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Topic: Rain and YOU! ☺😇
Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Tue 10/12/21 08:42 AM
after a hectic day, its nice to see your version of RAIN showering peacefully☺ well composed n NICE Robin

Unknow Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54502	Tue 10/12/21 09:22 AM


JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3682	Wed 10/13/21 03:32 AM
Nice poem Robin .

Unknow Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54502	Wed 10/13/21 05:02 AM
Nice poem Robin . @JulieABush Thank You I'm confuse how did i thought it. Tc.

Unknow Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54502	Wed 10/27/21 01:09 AM
Presence of felt Is starting to melt. Need to fix a belt together Locked forever as salt in soil. Taste of flavours Love of forever ...........Robin Poet Aatheera

Aatheera Joined Wed 10/06/21 Posts: 356	Wed 10/27/21 01:27 AM
Depth of meaning in the lines salt in soil, you have gone beyond what I felt while writing my version of Rain.. Loved it Robin

Unknow Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54502	Wed 10/27/21 01:45 AM


JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3682	Wed 10/27/21 03:24 AM
Nice one Robin .

Unknow Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54502	Wed 10/27/21 10:04 AM
Nice one Robin . Thank You JulieABush

Unknow Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54502	Wed 10/27/21 10:04 AM
Feeling her presence close in me, With the flow of wind as her soul entering in me. Body has frozen eyes is closed, Feeling her My heart arouse. Breath is sensing deeper in enclose.. She is not here, opening eyes.. Oh Dear it was a moment of Hope. Let's Get Back To Walk Alone.. Wherever Forever ........Robin

Aatheera Joined Wed 10/06/21 Posts: 356	Wed 10/27/21 10:39 AM
Feeling her presence close in me, With the flow of wind as her soul entering in me. Body has frozen eyes is closed, Feeling her My heart arouse. Breath is sensing deeper in enclose.. She is not here, opening eyes.. Oh Dear it was a moment of Hope. Let's Get Back To Walk Alone.. Wherever ♥ Forever ........Robin ☺ Robin

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3682	Wed 10/27/21 12:09 PM
Again nice poem Robin .

Unknow Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54502	Thu 10/28/21 01:00 AM
Again nice poem Robin . Thank You

Unknow Joined Sat 11/28/15 Posts: 2	Fri 10/29/21 01:46 AM
Rain calms a parching mind, symbolic to creation(s) and life. You happened to weave your thoughts beautifully Thank you for sharing @Aatheera

Aatheera Joined Wed 10/06/21 Posts: 356	Fri 10/29/21 09:08 AM
Rain calms a parching mind, symbolic to creation(s) and life. You happened to weave your thoughts beautifully Thank you for sharing @Aatheera Thank you

Unknow Joined Mon 11/16/20 Posts: 38	Fri 10/29/21 09:55 AM
The rain how so ever it falls from the sky, knows it all, the solace it cause on the earth by its presence... after all it remembers its own formation.... the harsh heat that water on the earth had to face to reach the sky and form the rain

Unknow Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54502	Sat 11/27/21 12:31 AM
You are their so far, I'm here so apart, Feeling's of an Art, Doing by Heart. All those sweet Talks, The together of our Walks, Holded hand in hand Sort, Maken moment of Joyful. The rain on beach we Sat, Opening of Umbrella in That, The feel of your finger In Contact, Eye to Eye silence of Talk. Ahead of Movements, As sun was going Down, Evening was getting Surround, Breezes were dancing Around. We where Lost in Each other, While walking way to Home, Suddenly when a strong wind, Made us grab Umbrella Strong. It wasn't the hold over Umbrella, We both knew we were stronging the Heart, Which was trying to bring Us Closers, To feel like we have lost in Each other's HEART. Rain an YOU Those moment of views........ ..........ARobinA

Unknow Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54502	Thu 12/09/21 02:26 AM
I'm here alone You their alone But our love bond Has keeping alive The moment of touch Feelings of fertilizers Like a farm's are ready To blossom of seeds The roots are nourishing Into the mud soil Like Your Care & Love Nutrients Me in My Life. .......For You Robin

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3682	Thu 12/09/21 03:42 AM
Nice poems Robin .

Apple of Your EYES Joined Mon 03/15/21 Posts: 5477	Thu 12/09/21 03:52 AM
very good Poems Aathera and Robin