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Topic: Trust no one cares!
Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Sun 10/10/21 03:32 AM
Stars on the sky were few, Emotions in my life were not new! Rose buds in my garden were not that bright, God's word in my life never goes off sight! Squirrels from nearby trees did not sing, But angels in my dream looked wise without a wing! The sun was shining bright when rain was pouring, Disappointments in my life never keep fading! A glass of water into my dry throat gave a wild cough, Writing poems kept my worries turn peaceful half! Tears and fears are common for many, Realised will fate be so funny! Remember that all of us need kindness, But life ends up only in loneliness! Fly away for your dreams and touch the sky, And trust that no one cares even if you die! - Aatheera

Unknow Joined Tue 04/28/20 Posts: 2929	Sun 10/10/21 03:37 AM
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Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Sun 10/10/21 04:08 AM
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Unknow Joined Thu 07/13/17 Posts: 4	Sun 10/10/21 11:01 AM
EXACTLY CORRECT

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3548	Sun 10/10/21 01:29 PM
Nice poem .

Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Sun 10/10/21 10:41 PM
Nice poem . Thank you dear ☺

Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Sun 10/10/21 10:51 PM
EXACTLY CORRECT

Unknow Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54502	Mon 10/11/21 09:31 AM
Did i build it so fair, that was enough to know, it won't care... Carefully ahead. Sun, Sky, Clouds, Stars. Wind, Air, Water & Glass. Squirrel, Garden, Flowers, Tears, Fears, Lonely, Kind... Oh God! Life & Death also got involve.... But was no space for a moment, of Time the big healer.. Was i so much that went Blind. Death Is True For Every Live. Let me once again get a space to Build that again won't lead, Nobody Cares Even If You..... I'm The Time

Unknow Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54502	Mon 10/11/21 09:34 AM
PAINFUL Unfortunatly Truth Of Life NICE

Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Mon 10/11/21 12:07 PM
Did i build it so fair, that was enough to know, it won't care... Carefully ahead. Sun, Sky, Clouds, Stars. Wind, Air, Water & Glass. Squirrel, Garden, Flowers, Tears, Fears, Lonely, Kind... Oh God! Life & Death also got involve.... But was no space for a moment, of Time the big healer.. Was i so much that went Blind. Death Is True For Every Live. Let me once again get a space to Build that again won't lead, Nobody Cares Even If You..... I'm The Time 🖌 wisely framed☺ Keep Radiating Robin

Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Mon 10/11/21 12:09 PM
PAINFUL Unfortunatly Truth Of Life NICE rightly said

Unknow Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54502	Tue 10/12/21 12:53 AM


Unknow Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54502	Mon 10/25/21 12:59 PM
Trust No One Cares. The path of love & care is very difficult to get, Day by Day its keeps getting bonding, Heart keep saying go on loving and live every moment from heart by truely joy. Yes, i believe Love is like Blessings from God. Can't be seen but can be feeled. Love & Care. It's different from everything It changes the Life🖤 No. Trust It SomeOne Cares For YOU .........Robin..........

Aatheera Joined Wed 10/06/21 Posts: 356	Mon 10/25/21 01:22 PM
Trust No One Cares. The path of love & care is very difficult to get, Day by Day its keeps getting bonding, Heart keep saying go on loving and live every moment from heart by truely joy. Yes, i believe Love is like Blessings from God. Can't be seen but can be feeled. Love & Care. It's different from everything It changes the Life No. Trust It SomeOne Cares For YOU ✝ .........Robin.......... Rightly expressed in the best way Keep Radiating Robin

Unknow Joined Mon 11/16/20 Posts: 38	Fri 10/29/21 08:21 AM
Nice and some touchy and thought provoking lines... As one of the poetry fan told earlier, some poetry will attract us by its simplicity and some poetry by making us to search for its meaning.. for me your lines fall in both categories

Aatheera Joined Wed 10/06/21 Posts: 356	Fri 10/29/21 09:07 AM
Nice and some touchy and thought provoking lines... As one of the poetry fan told earlier, some poetry will attract us by its simplicity and some poetry by making us to search for its meaning.. for me your lines fall in both categories Thank you Nice to know that you enjoyed it..

Unknow Joined Tue 06/11/19 Posts: 465	Fri 10/29/21 10:56 AM
Exactly how I feel. We are just a little atom in the atmosphere. Once gone from this world we are all just dust in the wind. Some days I wonder if it matters if I am here at all, but my dog keeps me trudging along.

Aatheera Joined Wed 10/06/21 Posts: 356	Fri 10/29/21 11:40 PM
Exactly how I feel. We are just a little atom in the atmosphere. Once gone from this world we are all just dust in the wind. Some days I wonder if it matters if I am here at all, but my dog keeps me trudging along. rightly said Cjbay that made me write it out as well.. when moments are hopeless, trusting on God's promising love keeps us moving finally.. have good times take care,

Unknow Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54502	Mon 12/20/21 11:02 PM