Topic: Our destiny
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Fri 01/21/22 07:44 PM
Wherever I go,
Whatever i do,
You are always on my mind,
In my thoughts and in my feelings too..

Whenever I want to give up,
Feeling defeated and all alone,
I sense you are by my side,
And cheering me on..

Yet when I am better,
And hope returns,
You are already gone,
I am sad,
Coz once again Iam all alone..

Why can't you stay forever,
If we are meant to be,
We are so good together,
Is it hard to see?

If only you have the courage,
To hold my hand,
And face this world with me,
I will call you mine,
And for better or worse,
Together we will share our destiny...

David Michael 's photo
Fri 01/21/22 07:56 PM
beautiful

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Fri 01/21/22 09:17 PM

beautiful

Thank you :-)

JulieABush's photo
Sat 01/22/22 12:47 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

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Sat 01/22/22 01:37 AM

Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

Thank you :-)

TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 01/22/22 03:43 AM
Great flow of words enjoyed~~

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Sat 01/22/22 12:35 PM

Great flow of words enjoyed~~


Thank you :-)

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Sat 01/22/22 11:21 PM

Wherever I go,
Whatever i do,
You are always on my mind,
In my thoughts and in my feelings too..

Whenever I want to give up,
Feeling defeated and all alone,
I sense you are by my side,
And cheering me on..

Yet when I am better,
And hope returns,
You are already gone,
I am sad,
Coz once again Iam all alone..

Why can't you stay forever,
If we are meant to be,
We are so good together,
Is it hard to see?

If only you have the courage,
To hold my hand,
And face this world with me,
I will call you mine,
And for better or worse,
Together we will share our destiny...



Great Words - Nice poem -

Vibes's photo
Sun 01/23/22 02:10 AM
Well designed
Versus defined
Nice invite penned
Spice fully derived

Ever Jasmine has flavour
Never fails to spreadover
Nice invite!

Laska Paul 's photo
Sun 01/23/22 08:41 AM


Let me address it, This Way :
If you can't be A POET ,at least you can be A NOVELIST
Poetry is the shortest path between Literature and Philosophy , Aaaaaaaaand Philosophy is the essence of of what's happening in day to days Life .
All your piece of work is spontaneous overflowing with rich feelings .Kuddos .

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Sun 01/23/22 09:00 PM



Let me address it, This Way :
If you can't be A POET ,at least you can be A NOVELIST
Poetry is the shortest path between Literature and Philosophy , Aaaaaaaaand Philosophy is the essence of of what's happening in day to days Life .
All your piece of work is spontaneous overflowing with rich feelings .Kuddos .


Thank you :-)))
You are good with words too!

Laska Paul 's photo
Mon 01/24/22 03:33 AM




Let me address it, This Way :
If you can't be A POET ,at least you can be A NOVELIST
Poetry is the shortest path between Literature and Philosophy , Aaaaaaaaand Philosophy is the essence of of what's happening in day to days Life .
All your piece of work is spontaneous overflowing with rich feelings .Kuddos .


Thank you :-)))
You are good with words too!


You always know how to make me laugh . Thank You for your Kindness . Now, if anyone ask me to define POEMS , I'll not hesitate to take your Name without Fame.