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Topic: Take my hand
pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Tue 02/19/08 11:19 PM
Take my hand and lead the way Tell me all you want to say Whisper softly in my ear All the things I want to hear Kiss my lips and touch my skin Feel my passion deep within Pull me close and hold me near Take away my pain and fear In the brightness of the sun Show me that you are the one Enter my heart,break down the wall And be there to catch me if I fall Release my soul held deep within I'm ready now let love begin. BAS

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Tue 02/19/08 11:20 PM


cuppy59 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 17536	Tue 02/19/08 11:22 PM
Very nice

time_for_a_change Joined Sat 09/22/07 Posts: 315	Tue 02/19/08 11:31 PM
tell the story about when we got drunk and we were making out with that parking meter

cuppy59 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 17536	Tue 02/19/08 11:33 PM
Hey that parking meter had better lips than yours.

time_for_a_change Joined Sat 09/22/07 Posts: 315	Tue 02/19/08 11:34 PM
thats not nice

cuppy59 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 17536	Tue 02/19/08 11:36 PM
thats not nice You dared me to do it. Can I help if the steel was more chilling

time_for_a_change Joined Sat 09/22/07 Posts: 315	Tue 02/19/08 11:41 PM
you compare my kissing to the steel lifeless pole no how dare you my kisses are filled with passion wich would melt the coldest of hearts

CyPoet Joined Fri 01/11/08 Posts: 12494	Wed 02/20/08 12:34 AM
Wow!amazing gurlie.U are turning out 2 be quite a writer if I may say.Very deep & heart felt.I'm bearifically glad that the wall is down.I wish U the very best my dear friend in love,life & health.Godspeed!CyPoet(((bear~hug)))

shauna22 Joined Wed 01/16/08 Posts: 228	Wed 02/20/08 02:08 AM


frankfk Joined Sun 09/24/06 Posts: 5684	Wed 02/20/08 04:53 AM
WELL SAID PAM Take my hand and lead the way Tell me all you want to say Whisper softly in my ear All the things I want to hear Kiss my lips and touch my skin Feel my passion deep within Pull me close and hold me near Take away my pain and fear In the brightness of the sun Show me that you are the one Enter my heart,break down the wall And be there to catch me if I fall Release my soul held deep within I'm ready now let love begin. BAS

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Wed 02/20/08 06:11 AM
(((Pam)))

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Wed 02/20/08 09:35 AM
That was awesome

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Wed 02/20/08 11:03 AM
(((((( Pam )))))) Beautiful

klugman Joined Mon 03/19/07 Posts: 1776	Wed 02/20/08 11:14 AM
Very Nice

eileena9 Joined Fri 04/13/07 Posts: 28211	Wed 02/20/08 11:16 AM
Very nice Pam!

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Wed 02/20/08 12:03 PM
Thank you all,that means so much coming from some of the most gifted writers here.Thank you all for reading

robertsonm30 Joined Fri 01/18/08 Posts: 79	Wed 02/20/08 03:15 PM
great write i like it a lot

Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Wed 02/20/08 05:14 PM
Nice write. Strong emotion felt deep within.

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Wed 02/20/08 06:06 PM
Thank you Fadedspirit. Thank you Robert welcome to the site

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