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Topic: Puddled Snapshots
technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2629	Sat 10/23/21 01:01 AM
Brushed by the wind of her breath on my cheek. Sunlit the warmth of her closeness, slowly melting many frozen frames. My armored cloak freely sacrificed, thrown over puddled snapshots, soaking-up every scintilla. While she is out of reach, this savoring sponge may cool my brow, staving off the burning heat.

Vibes Joined Mon 05/31/21 Posts: 48135	Sat 10/23/21 02:59 AM
The power of nearness Beautifully coined Think u r safe. Good.

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2629	Sat 10/23/21 08:37 AM
The power of nearness Beautifully coined Think u r safe. Good. Thanks, Peppa.

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3189	Sun 10/24/21 01:09 AM
Nice poem(s) .

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2629	Sun 10/24/21 11:56 AM
Nice poem(s) .

Unknow Joined Mon 11/05/07 Posts: 64077	Tue 10/26/21 01:40 PM
I always enjoy reading your prose. Thanks for sharing.

Aatheera Joined Wed 10/06/21 Posts: 356	Tue 10/26/21 01:44 PM
so well written, Nice

Tammy Joined Fri 10/08/21 Posts: 37	Tue 10/26/21 04:44 PM
Very well written

Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54283	Wed 10/27/21 07:29 AM
SUPER

Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54283	Wed 10/27/21 07:46 AM
Feeling her presence close in me, With the flow of wind as her soul entering in me. Body has frozen eyes is closed, Feeling her My heart arouse. Breath is sensing deeper in enclose.. She is not here, opening eyes.. Oh Dear it was a moment of Hope. Let's Get Back To Walk Alone.. Wherever Forever ........Robin

Aatheera Joined Wed 10/06/21 Posts: 356	Wed 10/27/21 08:47 AM
Feeling her presence close in me, With the flow of wind as her soul entering in me. Body has frozen eyes is closed, Feeling her My heart arouse. Breath is sensing deeper in enclose.. She is not here, opening eyes.. Oh Dear it was a moment of Hope. Let's Get Back To Walk Alone.. Wherever ♥ Forever ........Robin Admired it as always Robin but reality could be felt hard towards the end...

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2629	Wed 10/27/21 02:12 PM
I always enjoy reading your prose. Thanks for sharing. Thanks for reading and commenting, Storm. I'm glad you enjoy what I share.

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2629	Wed 10/27/21 02:19 PM
so well written, Nice Your kind feedback is appreciated, Aatheera.

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2629	Wed 10/27/21 02:21 PM
Very well written Thanks for your thoughtful assessment, Tammy.

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2629	Wed 10/27/21 02:24 PM
SUPER I thank you for your kind feedback, Robin.

Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54283	Thu 10/28/21 07:37 AM
I thank you for your kind feedback, Robin. I'm Thankful To You Too Keep The Spirit On

Unknow Joined Tue 04/28/20 Posts: 2930	Fri 10/29/21 01:04 AM
Lovely Techno. I must admit, I read it elsewhere.

Silentshadowss Joined Sat 11/28/15 Posts: 2	Fri 10/29/21 01:51 AM
Beautifully penned Techno. Thank you

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2629	Wed 11/03/21 04:57 PM
Lovely Techno. I must admit, I read it elsewhere. Thank you my friend.

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2629	Wed 11/03/21 07:24 PM
Beautifully penned Techno. Thank you Your kind feedback is appreciated, silentshadowss.

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