Topic: §|tⁿ☻ I Failed My Mission | |
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Sitngrin
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Mon 02/18/08 12:34 AM
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You sent me an Angel, to test my heart
I failed You miserably, right from the start I almost feel demonic, like Satan himself Maybe I AM born of the pits of hell myself Perhaps my soul has been doomed for centuries now In this life, I thought I could change that somehow Do with me what you will, punish me as you see fit You've already taken my wings, my own fault I admit Why even bother with the struggle any more I might as well burn in hell, for no longer can I soar Perhaps I will just let this life run it's course No longer seeking Your guidance, absolving my remorse If I'm cursed to burn and bound to the abyss Because I fell off the chosen path and became amiss YOU sent me here to this place to perform a single task Now my life is hell, because I forgot what it you asked One small reminder, why will You not tell me my mission You're lack of willingness to speak to me has taken all of my ambition ©2008 Den Wedding. All rights reserved |
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Good one bro.
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I liked that thanx. Here is something that kind of parallels part of that.
As I soar through the sky rivlets of wax flow from my wings on a blistering journey down my skin. I fly higher. Though my flesh melts away, I continue to rise. Tormented, with pain as my guide, I reach for the light, watching as all that I am slips through my fingers. Broken and falling, I can not help but think, I almost reached the sun. |
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Good one bro. TYVM Mr. Yeast ![]() |
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I liked that thanx. Here is something that kind of parallels part of that. As I soar through the sky rivlets of wax flow from my wings on a blistering journey down my skin. I fly higher. Though my flesh melts away, I continue to rise. Tormented, with pain as my guide, I reach for the light, watching as all that I am slips through my fingers. Broken and falling, I can not help but think, I almost reached the sun. I like yours as well, nice job! ![]() |
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Hmmm, I think I'll leave this one for LAMom her gentle style may be more appropo.....
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must there be a mission?
What if experiencing life ... celebrating life ... living life ... is the mission... ![]() |
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must there be a mission? What if experiencing life ... celebrating life ... living life ... is the mission... ![]() You're always such the optimist! ![]() ![]() |
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Hmmm, I think I'll leave this one for LAMom her gentle style may be more appropo..... Now you are scaring me ![]() |
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well, that certainly was an interesting write to say the least.
would you care to have the answer to that question so eloquently put? Inquiring minds want to know |
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well, that certainly was an interesting write to say the least. would you care to have the answer to that question so eloquently put? Inquiring minds want to know Which question would that be? ~Den |
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another great one,to soaring again
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another great one,to soaring again ![]() I'm very very glad that you enjoyed it! ![]() ![]() ![]() ~Den |
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