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Edited by
Jasmine
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Wed 12/08/21 01:17 AM
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Who knew we would meet again,
Smiling brightly, Sipping coffee, Chatting and enjoying the falling rain.. How we act pleasant, Trying to keep things light, Joking and laughing, Yet praying not to have another fight.. We were so close once, Now we feel a distance between us, Once we were friends, Now feel like strangers, Who don't want a fuss.. Slowly we get up, With fake cheerfulness, We say goodbye, It's still raining, But our emotions are dull and dry.. We walk away, With unsaid words and pain, We lost our chance, Our meeting was in vain, We didn't have courage, So now we suffer in silence, Cursed and hurt, This is our fate, Till we meet again.. |
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A natural and common pain portrayed in a simple manner. Nice
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Nice poem
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Who knew we would meet again,
Smiling brightly, Sipping coffee, Chatting and enjoying the falling rain.. How we act pleasant, Trying to keep things light, Joking and laughing, Yet praying not to have another fight.. We were so close once, Now we feel a distance between us, Once we were friends, Now feel like strangers, Who don't want a fuss.. Slowly we get up, With fake cheerfulness, We say goodbye, It's still raining, But our emotions are dull and dry.. We walk away, With unsaid words and pain, We lost our chance, Our meeting was in vain, We didn't have courage, So now we suffer in silence, Cursed and hurt, This is our fate, Till we meet again.. Nice Poem...i felt the emotion.keep on writing. |
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A natural and common pain portrayed in a simple manner. Nice Thank you 
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Nice poem .Thank you
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Nice Poem...i felt the emotion.keep on writing. Thank you
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and nice poem
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and nice poem Thank you
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After reading other answers , I felt that they have already covered all the Points which I wanted to make. I just want to say I'm Impressed .A meaningful approach , indeed I liked it how your Poem emphasizes on a Lovely Friend and then becoming a Stranger Again. The feeling of the poem was so clear and to me ,getting that across is the most Important Ingredient of a poem . I hope you don't stop and keep on writing .! |
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After reading other answers , I felt that they have already covered all the Points which I wanted to make.
I just want to say I'm Impressed .A meaningful approach , indeed I liked it how your Poem emphasizes on a Lovely Friend and then becoming a Stranger Again. The feeling of the poem was so clear and to me ,getting that across is the most Important Ingredient of a poem . I hope you don't stop and keep on writing .! You got it correct and will continue writing unless I get a writer's block
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After reading other answers , I felt that they have already covered all the Points which I wanted to make.
I just want to say I'm Impressed .A meaningful approach , indeed I liked it how your Poem emphasizes on a Lovely Friend and then becoming a Stranger Again. The feeling of the poem was so clear and to me ,getting that across is the most Important Ingredient of a poem . I hope you don't stop and keep on writing .! You got it correct and will continue writing unless I get a writer's block
You are completely wrong . Aaaaaaaand you will continue writing unless you get a " Writer's Certificate " However , wishing you a Mind Blowing Merry Christmas right in Advance. |
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You are completely wrong . Aaaaaaaand you will continue writing unless you get a " Writer's Certificate "
However , wishing you a Mind Blowing Merry Christmas right in Advance. Thanks and same to you
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Nice expression of a break
Keep on going. Meet in rain Went in vain Even with a pain All in a mess Because of fuss What to guess Not out of fate May be its hate Now not too late Rise to the feet Fix another date Out throw this state Keep the mind open Patch up the broken Let it not again happen ? |
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