:heart: What a dear heart you are....

no photo
Wed 02/20/08 03:16 PM

:cry: flowerforyou


Thank you Klugman...:heart: flowerforyou

no photo
Wed 02/20/08 03:17 PM

really niceflowerforyou


Thank you pkh..I appreciate it my friend...flowerforyou :heart:

Fadedspirit's photo
Wed 02/20/08 05:17 PM
Very nice and heartfelt. almost dropped a tear there.:smile:

no photo
Thu 02/21/08 09:18 AM

Very nice and heartfelt. almost dropped a tear there.:smile:


Awwww don' cry chickabeeeee......flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Thu 02/21/08 09:28 AM
:smile: flowerforyou

no photo
Fri 02/22/08 09:31 AM
Beautiful writing...from the heart. I'm sure it reminded most of us about someone in our past that's gone.flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Fri 02/22/08 05:04 PM

Beautiful writing...from the heart. I'm sure it reminded most of us about someone in our past that's gone.flowerforyou flowerforyou


Thank you pkd...long time no speak...how have you been? flowerforyou :heart: