Topic: Let it go, You are Strong! 🌹✨ | |
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May be, I did not know about you,
All I knew was all that you shared that I trusted without a clue! May be, I felt that your traits were the one I adored, All I understood were the morals you adhered! May be, I was not aware on how was your day, All that I waited for you to share but there hasn't been any messages from your way! May be, I expected you to care for me once a week, All that I expected was ONLY from you when I was weak! May be, I was not realising your priorities, All that I longed was a single thought from you but not among your majorities! May be, I cared more for you, All that I am is all that I can with whom I love, there's nothing new! May be, I wasn't more interesting to sustain, All that I shared was everything from my soul without a lie to stain! May be, I kept you as my first thought among everything, All that I felt was not to give you the loneliness, a sure thing! May be, I did not doubt if you had forgotten me, All that I trusted was all that you promised me! May be, I turned as a temporary option in your world, All that I owned is expected now to be sold! May be, I do not have rights on you anymore, All that I am supposed to do is to walk away, there's no one for me, no more! May be, there are better people to own you, All that I'm expected, is to vacate the space for a better world for you that's new! May be... It is actually the end!! ---------------------------- It's the sore cry behind the "may be" phrases that a person has to assume and undergo when the loved one IGNORES permanently or walks away or diminishes WITHOUT any communication in a relationship! Such loss or wounds cannot go for a healing so easily! Who should be trusted and who will care for your soul in the bonding? Questions that remain unanswered!! ---------- May be, you kept longing for that person, May be, you haven't slept for weeks, May be, you are in a sick bed, May be, you cried alot checking if there were messages from that person, May be, your soul has started to ache!! ------------------------ You are worth, let it go and move on! May be, it's the end, For all that it caused yourself to bend! May be, you should realise, If someone wants to be a part on your life, they'll make an effort to be in it, that's wise! May be, you should not trust, The ones who don't action their words but give mixed signals for they fear of getting committed for being honest! It's a beginning, For being yourself and not losing your soul for someone who did not value it, you've been crowned for being strong again by winning!! - Aatheera (Dedicated to all those who are going through this painful days - You are worth for the one who is waiting to love you! ) (Dedicated to all those who have done this to your loved one - decide who/what you want in life, communicate your emotions and give your priority to that right person in life!) |
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Nice write .
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May be used in all forms
With all the required norms Spelling out the odds Specific on some codes Every word has flows Entire poem glows May be The poem inspire someone Someone relish the doings Doings may find change Change comes in every mind Mind realises the pain Pain release be a gain Nice dedication Dedicated narration Let it be an inspiration! |
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Julie, Vibes
Your words are a console, For the pains, the sickness experienced by that person's soul! If the ignored soul is in sickness, The one who ignored that soul can giggle, make fun, play, date another, be on holiday or do whatever! But atleast a few minutes realisation of the damage caused by their ignorance would be the most needed at this situation ever! (unable to say a thank you as it's written as a console for the most painful hearts going through this struggle) |
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May be, I did not know about you, All I knew was all that you shared that I trusted without a clue! May be, I felt that your traits were the one I adored, All I understood were the morals you adhered! May be, I was not aware on how was your day, All that I waited for you to share but there hasn't been any messages from your way! May be, I expected you to care for me once a week, All that I expected was ONLY from you when I was weak! May be, I was not realising your priorities, All that I longed was a single thought from you but not among your majorities! May be, I cared more for you, All that I am is all that I can with whom I love, there's nothing new! May be, I wasn't more interesting to sustain, All that I shared was everything from my soul without a lie to stain! May be, I kept you as my first thought among everything, All that I felt was not to give you the loneliness, a sure thing! May be, I did not doubt if you had forgotten me, All that I trusted was all that you promised me! May be, I turned as a temporary option in your world, All that I owned is expected now to be sold! May be, I do not have rights on you anymore, All that I am supposed to do is to walk away, there's no one for me, no more! May be, there are better people to own you, All that I'm expected, is to vacate the space for a better world for you that's new! May be... It is actually the end!! ---------------------------- It's the sore cry behind the "may be" phrases that a person has to assume and undergo when the loved one IGNORES permanently or walks away or diminishes WITHOUT any communication in a relationship! Such loss or wounds cannot go for a healing so easily! Who should be trusted and who will care for your soul in the bonding? Questions that remain unanswered!! ---------- May be, you kept longing for that person, May be, you haven't slept for weeks, May be, you are in a sick bed, May be, you cried alot checking if there were messages from that person, May be, your soul has started to ache!! ------------------------ You are worth, let it go and move on! May be, it's the end, For all that it caused yourself to bend! May be, you should realise, If someone wants to be a part on your life, they'll make an effort to be in it, that's wise! May be, you should not trust, The ones who don't action their words but give mixed signals for they fear of getting committed for being honest! It's a beginning, For being yourself and not losing your soul for someone who did not value it, you've been crowned for being strong again by winning!! - Aatheera (Dedicated to all those who are going through this painful days - You are worth for the one who is waiting to love you! ) (Dedicated to all those who have done this to your loved one - decide who/what you want in life, communicate your emotions and give your priority to that right person in life!) Aatheera, you have a way with your writing! I felt this is the story of my life! Thanks and keep sharing! I look forward for more! 🥰 |
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Aatheera, you have a way with your writing! I felt this is the story of my life! Thanks and keep sharing! I look forward for more! 殺 Sparky Worried to hear you've faced this too.. Take care dearest ❤ you glow in your thoughts always and inspire me, I'm learning alot from all your thoughtful messages in the topics |
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The best part of your lines is...they are based on emotions and experiences which many tend to relate easily...
Another great piece from you |
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The best part of your lines is...they are based on emotions and experiences which many tend to relate easily...
Another great piece from you |
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I've enjoyed this poem very much . God's blessings be upon thee . Thank you for sharing this one . |
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I've enjoyed this poem very much . God's blessings be upon thee . Thank you for sharing this one . Nice to hear from you, Paul. I treasure the kindness and blessings |
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I've enjoyed this poem very much . God's blessings be upon thee . Thank you for sharing this one .
Nice to hear from you, Paul. I treasure the kindness and blessings Thank You for your Reply . You have been generous and Gracious always . However , saying Happy Independence Day to you , 75 Times. |
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Thank You for your Reply . You have been generous and Gracious always . However , saying Happy Independence Day to you , 75 Times. Thankyou Paul |
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Amazing
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i was struck with the Priorities Line....thats what i am going through...
Always a good poem Kindred..Love u always. |
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Amazing Nice to hear from you |
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i was struck with the Priorities Line....thats what i am going through... Always a good poem Kindred..Love u always. My Kindred ❤ Your kindness is so graceful..Love you always too |
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Bravo, lovely Aatheera, Bravo!
I read your words to my sister and she said you have articulated the universal language of love and heartbreak so beautifully. |
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Bravo, lovely Aatheera, Bravo!
I read your words to my sister and she said you have articulated the universal language of love and heartbreak so beautifully. Realising the importance that you give to each of my versions, it brings a lot of peace to me, Dearest Merry |
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wow wow wow wow i keep on saying this
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wow wow wow wow i keep on saying this |
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