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Topic: my favourite colours and YOU❤
Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Sun 09/26/21 03:11 AM
Pink roses so fresh, Your first message amidst the morning rush! Red apples in the table, That deep love which keeps me stable! Yellow lemons in that chilled glass, That warm smile makes me forget my past! Green grass with it's fragrance so deep, That care which makes me weep! Orange bangles on my hand, Your humourous nature holds us well bond! Black car of mine, That wild look from your eyes makes me shine! Violet tulips in my garden, Your commitment on me has no end! Blue kajal on my eyes, Your never ending responsibility for me so nice! -Aatheera

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3200	Sun 09/26/21 03:40 AM
Nice poem .

Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54503	Sun 09/26/21 04:21 AM
NICE

Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Sun 09/26/21 05:16 AM
Nice poem . Thankyou dear ☺

Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Sun 09/26/21 05:16 AM
NICE ✌ Thankyou ☺

Laska Paul Joined Sun 11/08/20 Posts: 19884	Mon 09/27/21 05:28 AM
Its True that , A Poet looks at the World the way a Man Looks at a Woman. I'm Pressed ( Impressed )

Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Mon 09/27/21 08:23 AM
Its True that , A Poet looks at the World the way a Man Looks at a Woman. I'm Pressed ( Impressed ) first excitement was when you addressed me as a poet "a dream come true moment" ☺ second, my creation had impressed you ☺ Thanks a ton in-spired

Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54503	Tue 09/28/21 04:10 AM
Give me some sunshine, Give me some rain, Give me an other chance, I wanna grow up once again...

Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Tue 09/28/21 04:45 AM
Give me some sunshine, Give me some rain, Give me an other chance, I wanna grow up once again... 🌧🌧 ha ha .. now explain me what's this for

Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54503	Tue 09/28/21 05:28 AM
When i will understand it i will let you know, trying to be poet... But not like You Best.. tc.

Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Tue 09/28/21 06:16 AM
When i will understand it i will let you know, trying to be poet... But not like You Best.. tc. Thanks a ton for boosting me now n then, it really keeps me going☺ and I'm just learning to write poems from you and everyone here who bring up such wonderful versions here.. I ensure I read all of them which is the best part of my day coming to your lines, when I first read it, sounded like that voice of a seed which dreams of sprouting again when motivation is within us, life always will be wished to be lived again as you said

Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54503	Tue 09/28/21 07:01 AM
@Aatheera first of all thankful to you. Secondly i never can be better from you, nor as a poet no chance, nor a great human like you. Yes its true, most of reading post inspires an gives a learning full lesson too... You are best, you were the best, you have a been always the best.. Will be waiting for your another poem of the fragrance of soil. Keep It Up Keep Smiling..

Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Tue 09/28/21 07:35 AM
@Aatheera first of all thankful to you. Secondly i never can be better from you, nor as a poet no chance, nor a great human like you. Yes its true, most of reading post inspires an gives a learning full lesson too... You are best, you were the best, you have a been always the best.. Will be waiting for your another poem of the fragrance of soil. Keep It Up Keep Smiling.. Thanks again best part of you is motivating people.. this i realised from your messages to people who are down n those who needed kindness..always remember that so many of them including me are touched by your thoughtful msgs.. well, I will try my best to give you my fragrance of soil version soon☺ take care, keep motivating us☺

Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54503	Tue 09/28/21 07:46 AM
Now you will make me cry... I'm not doing anything great, Just a simple human.. Now lets stop chating here an let the whole viewers read an feel the imagination of YOU & Your Talent. THANK YOU Poetries.....

Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Tue 09/28/21 08:39 AM
Now you will make me cry... I'm not doing anything great, Just a simple human.. Now lets stop chating here an let the whole viewers read an feel the imagination of YOU & Your Talent. THANK YOU Poetries..... ha ha.. true, was about to say that <end>

Unknow Joined Tue 04/28/20 Posts: 2930	Thu 09/30/21 05:57 PM
So gorgeous and creative

Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Thu 09/30/21 09:12 PM
So gorgeous and creative ❤ Thankyou

Unknow Joined Thu 07/13/17 Posts: 4	Wed 10/06/21 10:47 PM
Nice one

Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Thu 10/07/21 02:03 AM
Nice one Thanks

Unknow Joined Sun 07/23/17 Posts: 2	Thu 10/07/21 06:56 AM
A very good one