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Faded emotions!
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Lovely one Aatheera. u inspire me thankyou Arvind, All the best, keep writing your quotes n poems too..stay blessed 
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Nice one Aatheera - Keep Going .... God bless you Thankyou @Philips sir, |
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Faded emotions!
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Some good words to appreciate someone's writing .
1. You are great at conveying things literally. 2. You are a great story teller . 3. You are a good Story weaver 4. You are strong in drafting your poems 5. You are superior in your thought process. As a reader I enjoying reading your poems but the whole thing is that you always have a sad ending . You can even twist your poem to make a Happy Ending just like a Movie . Readers mostly love Happy Ending ! That's only my Point of View . Actually, I am no one to Judge your Poems . But .... Keep Your work going on. thankyou for appreciating, when some emotions excite or hit me, I record them as a poem or a learning.. We all know the happy ending of it but if I present the view on how I sustained or handled, it might be consoling to those who are facing it alone or it might provoke new solutions for them.. That's the intention n honestly I can't change n present a different ending.. Whatever emotions i truly went through will be expressed in all my versions, thanks for reading them  |
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A little girl kept shaking the branches of a tree jumping high on her foot,
Expecting the rain drops to sprinkle from the leaves forgetting the pain behind her effort! It was hard for her to jump and shake them, She started to lose the confidence in her aim! The birds enjoyed flying so joyful amidst the moving branches, Finally she felt tired and sat under the tree sorrowful! Birds suddenly realised the branches aren't moving, They held the branches and started hopping! The branches moved so nicely! Birds kept doing it seamlessly! All the rain drops from the branches were sprinkling down, The little girl finally enjoyed the shower of droplets until she moved on! The efforts she put in before! May have made her suffer! But the efforts she put in, Was benefitted by the birds indirectly which fulfilled what she aimed in! Sometimes we put our efforts forgetting our tiredness, We end up getting disappointed losing hopefulness! But God knows our efforts and our nature! And He comes through someone unexpectedly with His plans for us to nurture! Put hopes in your efforts and do the best! Even if they are done without rest! Your wishes will turn true if honest, As God will do the rest! -Aatheera |
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Faded emotions!
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Faded emotions - Thanks Aatheera for the cute poem. God bless you Thankyou Philip, Stay blessed and have good times
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Faded emotions!
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Another good poem from Aatheera
Situation explained Satire is combined Life always move on Living as it goes on We are to stand on Wishing to be well on Thank you
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Shadows and footsteps
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Thank you and happy new year :-) Happy New Year to you too
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Faded emotions!
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Nice poem  .Thankyou Julie 
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Faded emotions!
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Emotions Faded Emotions or Motion Of Fades..... You were Dealing with all these, It was Healing Me all Time. You went off thoughts of missing Me, I was going through Blessings of way in Prayers from You. Both were unable to connect, But Both were going on flow, Same as the Clock Time. Seconds of pulses like Heart Beat.  For a moment of apart, Has brought such moments, Didn't You remember or Didn't I rewinded... The Flash Back Of Our Being Apart, Which was supposed to be an End, But It was the beginning of new Life. Lighting Of New Emotions. You in Me & I in You Love You was the closeness chapter... Still Bonded...  only for YOU ........Robin finally, faded emotions n colorful emotions had a climax as expected ❤ |
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Faded emotions!
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Lonely were my days!
Silence was on my face! Did I miss you Or control that tear? My emotions for you stood very far without a fear! Did I smile or blush? I did not even feel anything as such! Did I struggle with a pain or a worry? I didnt talk or share with any! Sometimes and somedays, We are forced to experience these faded days! When love and routine gets disturbed by unusual things, When we had to cope up and still fly with our wings! It's hard to express or accept so soon, When emotions remain unaddressed without a interesting tune! Life is all about passing those narrow caves, As we are expected to adjust the darkness and live our days! Faded emotions doesn't easily glitter, Love has to bring back those moments of togetherness to heal the incomplete heart that's prone to wither! Until then let's follow the usual way, As responsibilities pushes us to run our day! -Aatheera |
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Shadows and footsteps
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How you walked into my life,
Without making a sound, There were no shadows, Nor footsteps on the ground.. Still I kept you in my heart, Without knowing you well, I fell so quickly for you, As if you had cast a spell.. Then this situation happened, And the distance drove us apart, I am still wondering, Is it too late for a new start.. I am trying to find, A way to your heart, To win you back, But how? There are no shadows, And you didn't leave any footsteps.. behind each line there is a honest emotion hidden with a positive hope.. wishing you the best always and let your wishes turn true ❤ |
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Not again...
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True & looking forward to reading more of your poems :-) Sure, let's greet each other thru our poems
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Not again...
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Thank you and I enjoy reading your poems too..They are way better than mine :-) happy to know you liked them your uniqueness can't be compared or matched with anyone else.. that's a blessing in you
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Not again...
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the flow in which the emotions start n progresses n finally ends is so realistic in your poem,
I always adore your poems, keep writing them
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A😇 Poet Poems 😇A..
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  Thankyou Robin |
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Purpose of life!
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Great Hopes.
Great Dreams! Nice poem, @Aatheera Thankyou @Kevin Sir, Wishing you Merry Christmas and a Prosperous New Year
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Celebrate the Light in You!
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 Merry Christmas   &A Prosperous Happy New Year 2022 Thankyou RobinWishing YOU & all OUR loved ones,   Merry Christmas & a Safe, Healthy, Joyful and a Peaceful New Year 2022
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