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Topic: Rain and YOU! ☺😇
Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Tue 10/05/21 09:14 AM
Does the rain knew that the soil was dry, But still it nourishes the soil with its goodness so high! Did you know that I was confused yester-day, Your messages had millions of hope to say! Does the rain knew that the plants were about to die, But still it assures life to the plants as it passes-by! Did you know that I had worries and tears, Your words keep healing me without any fears! Does the rain knew that the deep well was unused and dry, But still it fills the well abundantly from the sky! Did you know that I was lonely and sick, Your care and attention is always quick! Does the rain knew that I will relate it with your love, But still it made me do it by pouring continuously from above! Did you know that YOU and the Rain are my favorites to cherish, As both brings some spark and joy which keeps me well nourished! - Aatheera

McSeanMD Joined Thu 09/30/21 Posts: 110	Tue 10/05/21 09:29 AM
amazing! love the vibes

Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54503	Tue 10/05/21 09:37 AM
SUPER So YOU did it again Poet atheer

Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Tue 10/05/21 12:48 PM
amazing! love the vibes Thanks a ton

Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Tue 10/05/21 12:49 PM
SUPER So YOU did it again Poet atheer Thankful to you always ☺

Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54503	Tue 10/05/21 01:44 PM
THANK YOU TOO

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3200	Tue 10/05/21 02:58 PM
Nice poem .

Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Tue 10/05/21 07:08 PM
Nice poem . Thank you dear ☺

Laska Paul Joined Sun 11/08/20 Posts: 19884	Wed 10/06/21 03:53 AM
Beauty isn't about having a Pretty Face Its all about having a Pretty Mind , a Pretty Heart and a Pretty Soul Keep your work Rolling ON........

Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Wed 10/06/21 06:08 AM
Beauty isn't about having a Pretty Face Its all about having a Pretty Mind , a Pretty Heart and a Pretty Soul Keep your work Rolling ON........ Thanks

Praz Joined Wed 07/21/21 Posts: 1	Wed 10/06/21 03:51 PM
Nice one !!

Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Wed 10/06/21 07:44 PM
Nice one !! Thankyou,

Vibes Joined Mon 05/31/21 Posts: 48881	Wed 10/06/21 08:01 PM
The poem was exotic. I think u wrote it keeping in mind your hubby. Nice lyrics and comparison. Keep it up.well done.

Traveller Joined Fri 05/06/16 Posts: 1	Wed 10/06/21 08:02 PM
Nice metaphor for the rains Aatheera. Nice style of writing

Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Wed 10/06/21 08:09 PM
The poem was exotic. I think u wrote it keeping in mind your hubby. Nice lyrics and comparison. Keep it up.well done. Thankyou

Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Wed 10/06/21 08:10 PM
Nice metaphor for the rains Aatheera. Nice style of writing Thankyou

Ramesh Joined Wed 09/15/21 Posts: 3	Wed 10/06/21 08:20 PM
Good one!!

Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Thu 10/07/21 02:04 AM
Good one!! Thank you

Jay Joined Mon 09/07/20 Posts: 2	Thu 10/07/21 02:30 AM
Does the rain knew that the soil was dry, But still it nourishes the soil with its goodness so high! Did you know that I was confused yester-day, Your messages had millions of hope to say! Does the rain knew that the plants were about to die, But still it assures life to the plants as it passes-by! Did you know that I had worries and tears, Your words keep healing me without any fears! Does the rain knew that the deep well was unused and dry, But still it fills the well abundantly from the sky! Did you know that I was lonely and sick, Your care and attention is always quick! Does the rain knew that I will relate it with your love, But still it made me do it by pouring continuously from above! Did you know that YOU and the Rain are my favorites to cherish, As both brings some spark and joy which keeps me well nourished! - Aatheera wen love rains down on our lives everything changes .. everything bcm lively suddenly .. like the sprouts out of the dry mud .. nice lines indeed !! more to cm fr u

Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54503	Tue 10/12/21 08:08 AM
YOU Small Small drops have started falling, Just see the Love Rain is started. Slowly Slowly YOU will understand Me, The way You are thinking, i'm not like that type. Day by Day YOU will start believing. I am in YOU & YOU in ME YOU The was one who found a sense in my nonsense too. I know your silence way of saying No meant Yes. Slowly Slowly I'm understanding YOU YOU in ME & I in YOU ..........atheer.......... Raining Rain