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Wherever I go,
Whatever i do, You are always on my mind, In my thoughts and in my feelings too.. Whenever I want to give up, Feeling defeated and all alone, I sense you are by my side, And cheering me on.. Yet when I am better, And hope returns, You are already gone, I am sad, Coz once again Iam all alone.. Why can't you stay forever, If we are meant to be, We are so good together, Is it hard to see? If only you have the courage, To hold my hand, And face this world with me, I will call you mine, And for better or worse, Together we will share our destiny... |
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beautiful
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beautiful Thank you :-) |
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Nice poem .
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Nice poem . Thank you :-) |
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Great flow of words enjoyed~~
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Great flow of words enjoyed~~ Thank you :-) |
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Wherever I go, Whatever i do, You are always on my mind, In my thoughts and in my feelings too.. Whenever I want to give up, Feeling defeated and all alone, I sense you are by my side, And cheering me on.. Yet when I am better, And hope returns, You are already gone, I am sad, Coz once again Iam all alone.. Why can't you stay forever, If we are meant to be, We are so good together, Is it hard to see? If only you have the courage, To hold my hand, And face this world with me, I will call you mine, And for better or worse, Together we will share our destiny... Great Words - Nice poem - |
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Well designed
Versus defined Nice invite penned Spice fully derived Ever Jasmine has flavour Never fails to spreadover Nice invite! |
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Let me address it, This Way : If you can't be A POET ,at least you can be A NOVELIST Poetry is the shortest path between Literature and Philosophy , Aaaaaaaaand Philosophy is the essence of of what's happening in day to days Life . All your piece of work is spontaneous overflowing with rich feelings .Kuddos . |
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Let me address it, This Way : If you can't be A POET ,at least you can be A NOVELIST Poetry is the shortest path between Literature and Philosophy , Aaaaaaaaand Philosophy is the essence of of what's happening in day to days Life . All your piece of work is spontaneous overflowing with rich feelings .Kuddos . Thank you :-))) You are good with words too! |
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Let me address it, This Way : If you can't be A POET ,at least you can be A NOVELIST Poetry is the shortest path between Literature and Philosophy , Aaaaaaaaand Philosophy is the essence of of what's happening in day to days Life . All your piece of work is spontaneous overflowing with rich feelings .Kuddos . Thank you :-))) You are good with words too! You always know how to make me laugh . Thank You for your Kindness . Now, if anyone ask me to define POEMS , I'll not hesitate to take your Name without Fame. |
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