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Topic: Shadows and footsteps
Unknow Joined Mon 04/22/19 Posts: 150	Wed 12/29/21 01:07 AM Edited by Unknow on Wed 12/29/21 01:39 AM
How you walked into my life, Without making a sound, There were no shadows, Nor footsteps on the ground.. Still I kept you in my heart, Without knowing you well, I fell so quickly for you, As if you had cast a spell.. Then this situation happened, And the distance drove us apart, I am still wondering, Is it too late for a new start.. I am trying to find, A way to your heart, To win you back, But how? There are no shadows, And you didn't leave any footsteps..

Unknow Joined Tue 04/28/20 Posts: 2930	Wed 12/29/21 01:12 AM
Babe ❤ Plenty of fish in the sea.

Ava Adore Joined Fri 10/08/21 Posts: 442	Wed 12/29/21 01:14 AM
I know exactly how this feels....

Unknow Joined Mon 04/22/19 Posts: 150	Wed 12/29/21 01:41 AM
Babe ❤ Plenty of fish in the sea.

Unknow Joined Sat 03/19/16 Posts: 84	Wed 12/29/21 01:42 AM
How you walked into my life, Without making a sound, There were no shadows, Nor footsteps on the ground.. Still I kept you in my heart, Without knowing you well, I fell so quickly for you, As if you had cast a spell.. Then this situation happened, And the distance drove us apart, I am still wondering, Is it too late for a new start.. I am trying to find, A way to your heart, To win you back, But how? There are no shadows, And you didn't leave any footsteps.. Beautiful lines - but I feel cry when I read it

Unknow Joined Mon 04/22/19 Posts: 150	Wed 12/29/21 01:43 AM
I know exactly how this feels.... Keep hope..I write sad stuff but I have not lost hope. Wishing you good things in life

Unknow Joined Sat 03/19/16 Posts: 84	Wed 12/29/21 01:45 AM
How you walked into my life, Without making a sound, There were no shadows, Nor footsteps on the ground.. Still I kept you in my heart, Without knowing you well, I fell so quickly for you, As if you had cast a spell.. Then this situation happened, And the distance drove us apart, I am still wondering, Is it too late for a new start.. I am trying to find, A way to your heart, To win you back, But how? There are no shadows, And you didn't leave any footsteps.. Beautiful lines - I feel cry after I read it ... So much pain it shows

Unknow Joined Mon 04/22/19 Posts: 150	Wed 12/29/21 01:52 AM
How you walked into my life, Without making a sound, There were no shadows, Nor footsteps on the ground.. Still I kept you in my heart, Without knowing you well, I fell so quickly for you, As if you had cast a spell.. Then this situation happened, And the distance drove us apart, I am still wondering, Is it too late for a new start.. I am trying to find, A way to your heart, To win you back, But how? There are no shadows, And you didn't leave any footsteps.. Beautiful lines - I feel cry after I read it ... So much pain it shows Life

Unknow Joined Sat 03/19/16 Posts: 84	Wed 12/29/21 01:56 AM
How you walked into my life, Without making a sound, There were no shadows, Nor footsteps on the ground.. Still I kept you in my heart, Without knowing you well, I fell so quickly for you, As if you had cast a spell.. Then this situation happened, And the distance drove us apart, I am still wondering, Is it too late for a new start.. I am trying to find, A way to your heart, To win you back, But how? There are no shadows, And you didn't leave any footsteps.. Beautiful lines - I feel cry after I read it ... So much pain it shows Life yes

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3165	Wed 12/29/21 03:44 AM
Nice poem .

Unknow Joined Mon 04/22/19 Posts: 150	Wed 12/29/21 11:34 AM
Nice poem . Thank you

trłnłty zerø Joined Tue 12/28/21 Posts: 170	Wed 12/29/21 01:44 PM
cut deep like a razor blade

Arman Joined Sat 06/06/20 Posts: 1	Wed 12/29/21 01:46 PM
Babe ❤ Plenty of fish in the sea. yes

Laska Paul Joined Sun 11/08/20 Posts: 19459	Fri 12/31/21 11:02 AM
Inborn Talent !!!! When I am Sad , I just go through Your Poems ! Then comes a Smile on My Face.

Unknow Joined Mon 04/22/19 Posts: 150	Sat 01/01/22 01:20 PM
Inborn Talent !!!! When I am Sad , I just go through Your Poems ! Then comes a Smile on My Face. Thank you :-)

Unknow Joined Fri 11/12/21 Posts: 23	Thu 01/06/22 12:21 AM
How you walked into my life, Without making a sound, There were no shadows, Nor footsteps on the ground.. Still I kept you in my heart, Without knowing you well, I fell so quickly for you, As if you had cast a spell.. Then this situation happened, And the distance drove us apart, I am still wondering, Is it too late for a new start.. I am trying to find, A way to your heart, To win you back, But how? There are no shadows, And you didn't leave any footsteps.. behind each line there is a honest emotion hidden with a positive hope.. wishing you the best always and let your wishes turn true ❤

Unknow Joined Mon 04/22/19 Posts: 150	Thu 01/06/22 10:38 PM
How you walked into my life, Without making a sound, There were no shadows, Nor footsteps on the ground.. Still I kept you in my heart, Without knowing you well, I fell so quickly for you, As if you had cast a spell.. Then this situation happened, And the distance drove us apart, I am still wondering, Is it too late for a new start.. I am trying to find, A way to your heart, To win you back, But how? There are no shadows, And you didn't leave any footsteps.. behind each line there is a honest emotion hidden with a positive hope.. wishing you the best always and let your wishes turn true ❤ Thank you and happy new year :-)

Laska Paul Joined Sun 11/08/20 Posts: 19459	Thu 01/06/22 11:42 PM
One thing I like about you is that, You never try to compete with another poets . Just Like your Name, You are like a Flower . Flowers don't compete with another flower next to it ... IT JUST Blooooooooooms !

Vibes Joined Mon 05/31/21 Posts: 47599	Fri 01/07/22 12:23 AM
Feelings outthrown Feathery touchdown Longing for hanging Lively said everything Every line is stuffy Endorsing thoughts hefty Kudos to you Jasmine

Unknow Joined Fri 11/12/21 Posts: 23	Fri 01/07/22 12:35 AM
Thank you and happy new year :-) Happy New Year to you too