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Freedom to choose, with freewill given
In life and love, it is soul driven The choices we make define who we are Our desires are like secrets trapped in a jar We choose items and people to hold and to love We long for our choices to fit like a glove The items unchosen, inanimate it’s true But the people unchosen, left lonely and blue Original By, Brandie |
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Nice poem
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Nice poem .hi |
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hi please come let's chat me |
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"Our desires are like secrets trapped in a jar" is a great line.
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Edited by
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Mon 11/03/25 06:32 AM
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We Choose Our Right,
For The Entire Of Life, Path Of Darkness, Still Waiting For A Light, Confusion Of Mind,(thoughts). Unchosen Could Have Meant, For Some-ONEs Bright Life.
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Quiet sounds
and thoughts deep into the night like secrets We are less than everything yet you are everything to me I must say this is quite beautiful |
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Nice poem. Kinda relate to the unchosen ones
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Freedom to choose, with freewill given In life and love, it is soul driven The choices we make define who we are Our desires are like secrets trapped in a jar We choose items and people to hold and to love We long for our choices to fit like a glove The items unchosen, inanimate it’s true But the people unchosen, left lonely and blue Original By, Brandie That’s beautifully written… it really leans into how choices shape connection. Do you feel like we always choose freely, though? It's also an nteresting idea… but I’m not sure the ‘unloved and lonely’ part is always that simple. Sometimes not being chosen just means different paths, not lesser value. I’m more curious though about what in your life inspired that thought?” |
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I really ike this
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