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Wed 12/15/21 01:57 AM
You are completely wrong . Aaaaaaaand you will continue writing unless you get a " Writer's Certificate "
However , wishing you a Mind Blowing Merry Christmas right in Advance.

Thanks and same to you :slight_smile:

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Tue 12/14/21 10:58 AM
After reading other answers , I felt that they have already covered all the Points which I wanted to make.
I just want to say I'm Impressed .A meaningful approach , indeed I liked it how your Poem emphasizes on a Lovely Friend and then becoming a Stranger Again. The feeling of the poem was so clear and to me ,getting that across is the most Important Ingredient of a poem . I hope you don't stop and keep on writing .!

You got it correct :thumbsup: and will continue writing unless I get a writer's block :slight_smile:

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Thu 12/09/21 01:39 PM
and nice poem

Thank you :slight_smile:

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Wed 12/08/21 08:51 PM
Nice Poem...i felt the emotion.keep on writing.

Thank you :slight_smile:

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Wed 12/08/21 08:50 PM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

Thank you :slight_smile:

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Wed 12/08/21 08:49 PM
A natural and common pain portrayed in a simple manner. Nice

Thank you :slight_smile:

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Wed 12/08/21 01:15 AM
Edited by Jasmine on Wed 12/08/21 01:17 AM
Who knew we would meet again,
Smiling brightly,
Sipping coffee,
Chatting and enjoying the falling rain..

How we act pleasant,
Trying to keep things light,
Joking and laughing,
Yet praying not to have another fight..

We were so close once,
Now we feel a distance between us,
Once we were friends,
Now feel like strangers,
Who don't want a fuss..

Slowly we get up,
With fake cheerfulness,
We say goodbye,
It's still raining,
But our emotions are dull and dry..

We walk away,
With unsaid words and pain,
We lost our chance,
Our meeting was in vain,
We didn't have courage,
So now we suffer in silence,
Cursed and hurt,
This is our fate,
Till we meet again..


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Sat 12/04/21 11:38 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

Thank you:slight_smile:

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Fri 12/03/21 03:30 PM
Now is the time for joy and delight,
To forget past issues and fights,
Let's be nice and compassionate,
For this is an opportunity for a new start,
Let's celebrate and honour,
Our friends and more importantly family,
So here's wishing everyone,
A very Merry Christmas,
Peace, love and light,
And as much happiness as there can be...

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Fri 12/03/21 01:05 PM
Rite nw pm.

will soon :-)

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Fri 12/03/21 01:05 PM
Wow..I read it several times and I kept putting music in my head to it..very well written..awesome!!!

Thank you :-)