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Topic: If I told you...
creativesoul Joined Mon 04/16/07 Posts: 9166	Fri 02/01/08 08:51 PM
If I told you I loved you... would you feel my words? If I told you I feel you... would you taste my tears? If I told you I taste you... would you hear my strength? If I told you I hear you... would you see my smile? If I told you I see you... would you smell my springtime? If I told you I smell you... would you hold me closer? If I told you I loved you... would you feel my words?

sealove42 Joined Sun 12/16/07 Posts: 438	Fri 02/01/08 08:53 PM
Is this where I say if I told you I love you would you hold it against me... smile nice write.. TaB

boneyjoe Joined Sun 12/09/07 Posts: 6196	Fri 02/01/08 08:58 PM
i think it's if i told ya if u had a beautiful BODY would u hole it againts me

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Fri 02/01/08 09:00 PM
Tell her... tell her... tell her... Good write Creativesoul!

LightVoice Joined Thu 08/09/07 Posts: 7405	Fri 02/01/08 09:06 PM
very nice

bgeorge Joined Fri 09/14/07 Posts: 7850	Fri 02/01/08 09:12 PM
you'll never know til you tell her

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Fri 02/01/08 11:17 PM
How is it that you seem to know when I have had a bad day ... and have just the perfect things to say ... I feel you in every heartbeat ... I touch you with every breath ... I love you with every cell ... ...and yes, my love ... I always feel your words ... and am loved and embraced by them ... always loved ... always embraced ... by you ...

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Fri 02/01/08 11:20 PM Edited by kc0003 on Fri 02/01/08 11:21 PM
How is it that you seem to know when I have had a bad day ... and have just the perfect things to say ... I feel you in every heartbeat ... I touch you with every breath ... I love you with every cell ... ...and yes, my love ... I always feel your words ... and am loved and embraced by them ... always loved ... always embraced ... by you ... ahhh this is nice to see as well nice write creative

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Fri 02/01/08 11:26 PM
That is a good write Michael. Sherrie, sounds like you two are in sync with each other like Dena and me.

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76464	Fri 02/01/08 11:54 PM
Awesome words to and awesome lady sweet

creativesoul Joined Mon 04/16/07 Posts: 9166	Sat 02/02/08 08:04 AM
It is, as it has always been, always will be... effortlessly natural. Thank you all...

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sat 02/02/08 04:46 PM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww you did without even speaking a word and she felt them,,, Most beautiful

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Sun 02/03/08 01:21 AM Edited by ArtGurl on Sun 02/03/08 01:21 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww you did without even speaking a word and she felt them,,, Most beautiful Yes she did ((mom)) ... yes she did ...

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Sun 02/03/08 02:52 AM
Poppin in to say hi y'all. Art must've been busy tonight cause normally these posts are like nannoseconds apart - most awesome and enjoyable to behold. Okay, nuff mush for one morning, I need grass to roll on. Grrrrrr, its buried under snow. Hmmmmm, wonder what snowshoe rabbits----they're bunnies, duh, neeeever mind. Horse style snort. Wonder if I can learn how to whinny proper rather than whine....................wordsnoisessnortssoundsweatherfeathers bonk, bumps into a wall on the way out...Manners! Ooo-have a good mornin y'all!

BonnyMiss Joined Thu 05/10/07 Posts: 15342	Sun 02/03/08 02:59 AM
Very nice, now, phone her

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Sun 02/03/08 03:30 AM
Really nice to see and hear

Noden Joined Mon 06/11/07 Posts: 5050	Sun 02/03/08 04:47 AM
wowzie, wow, wow, now go tell her

Dragoness Joined Wed 10/17/07 Posts: 23320	Sun 02/03/08 09:03 AM
Creative I enjoyed it. Very nice