Topic: Souls
velbar's photo
Wed 10/20/21 11:58 AM
Souls
 
I ponder,
On the colour
of our soul
I wonder
 
God is light
and God is life
God gave us a soul
He breathed us whole
 
Light is bright, it's white
Broken into a spectrum
of colour delight
Skin tone is a broken drum
 
God sees only our soul
In that He finds delight
and a personal relationship
also commitment, without fight
 
No age on your soul
No wrinkles or fat
I kind of like that
Live forever the goal

velbar

Apple of Your EYES's photo
Wed 10/20/21 12:07 PM
Souls
 
I ponder,
On the colour
of our soul
I wonder
 
God is light
and God is life
God gave us a soul
He breathed us whole
 
Light is bright, it's white
Broken into a spectrum
of colour delight
Skin tone is a broken drum
 
God sees only our soul
In that He finds delight
and a personal relationship
also commitment, without fight
 
No age on your soul
No wrinkles or fat
I kind of like that
Live forever the goal

velbar

Nice Poem Velbar.God bless you .

Aatheera's photo
Wed 10/20/21 12:31 PM
loved it ❤ adorable

JulieABush's photo
Wed 10/20/21 01:46 PM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

no photo
Wed 10/20/21 05:33 PM
Excellent Velbar!:angel: :angel: :angel:

Welcome to Playground btw!!!waving

no photo
Wed 10/20/21 07:27 PM
Beautiful. ❣❣❣

Laska Paul 's photo
Thu 10/21/21 02:17 AM

Souls
 
I ponder,
On the colour
of our soul
I wonder
 
God is light
and God is life
God gave us a soul
He breathed us whole
 
Light is bright, it's white
Broken into a spectrum
of colour delight
Skin tone is a broken drum
 
God sees only our soul
In that He finds delight
and a personal relationship
also commitment, without fight
 
No age on your soul
No wrinkles or fat
I kind of like that
Live forever the goal

velbar


I don't remember the last time I read something as GOOD as This Poem.
Your Poem makes me Think of Everything .
My Words won't be Enough.
This was More than enough for me to Read for myself.
One more thing I do want to add .
All Those who have commented here ARE POETS AND WRITERS ,
Only Me , I'm NOT..
THANKS ALOT..